Poems About Alcohol Seeking Honest Critique
#alcohol
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#addiction
Poems about alcohol seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
7th Jul 2024 8:43pm
7th Jul 2024 8:43pm
Not sailing on the ocean
Not feeling pretty safe at all
Elaborate
Labor hate
Abort later
What's up?
Butterflies
Butter flies
Flies will fly
Around you.
Cocoa puff
Swimming
Into vodka
What's up?
Cow milk
Top hats
No taps
What's up?
No half full
Any glasses
No empty
Small cups
What's up?
Not ever
Full jugs
Bottoms up...
Elaborate
Labor hate
Abort later
What's up?
Butterflies
Butter flies
Flies will fly
Around you.
Cocoa puff
Swimming
Into vodka
What's up?
Cow milk
Top hats
No taps
What's up?
No half full
Any glasses
No empty
Small cups
What's up?
Not ever
Full jugs
Bottoms up...
#alcohol
#butterfly
#ForbiddenLove
#mirror
#SelfDiscovery
133 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Jun 2024 7:00pm
28th Jun 2024 7:00pm
An Obscene Nurturing
#abuse
#alcohol
#DomesticViolence
#father
#son
106 reads
8 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
28th Jun 2024 8:07am
28th Jun 2024 8:07am
The power of drugs
The power of drugs
is a curious thing
Send one to the gutter
Expand another's brain
Turn a lion meek
A mouse a raging lunatic
You can grow
Or create your own
Use a credit card to ride the dealers train
But it might just change your life
That's the power of drugs
Legally a doctor can alter the mind
Or a brewery internally pickle thee
Nicotine chewing gum
Legitimate heroin just a kinder surprise
You can have them prescribed
Or on a shelf in glass bottles
Use...
is a curious thing
Send one to the gutter
Expand another's brain
Turn a lion meek
A mouse a raging lunatic
You can grow
Or create your own
Use a credit card to ride the dealers train
But it might just change your life
That's the power of drugs
Legally a doctor can alter the mind
Or a brewery internally pickle thee
Nicotine chewing gum
Legitimate heroin just a kinder surprise
You can have them prescribed
Or on a shelf in glass bottles
Use...
#alcohol
#drugs
#marijuana
354 reads
1 Comment
ExercisingDemons
Poem Published
28th Jun 2024 5:59am
28th Jun 2024 5:59am
Silly Alcohol Trickle
Silly, silly,
silly,
silly drinking,
wiener shrinking..
Wobbling
weak and
simping
Staggered,
limping,
haggard, drifting,
flagrantly sinking,
a maggot whimpering
Hair shaggy,
skin
pimpling
I'm sauced,
daggers trickling
out of tears trickling
onto crippled moths tricked
into signing up for flying me to Heaven,
now too soggy to walk
and alcohol dismisses em all,
those wet, poured upon moths,
blisters and bees,
weeds and the trees
Fuck...
silly,
silly drinking,
wiener shrinking..
Wobbling
weak and
simping
Staggered,
limping,
haggard, drifting,
flagrantly sinking,
a maggot whimpering
Hair shaggy,
skin
pimpling
I'm sauced,
daggers trickling
out of tears trickling
onto crippled moths tricked
into signing up for flying me to Heaven,
now too soggy to walk
and alcohol dismisses em all,
those wet, poured upon moths,
blisters and bees,
weeds and the trees
Fuck...
#alcohol
114 reads
1 Comment
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
27th Jun 2024 11:59pm
27th Jun 2024 11:59pm
just another old bloke in the pub
sixty six years
old next month
and
I mean that’s getting old
and I’ve read all the bumph
about mindfulness and positive
thinking
perhaps I’ll just stick to
drinking
old next month
and
I mean that’s getting old
and I’ve read all the bumph
about mindfulness and positive
thinking
perhaps I’ll just stick to
drinking
#alcohol
83 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Jun 2024 1:13pm
24th Jun 2024 1:13pm
Do You Also Feel Sick To The Core?
Opened my eyes and saw this chick
leaning on glass and looking sick
and naked like this guy before
she turned her head and looked like to
ask this hungover mister "Do
you also feel sick to the core
like me?" which made me nod my head
slowly, rub my painful forehead
and say "Believe me. That's for sure."
leaning on glass and looking sick
and naked like this guy before
she turned her head and looked like to
ask this hungover mister "Do
you also feel sick to the core
like me?" which made me nod my head
slowly, rub my painful forehead
and say "Believe me. That's for sure."
#alcohol
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sensual
200 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Jun 2024 2:21am
24th Jun 2024 2:21am
The First Time She Went To A New Year's Eve Party
Wendy Sue woke up naked.
She discovered glitter stuff on her body.
Also, that she was hungover.
She discovered glitter stuff on her body.
Also, that she was hungover.
#alcohol
#fiction
#NewYear
#sensual
#suffering
182 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Jun 2024 9:40pm
19th Jun 2024 9:40pm
During Spring Break In Fort Lauderdale
Robin woke in someone's bed.
She found herself with no clothes on.
She also noticed Angela's panties.
She found herself with no clothes on.
She also noticed Angela's panties.
#alcohol
#fiction
#lesbian
#sensual
#spring
263 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
15th Jun 2024 1:17am
15th Jun 2024 1:17am
we buy what we need
every week we go to the
supermarket I buy a bottle of whisky or two for the week, you buy food, yeah food’s good, too, I concede
supermarket I buy a bottle of whisky or two for the week, you buy food, yeah food’s good, too, I concede
#alcohol
86 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Jun 2024 8:03pm
12th Jun 2024 8:03pm
Want to avoid vomiting or hangovers, try this!!
Mike Hunt of Wisconsin missed drinking since contracting a particularly nasty throat ailment. In the fall of 2000, he and his wife, Michelle, devised a clever workaround: Michelle gave her husband a wine enema. It turned out to be an ingenious way of ingesting alcohol. Unfortunately, this way caused alcohol poisoning killing him instantly.
#alcohol
#death
#ignorance
#illness
#satirical
159 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Jun 2024 7:38pm
12th Jun 2024 7:38pm
Potent Potables
In the summer of 1974, a Russian man died after consuming tainted liquor he had obtained on the black market. At his funeral, ten of his mourners also died. They had each taken a drink from the same supply of alcohol!
#alcohol
#fiction
#funeral #satirical
#funeral #satirical
115 reads
7 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
5th Jun 2024 6:10am
5th Jun 2024 6:10am
The Wedding Guest Part Three
Dismissed we made our way
Where the chandeliers glowed
And I downed
One drink
Two drink
By the third I was all in
I danced as though I was alone in the room
For the first time in months I danced for fun
I didn’t feel worried or stressed
That I was over dressed
Or that someone watched with distaste
I no longer waste my time worrying
‘Twas a nice wedding
I took advantage of the food they offered
Slices of cake that made me grin
Music that slowed and picked up again
I didn’t feel shunned
For it was all...
Where the chandeliers glowed
And I downed
One drink
Two drink
By the third I was all in
I danced as though I was alone in the room
For the first time in months I danced for fun
I didn’t feel worried or stressed
That I was over dressed
Or that someone watched with distaste
I no longer waste my time worrying
‘Twas a nice wedding
I took advantage of the food they offered
Slices of cake that made me grin
Music that slowed and picked up again
I didn’t feel shunned
For it was all...
#alcohol
#courage
#food
#happiness
#love
105 reads
2 Comments
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