Poems About Anxiety Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about anxiety seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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Betty
Poem Published
Today 11:56am
Today 11:56am
Die with a smile
Your hot cum
cools quickly as we
scramble up the
fire escape stairs
to the club’s roof
my chest still displaced from
the sonic commotion of the
bass drop
my face pink from the
rush of a thousand people
cheering in one
fist pumping
entity
as you fucked me
while the DJ remixed
something poignant into
something primal
the sky lightens
and the hazard alarms
blare danger
loud enough to drown the
club music pulsing under our feet
my legs buckle a little
as...
cools quickly as we
scramble up the
fire escape stairs
to the club’s roof
my chest still displaced from
the sonic commotion of the
bass drop
my face pink from the
rush of a thousand people
cheering in one
fist pumping
entity
as you fucked me
while the DJ remixed
something poignant into
something primal
the sky lightens
and the hazard alarms
blare danger
loud enough to drown the
club music pulsing under our feet
my legs buckle a little
as...
#anxiety
#fear
#hope
#ILoveYou
#obsession
34 reads
1 Comment
Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
6th May 2025 6:51pm
6th May 2025 6:51pm
Stalked 3
My new life reshaped
I finally made it here
I thought I had escaped
Running from my fear
Lying still motionless
As my friends said good bye
Empty and emotionless
Tears on my coffin cry
But then a voice spoke
Hidden within the shadows
Clouds of smoke choke
And released the gallows
My mind started racing
As a new journey began
My memory was retracing
Paranoia stronger than
My old fears shifted
Realizing what I've done
My life that was gifted
Confused thoughts unspun
My afterlife in trouble ...
I finally made it here
I thought I had escaped
Running from my fear
Lying still motionless
As my friends said good bye
Empty and emotionless
Tears on my coffin cry
But then a voice spoke
Hidden within the shadows
Clouds of smoke choke
And released the gallows
My mind started racing
As a new journey began
My memory was retracing
Paranoia stronger than
My old fears shifted
Realizing what I've done
My life that was gifted
Confused thoughts unspun
My afterlife in trouble ...
#anxiety
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PAR
Poem Published
4th May 2025 11:43am
4th May 2025 11:43am
Whatsoever Drifts
Whatsoever rises, whatsoever falls,
the tide carries both, never asking why.
Whatsoever I seek, whatsoever I find,
whatsoever lingers, whispers through my mind.
Whatsoever lingers, whatsoever fades,
names whispered in the wind, forgotten by the shore.
Whatsoever is given, whatsoever is lost,
whatsoever is weighed never counting the cost.
Whatsoever is lost, whatsoever remains,
shadows stretched by longing, light bending in time.
Whatsoever it takes, whatsoever it gives,
whatsoever it breaks, yet still...
the tide carries both, never asking why.
Whatsoever I seek, whatsoever I find,
whatsoever lingers, whispers through my mind.
Whatsoever lingers, whatsoever fades,
names whispered in the wind, forgotten by the shore.
Whatsoever is given, whatsoever is lost,
whatsoever is weighed never counting the cost.
Whatsoever is lost, whatsoever remains,
shadows stretched by longing, light bending in time.
Whatsoever it takes, whatsoever it gives,
whatsoever it breaks, yet still...
#anxiety
#dreams
#nightmares #utopia
#nightmares #utopia
85 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st May 2025 00:42am
1st May 2025 00:42am
A Disturbed Mind
WHO really knows what goes on inside some people's mind, thoughts of them fighting and killing at well against imagines, that only they see in the dark deepness of insanity. For it's true as hell has finally broken wide open, by the actions of some people's, bringing death and destruction, that is seen in todays society. For sure society has really grown cold as ice, with some people's filled with rage and anger that you take a chance, to even go outside, 🤨 to catch a bus or ride on a train or going for a quiet walk, just to breathe and feel the sun upon your s of skin and face....
