Poems About Aliens Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about aliens seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 8:32pm
15th Sep 2024 8:32pm
Mind Altering Drugs
I saw today aliens wearing bad toupee's
they were having a foursome on the beach
I just watched
The waves were meh, so I just stared
One of the aliens was butt fucking the other alien,
came real fast and decided to go to the snack bar
I asked him where were they were from, he said, "Way past Uranus"!
I think he was kidding but then again, maybe he was insulting me
I saw him order antelope soup and a drink called yellow passion
Not sure what that was except,
when I ordered one, it tasted like piss
Actually it was piss!! ...
they were having a foursome on the beach
I just watched
The waves were meh, so I just stared
One of the aliens was butt fucking the other alien,
came real fast and decided to go to the snack bar
I asked him where were they were from, he said, "Way past Uranus"!
I think he was kidding but then again, maybe he was insulting me
I saw him order antelope soup and a drink called yellow passion
Not sure what that was except,
when I ordered one, it tasted like piss
Actually it was piss!! ...
#aliens
#drugs
#fiction
#scifi
#funny
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11 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 2:43am
15th Sep 2024 2:43am
stars
inside is grievous I lull myself to sleep
entertaining ghosts and demons
thoughts of midnight's best
requested to be present
witnessing a star system I don't recognize
fearing release from my mortal tomb
when the door opens how many spirit children will be released with me
where are they going are some going to a different star?
are some going to a black hole for being destructive forces of nature?
where am I going? I just don't want my memories taken again
with only flashbacks I don't want to be a solitary creature again it was...
entertaining ghosts and demons
thoughts of midnight's best
requested to be present
witnessing a star system I don't recognize
fearing release from my mortal tomb
when the door opens how many spirit children will be released with me
where are they going are some going to a different star?
are some going to a black hole for being destructive forces of nature?
where am I going? I just don't want my memories taken again
with only flashbacks I don't want to be a solitary creature again it was...
#aliens
#shadows
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Sep 2024 7:23pm
13th Sep 2024 7:23pm
The Last Upper
Jesus had a huge supper, with large amounts of uppers
Cocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamine
The aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special day
They offered him food, drink & loads of drugs
Most disciples were upset with this and walked out
A few stayed for the debauchery
There were also punks, metal heads, hip artists and free thinkers at this gathering
Such unity, democracy, in one social gathering
The image I included here is the original Leonardo da Vinci painting that showcased what was really happening during...
Cocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamine
The aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special day
They offered him food, drink & loads of drugs
Most disciples were upset with this and walked out
A few stayed for the debauchery
There were also punks, metal heads, hip artists and free thinkers at this gathering
Such unity, democracy, in one social gathering
The image I included here is the original Leonardo da Vinci painting that showcased what was really happening during...
#aliens
#God
#nonfiction
#scifi
#TruthOfLife
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
12th Sep 2024 5:28pm
12th Sep 2024 5:28pm
tingle
tingles on my body tell me something is up
shadows cross my path
and my lively spirit buddies hush
when usually have plenty to say
I get chilled
it doesn't feel like anyone is there
it feels like emptiness
a hole where matter should be
I know someone is trying a sneak attack
or it could possibly be a discussion
they know better than to send their goons
with their slimy business card
a peace negotiation has been on the table for a long time
these beings have refused to come in
and my father says it's too late ...
shadows cross my path
and my lively spirit buddies hush
when usually have plenty to say
I get chilled
it doesn't feel like anyone is there
it feels like emptiness
a hole where matter should be
I know someone is trying a sneak attack
or it could possibly be a discussion
they know better than to send their goons
with their slimy business card
a peace negotiation has been on the table for a long time
these beings have refused to come in
and my father says it's too late ...
#aliens
#earth
#shadows #stars
#shadows #stars
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2 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
11th Sep 2024 10:42pm
11th Sep 2024 10:42pm
a darkling speaks up
my missing quotient isn't my soul but a part of me
multifaceted refracted shades of my pneuma
reflecting my multidimensional personalities
you watch on and you recognize that the driving force of me is not present
it dismays my sacredness
hurt inside I await her patiently to return
she has either gone real deep inside me
or has crossed into another dimension to rectify things
lingers the feelings I've been through quite a lot
and I can't ascribe it to mental health
when none or the other patients are like me
I have...
multifaceted refracted shades of my pneuma
reflecting my multidimensional personalities
you watch on and you recognize that the driving force of me is not present
it dismays my sacredness
hurt inside I await her patiently to return
she has either gone real deep inside me
or has crossed into another dimension to rectify things
lingers the feelings I've been through quite a lot
and I can't ascribe it to mental health
when none or the other patients are like me
I have...
#aliens
#vampires
#witches
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5 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
10th Sep 2024 11:52pm
10th Sep 2024 11:52pm
Origins
indecision troubles me
multifaceted like all of us
given the situation my soul has choices
avoiding the dark stuff
I try to see the light in others eyes
and if there's none
I'm not afraid I still see some value in them
I've come to calm your ire
meet with me with a sacrifice of self
your grief and emptiness flood my senses
my tears to cleanse you not of your darkness
but your guilt
we are made of flesh and blood
your soul is confused if you think you're the problem
secrets of rusted pennies
sent down...
multifaceted like all of us
given the situation my soul has choices
avoiding the dark stuff
I try to see the light in others eyes
and if there's none
I'm not afraid I still see some value in them
I've come to calm your ire
meet with me with a sacrifice of self
your grief and emptiness flood my senses
my tears to cleanse you not of your darkness
but your guilt
we are made of flesh and blood
your soul is confused if you think you're the problem
secrets of rusted pennies
sent down...
