Poems About Admiration by Top Critiquers
#admiration
Poems about admiration by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Those Tits
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#admiration
#lust
#sexy
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A piece of my diary
I showed her a piece of my diary
Something I do not show to anyone
I felt good
I felt accepted
And light.
Something I do not show to anyone
I felt good
I felt accepted
And light.
#admiration
100 reads
8 Comments
Being or Having
Being or Having
If we were
just lying
so sweet
side
by side
nothing withholding
and nothing
to hide
watching a movie,
spooning ourselves
so close
and alluring,
cuddling close
in the darkness
just touring,
my arms
deep
around you,
behind you
and supple,
feeling your body
beside me
to couple,
kissing your shoulder
and nibbling ear,
moving so gently
my hand
from the rear
to the...
If we were
just lying
so sweet
side
by side
nothing withholding
and nothing
to hide
watching a movie,
spooning ourselves
so close
and alluring,
cuddling close
in the darkness
just touring,
my arms
deep
around you,
behind you
and supple,
feeling your body
beside me
to couple,
kissing your shoulder
and nibbling ear,
moving so gently
my hand
from the rear
to the...
#relationships
#romantic
#admiration #respect
#admiration #respect
472 reads
6 Comments
O Fiery Heart of a Poet
The fiery heart of the poet shines through ages, His furnace forged quietly and unseen in the dark, Finally his heart is inscribed with a name only heaven can read and angels know,
He is haunted by the "One" who walks in fire and lives in the shadows away from light,
He journeys through paths unknown, hidden and strange finding nourishment for his soul while enlightenment finds the mind.
He hears the voices of innocence singing in the distance, laughing like children in Eden's call, yet the shadows that follow him still fall,
for our innocence is...
He is haunted by the "One" who walks in fire and lives in the shadows away from light,
He journeys through paths unknown, hidden and strange finding nourishment for his soul while enlightenment finds the mind.
He hears the voices of innocence singing in the distance, laughing like children in Eden's call, yet the shadows that follow him still fall,
for our innocence is...
#admiration
#angels
#heaven
#hell
#inspirational
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Death of a Big Fish
for David Lynch
The strangeness inherent in you
was not disturbing, in the end,
not in a sense that prophesied flames, at least,
but opened up a strange vista,
one terrifying in Radcliffe’s vision
of what defines terror:
expanding your soul, not annihilating.
A woman in trouble. Wrapped in plastic.
Bipedal bunny rabbits in human clothes.
Dennis Hopper huffing gas.
Laura Dern with weird stretched-out smile.
Or LAX in brightest day.
The sentimental turned
to sinister. Black Lodge. Dwarf.
These painterly...
The strangeness inherent in you
was not disturbing, in the end,
not in a sense that prophesied flames, at least,
but opened up a strange vista,
one terrifying in Radcliffe’s vision
of what defines terror:
expanding your soul, not annihilating.
A woman in trouble. Wrapped in plastic.
Bipedal bunny rabbits in human clothes.
Dennis Hopper huffing gas.
Laura Dern with weird stretched-out smile.
Or LAX in brightest day.
The sentimental turned
to sinister. Black Lodge. Dwarf.
These painterly...
#admiration
#art
#LifeCycle #PopCulture
#LifeCycle #PopCulture
68 reads
2 Comments
Thank You Mom
Happy Mother's Day
to all the mom's
who push and pull
who give and take
always here
always there
never quitting
never doubting
Mamma Mia we love you
♥ Thank You for loving us ♥
to all the mom's
who push and pull
who give and take
always here
always there
never quitting
never doubting
Mamma Mia we love you
♥ Thank You for loving us ♥
#love
#kindness
#gratitude #admiration
#gratitude #admiration
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2 Comments
All The Green-Cap Mothers
I step through a willow gate
into May’s orchard
it’s where we chose
to meet this month,
this community place
huddled beneath sky
and spring blossoms
and so I enter an old yurt
looking at a filthy floor
more dirt than wood
slowly watching feet
gather through grime
it felt like a metaphor
so much bigger than myself
as I sat down in a camping chair,
poured myself hot tea from a flask
and thought about how it never changes,
my desire to see these women thrive
how it...
into May’s orchard
it’s where we chose
to meet this month,
this community place
huddled beneath sky
and spring blossoms
and so I enter an old yurt
looking at a filthy floor
more dirt than wood
slowly watching feet
gather through grime
it felt like a metaphor
so much bigger than myself
as I sat down in a camping chair,
poured myself hot tea from a flask
and thought about how it never changes,
my desire to see these women thrive
how it...