#anxiety
#bipolar
#depression
#MentalHealth
#nightmares
65 reads
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summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
28th Apr 2025 8:04pm
28th Apr 2025 8:04pm
~from a miscellany day’s eclectic ensemble…
1.
the weekend’s gecko vibe continues..
still in a shivering horror, in the corner
of this a herpetophobic mind.. rings
terrific bells as I cross this bedroom
each time.. wondering, has this gecko
taken a refuge in there.. or better to
say, has conquered the room in reality..
2.
a delicate dipteran like a transparent
tiny midge, over my mobile touchscreen..
suffering in sticky traps of a droplet water..
& ah, this pure Buddhist~ Jainist hybrid
of a practicing Hindu... tries to...
the weekend’s gecko vibe continues..
still in a shivering horror, in the corner
of this a herpetophobic mind.. rings
terrific bells as I cross this bedroom
each time.. wondering, has this gecko
taken a refuge in there.. or better to
say, has conquered the room in reality..
2.
a delicate dipteran like a transparent
tiny midge, over my mobile touchscreen..
suffering in sticky traps of a droplet water..
& ah, this pure Buddhist~ Jainist hybrid
of a practicing Hindu... tries to...
#anxiety
#dark
#death
#humankind
#job
87 reads
1 Comment
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
27th Apr 2025 10:48pm
27th Apr 2025 10:48pm
It's Spring, that means wearing lighter colors, that scares me
The honest truth is I love wearing black
All black, a splash of color here and there
Nothing crazy though, that's for others to pull off
It scares me a little, light colors, optimism
I have to work in to it
I'll get there, give me a little time
Light blue really scares the shit out of me
It took me years to wear boat shoes
They are quite comfortable
Even got compliments on the colors
There's no black boat shoes though
I looked ...
All black, a splash of color here and there
Nothing crazy though, that's for others to pull off
It scares me a little, light colors, optimism
I have to work in to it
I'll get there, give me a little time
Light blue really scares the shit out of me
It took me years to wear boat shoes
They are quite comfortable
Even got compliments on the colors
There's no black boat shoes though
I looked ...
#anxiety
#PopCulture
#spring
140 reads
14 Comments
george4man2box
Poem Published
27th Apr 2025 8:33pm
27th Apr 2025 8:33pm
Alexa down volume!
She, the brainchild of Rohit Prasad -
India-born person who breathed life
into Alexa, and lead technology side
of project almost from its inception.
Amazon Alexa Echo
a marvel of voice activation technology,
(reportedly voiced by Nina Rolle,
a voice actress and singer
based in Boulder, Colorado,
though neither Amazon
nor Rolle officially
confirmed nor denied rumor).
Aforementioned electrical engineer
recognized as being a key figure
leading the technology side of the project
and the AI that powers it, ...
India-born person who breathed life
into Alexa, and lead technology side
of project almost from its inception.
Amazon Alexa Echo
a marvel of voice activation technology,
(reportedly voiced by Nina Rolle,
a voice actress and singer
based in Boulder, Colorado,
though neither Amazon
nor Rolle officially
confirmed nor denied rumor).
Aforementioned electrical engineer
recognized as being a key figure
leading the technology side of the project
and the AI that powers it, ...
#anxiety
#apathy
#fate
#ThrillSeeking
#weakness
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Apr 2025 9:34pm
26th Apr 2025 9:34pm
A Broken Heart
How can you mend a broken heart, filled with so much, hurt and anger and anxiety and pain, by not playing mind games that has, been broken so many times. THAT the heart is filled with pain that never really heals. 💔 For sure it's necessary to understand, that it's a lot of people's who have been abused, mentally and emotionally and physically and spiritually, till they become a broken heart 💔 filled with so much pain and hurt and anger, like a person living on the edge of existence. 🤔 For sure it's happening more often than we know, yet it's not something to ignore,...