#aliens
#moon
#shadows
#stars
#universe
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2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
31st Aug 2024 3:36am
31st Aug 2024 3:36am
view
you're a bastard loitering in the lobby of my soul
speaking a derelict language
a pornographic thought in confession
I will exorcise you, lewd vagrant
occult worshipers of disbelief,
the faithful pay you to stay and plague my existence
my womb is polluted by your hate slogans
despiser of womankind be gone
with an animalistic lure you wreak havoc
the noise is infected with your inflicted glory
turning in the energies masquerading as truth
you spew from the pulpits soulful larceny
offering the masses fairy stories...
speaking a derelict language
a pornographic thought in confession
I will exorcise you, lewd vagrant
occult worshipers of disbelief,
the faithful pay you to stay and plague my existence
my womb is polluted by your hate slogans
despiser of womankind be gone
with an animalistic lure you wreak havoc
the noise is infected with your inflicted glory
turning in the energies masquerading as truth
you spew from the pulpits soulful larceny
offering the masses fairy stories...
#aliens
#dystopian
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
30th Aug 2024 7:59pm
30th Aug 2024 7:59pm
mystery
beautiful chaos I can't stay the same
my personalities are different faces of me
multidimensional lady of the other worldly
star falling inviting the celestial
space is deep and endless
I'm tethered to this world
but I can still rise to meet the sky
even in my binds
advised not to touch the hot stuff or black stuff
but that is where I am most alive
Dante's Inferno is a beautiful artistic version of hell
but it is a revolving door where people are soon released
and they're here again
mostly their agenda is to...
my personalities are different faces of me
multidimensional lady of the other worldly
star falling inviting the celestial
space is deep and endless
I'm tethered to this world
but I can still rise to meet the sky
even in my binds
advised not to touch the hot stuff or black stuff
but that is where I am most alive
Dante's Inferno is a beautiful artistic version of hell
but it is a revolving door where people are soon released
and they're here again
mostly their agenda is to...
#aliens
#witches
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
21st Aug 2024 4:09pm
21st Aug 2024 4:09pm
greetings
greetings from the infernal vortex
hopeful thoughts inside the internal gloom
mischief stands up valiantly and makes introductions
sweet surrender under casual assault
it's the nature of the void
war is ever present and sarcasm is the only tongue they know
why waste niceties when you know that's not what you feel
aggressive is the tone with them
outsiders' smell of fear, it has a peculiar scent
it alerts them to spies
violence is always the first to be aware
he releases his dogs of war
the weaker of the...
hopeful thoughts inside the internal gloom
mischief stands up valiantly and makes introductions
sweet surrender under casual assault
it's the nature of the void
war is ever present and sarcasm is the only tongue they know
why waste niceties when you know that's not what you feel
aggressive is the tone with them
outsiders' smell of fear, it has a peculiar scent
it alerts them to spies
violence is always the first to be aware
he releases his dogs of war
the weaker of the...
#aliens
#scifi
88 reads
6 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
20th Aug 2024 1:13am
20th Aug 2024 1:13am
The Man Trap
Huzzahs for 'ol Commander Spock
who no doubt had a logical cock
and plied the instrument with precision
into Uhuru's babe division...
after a round of pitching woo
and a Vulcan game of chess or two.
But once when she was rather bored
at being by him once more ignored...
she asked of Vulcan moonlit nights...
and he said..."Vulcan has no moon"...
to which she said..."I'm not surprised"...
which raised his eyebrow to new heights
wherein he pondered romantic plights...
who no doubt had a logical cock
and plied the instrument with precision
into Uhuru's babe division...
after a round of pitching woo
and a Vulcan game of chess or two.
But once when she was rather bored
at being by him once more ignored...
she asked of Vulcan moonlit nights...
and he said..."Vulcan has no moon"...
to which she said..."I'm not surprised"...
which raised his eyebrow to new heights
wherein he pondered romantic plights...
#aliens
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2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 11:50pm
18th Aug 2024 11:50pm
the will of the warrior
screeching in a language I don't know
are creatures of the dark
they seek my attention
because they know I will help
the ones that need closure
they may be stuck in this realm
their memories lost they forget what they want
I sink into their interior
retrieving their memory keys
reviewing their life and ultimately asking them where they want to go
do they want to be reborn human
or is there somewhere else in the multi-universes they wish to visit
It is a tough decision but it's theirs to make
in the void is the...
are creatures of the dark
they seek my attention
because they know I will help
the ones that need closure
they may be stuck in this realm
their memories lost they forget what they want
I sink into their interior
retrieving their memory keys
reviewing their life and ultimately asking them where they want to go
do they want to be reborn human
or is there somewhere else in the multi-universes they wish to visit
It is a tough decision but it's theirs to make
in the void is the...
#aliens
#ghosts
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4 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 00:48am
18th Aug 2024 00:48am
alien
twinkling in the universes I wonder what manner am i
shining with other starlit beings
on a great voyage with time and space
touring the dimensions of enlightenment
my mind opens according to the guidelines of each dimension
to glean wisdom is a difficult thing
one planet to the next disagree on this very thought
sending their young starshine out to learn the nature of the cosmos
so many wonders to behold
we are but ambassadors of hope
greeting each other as we come and go
the galaxies are vast
we travel on a beam...
shining with other starlit beings
on a great voyage with time and space
touring the dimensions of enlightenment
my mind opens according to the guidelines of each dimension
to glean wisdom is a difficult thing
one planet to the next disagree on this very thought
sending their young starshine out to learn the nature of the cosmos
so many wonders to behold
we are but ambassadors of hope
greeting each other as we come and go
the galaxies are vast
we travel on a beam...
#aliens
#scifi
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