#admiration
#respect
#support #women
#support #women
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4 Comments
Soul Song of the Forbidden Keeper
I’m not here to hurt you, but free you
Before your short life is through,
“Baby it is what it is-and death will be here
But if you let me I’ll take away all your fear,
“With me you will rule instead and not be the one who’ll serves
Let me give you a taste-as I remove pain from your nerves,
“I don’t need you unconditional love or obedience
Just your sweet soul for all of existence,
“See as I keep away the heat from the fire
Blissful comfort is what you desire,
“There are others who will feast on your soul like a lunch
But to...
Before your short life is through,
“Baby it is what it is-and death will be here
But if you let me I’ll take away all your fear,
“With me you will rule instead and not be the one who’ll serves
Let me give you a taste-as I remove pain from your nerves,
“I don’t need you unconditional love or obedience
Just your sweet soul for all of existence,
“See as I keep away the heat from the fire
Blissful comfort is what you desire,
“There are others who will feast on your soul like a lunch
But to...
#hope
#dark
#admiration #denial
#admiration #denial
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6 Comments
***
You know my name,
loved my face.
You know my heart and taught it love.
You saw my pain and all my shame,
Yet you gave me a home in your heart I had a place.
I'm insane,
but to you we all the same.
When the world gave up on me,
You never changed.
Tell them I've never been happy like I'm with you.
For many years I hope we remain this way.
Even if our bones turn to dust
May this warmth of friendship remain this way.
Lets show the world true love never dies.
loved my face.
You know my heart and taught it love.
You saw my pain and all my shame,
Yet you gave me a home in your heart I had a place.
I'm insane,
but to you we all the same.
When the world gave up on me,
You never changed.
Tell them I've never been happy like I'm with you.
For many years I hope we remain this way.
Even if our bones turn to dust
May this warmth of friendship remain this way.
Lets show the world true love never dies.
#love
#friendship
#support #admiration
#support #admiration
480 reads
7 Comments
Her
What would DUP be
without
Her?
Fiery pen
Fiery soul
Laying down
Passion
Sorrow
Longing
Lustful abandon
In solid
Erotic
writes
There is so much more
In
Her
poetry.
Sharing
struggles
hardships
losses that
would sink
many others.
An advocate
supporter
collaborator
and
friend
In my journey
exploring
writing
visual art.
A voice in my head
saying
ignore what you think may please...
without
Her?
Fiery pen
Fiery soul
Laying down
Passion
Sorrow
Longing
Lustful abandon
In solid
Erotic
writes
There is so much more
In
Her
poetry.
Sharing
struggles
hardships
losses that
would sink
many others.
An advocate
supporter
collaborator
and
friend
In my journey
exploring
writing
visual art.
A voice in my head
saying
ignore what you think may please...
#admiration
#friendship
124 reads
12 Comments
Thank you...
It's been a year since I visited this page.
All the words are the same and I've nothing new to say.
Still playing hide and seek with our feelings
loosing control and perfecting makeup sex
both desperate for healing...
From the moment you came into my life
My tiny heart grew, it grew colder and wiser
stronger than it's ever been before
and for that I thank you.
All the words are the same and I've nothing new to say.
Still playing hide and seek with our feelings
loosing control and perfecting makeup sex
both desperate for healing...
From the moment you came into my life
My tiny heart grew, it grew colder and wiser
stronger than it's ever been before
and for that I thank you.
#admiration
694 reads
9 Comments
@anna
anna_grin @ me
until I bleed
I'm whitewashed noise
broken bones lie to you
they crunch
under steel toed truth
I was dead anyway
until I bleed
I'm whitewashed noise
broken bones lie to you
they crunch
under steel toed truth
I was dead anyway
#dark
#admiration
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7 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Admiration by Top Critiquers