#anger
#anxiety
#dark
#depression
#hate
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Mrd
Poem Published
26th Apr 2025 3:30am
26th Apr 2025 3:30am
dreaming of mother
it did not happen that way
or I would have remembered it so
you were always so fond of the lie
which put toe into truth, cold truth,
and fashioned straw snowmen
which didn't exist
can you not rip that memory
from that cardboard covered thing
you recorded all those shall we say
delusions? No one wished to kill
you as you slept so why the mawkish dummies that you made
of clothing beneath the spread--they
would have fooled no one
as you sought trembling sleep ...
or I would have remembered it so
you were always so fond of the lie
which put toe into truth, cold truth,
and fashioned straw snowmen
which didn't exist
can you not rip that memory
from that cardboard covered thing
you recorded all those shall we say
delusions? No one wished to kill
you as you slept so why the mawkish dummies that you made
of clothing beneath the spread--they
would have fooled no one
as you sought trembling sleep ...
#addiction
#anxiety
#disability
#illness
#MentalHealth
52 reads
3 Comments
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
25th Apr 2025 11:11pm
25th Apr 2025 11:11pm
Restless
It's a familiar, and thus probably unsurprising combination of emotions:
restless boredom, unless thoroughly engaged in multiple absorbing projects
(preferably academic); resigned to settling for less, somehow;
knowing my worth, how well I work,
yet feeling that I deserve this.
And the inadequacy. Always, inadequacy.
But then, logically speaking,
why would I
feel superior
anyway?!
restless boredom, unless thoroughly engaged in multiple absorbing projects
(preferably academic); resigned to settling for less, somehow;
knowing my worth, how well I work,
yet feeling that I deserve this.
And the inadequacy. Always, inadequacy.
But then, logically speaking,
why would I
feel superior
anyway?!
#anxiety
#job
#LifeGoals #LifeStruggles
#LifeGoals #LifeStruggles
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PAR
Poem Published
25th Apr 2025 1:55pm
25th Apr 2025 1:55pm
December Roses
You were there in the middle of the roses,
like a dragon that doesn't speak any language,
as if a cat had eaten your tongue,
as if at all costs you wanted
to learn the language of flowers...
and all the roses smelled of blood
and all the air circulated in veins...
you were there in the middle
of the reddest of crimsons.
Not even the blue of your eyes
could compete with it.
Only the deep black of your dreams
had the nerve to disguise itself
as a thorn among so many roses.
like a dragon that doesn't speak any language,
as if a cat had eaten your tongue,
as if at all costs you wanted
to learn the language of flowers...
and all the roses smelled of blood
and all the air circulated in veins...
you were there in the middle
of the reddest of crimsons.
Not even the blue of your eyes
could compete with it.
Only the deep black of your dreams
had the nerve to disguise itself
as a thorn among so many roses.
#anxiety
#flowers
#mirror #rose
#mirror #rose
147 reads
6 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2025 00:55am
23rd Apr 2025 00:55am
deeper
Disastrous thoughts collide within me
to face it head-on or bury it
a thistle of thorns, my cloud
My happiness, taken by an awful feeling
shrouded in gloom, it picks
Dreaded doom, it flowers
It's anxiety's trick and power
terrorizing my peace of mind
Thoughts of a dangerous nature threaten
My soul huddles against it
It's unnatural how homey the dark feels
honesties glare burns
hideous understanding
I am the devil of my own making
crisis of faith turns me mute
With nothing to answer against it ...
to face it head-on or bury it
a thistle of thorns, my cloud
My happiness, taken by an awful feeling
shrouded in gloom, it picks
Dreaded doom, it flowers
It's anxiety's trick and power
terrorizing my peace of mind
Thoughts of a dangerous nature threaten
My soul huddles against it
It's unnatural how homey the dark feels
honesties glare burns
hideous understanding
I am the devil of my own making
crisis of faith turns me mute
With nothing to answer against it ...
#anxiety
#dark
87 reads
2 Comments
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