Poems About Admiration by Top Critiquers
#admiration
Poems about admiration by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Together as one
My heart beats for you
I inhale as you exhale
Everlastingly
I inhale as you exhale
Everlastingly
#admiration
#haiku
#love
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Betty's Shine
lovely lady exciting us all
a passionate flower living life in bloom
love and love loss
painfully aware of her intimate need
she opens the door
to a great understanding of desire
I've never experienced, love like this
in wonder, I've examined each scar and freckle
listening as her heart broke
like voyuer, watch as she made her love moves
a Goddess to my eyes, because she lights the room with starlight
beaming images of a love so intense it burns and glows
in wonder, I look on wishing my desire was so fierce
I...
a passionate flower living life in bloom
love and love loss
painfully aware of her intimate need
she opens the door
to a great understanding of desire
I've never experienced, love like this
in wonder, I've examined each scar and freckle
listening as her heart broke
like voyuer, watch as she made her love moves
a Goddess to my eyes, because she lights the room with starlight
beaming images of a love so intense it burns and glows
in wonder, I look on wishing my desire was so fierce
I...
#admiration
#love
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Nothing Left Standing...
In making me your world
you have destroyed me
engulfing me in tenderness
sweet serenity.
I did not realize the cracks
the silent tremors
the microscopic lines
grinding against each other.
I am your whole world
I'm drowning in its depth
so deep, there is no bottom
there is just being.
when a kiss causes
volcanoes to erupt
and the ground shakes
know it is me.
I am right for you
the way I make you quake
the way you lose yourself
in the abyss.
this could be pure...
you have destroyed me
engulfing me in tenderness
sweet serenity.
I did not realize the cracks
the silent tremors
the microscopic lines
grinding against each other.
I am your whole world
I'm drowning in its depth
so deep, there is no bottom
there is just being.
when a kiss causes
volcanoes to erupt
and the ground shakes
know it is me.
I am right for you
the way I make you quake
the way you lose yourself
in the abyss.
this could be pure...
#admiration
#confusion
#courage
#sex
#risk
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MidnightSonneteer
Expression Series, Visual III
#admiration
#friendship
#respect #support
#respect #support
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MAGNIFIQUE!
Magnifique
his physique,
so unique!
Day's less bleak!
Worth a peek
if you seek
view of cheek!
his physique,
so unique!
Day's less bleak!
Worth a peek
if you seek
view of cheek!
#men
#rhyming
#admiration
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Celebrity
I stared into the new moon sky,
black as can be, but for the stars,
shining like Hollywood memoirs
Tallulah Bankhead wouldn't try:
taboo pinpricks in the void
only some great hubris discerns
when falling from more graceful turns,
like Satan, cast out and annoyed...
or starlets in their boudoir robes
pirouetting in bold display
back in the golden age of day
like angels on their astral globes.
But night knows not of graciousness
without the rondure of the moon
reflecting into spaciousness...
the...
black as can be, but for the stars,
shining like Hollywood memoirs
Tallulah Bankhead wouldn't try:
taboo pinpricks in the void
only some great hubris discerns
when falling from more graceful turns,
like Satan, cast out and annoyed...
or starlets in their boudoir robes
pirouetting in bold display
back in the golden age of day
like angels on their astral globes.
But night knows not of graciousness
without the rondure of the moon
reflecting into spaciousness...
the...
#admiration
#beauty
#moon
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we are, you know...
we are more than poetry
more than our words
spread so elegantly...
...so carefully...
...across the page
consider them merely stains
...of tears
& bloodtrails...
showing the outline of our pain
but these sentiments are tempered
allowing only the briefest glimpse
miniscule peeks at the agony within
we are giants trapped inside thimbles
struggling & straining
...for more space
& these fragmented offerings shared
barely scratch the surface
of the vastness within
we are deeper...
more than our words
spread so elegantly...
...so carefully...
...across the page
consider them merely stains
...of tears
& bloodtrails...
showing the outline of our pain
but these sentiments are tempered
allowing only the briefest glimpse
miniscule peeks at the agony within
we are giants trapped inside thimbles
struggling & straining
...for more space
& these fragmented offerings shared
barely scratch the surface
of the vastness within
we are deeper...
#admiration
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#honesty
#respect
#WritingPoetry
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I CONFESS
I
know I have been
lax in some expressions
but as I am on
the stand in the court of love.
I gladly and freely
CONFESS
that I love you with
all my being.
I CONFESS
there is nothing,
no nothing that
will change or
stop my love for YOU.
I CONFESS
I love YOU more and
more as each tick
of the clock passes.
AND
guess what?
There's nothing you
can do about it.
know I have been
lax in some expressions
but as I am on
the stand in the court of love.
I gladly and freely
CONFESS
that I love you with
all my being.
I CONFESS
there is nothing,
no nothing that
will change or
stop my love for YOU.
I CONFESS
I love YOU more and
more as each tick
of the clock passes.
AND
guess what?
There's nothing you
can do about it.
#admiration
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
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We don't talk no more
I would like to have a conversation, with you as man to woman and woman to man. WHY is that you and I don't talk, like we use to do when we first connected, on so many levels of our own opinions. As we exchange thoughts and the subconsciousness, of our thoughts and lives together as one. 🙏 For sure what has changed over time ⌚ in each of our lives, that we never really have time to talk about situations, that we have to face in our lives. 💕 For don't we still have love and support, and understanding to make it easier. TO survive in this hard cold world. 🌍 For...
#admiration
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#love
#respect
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When Things are Right - Collaboration with NightGoddess
When things are right, you can just taste it. Simple things can make your day, like the cheese melting on a perfectly crusted slice.
As chef, I was responsible for that imported mozzarella slowly congealing at the right temperature and tempting the juices on my tongue as if nothing else factored into its perfection.
It was like that when I saw her; everything was just perfect. Wearing a tight black dress with an overlay of lace, sheer in areas that would have made any one else blush, I stayed strong, and remained in control. Yet, as she turned, I found my eyes wandering...
As chef, I was responsible for that imported mozzarella slowly congealing at the right temperature and tempting the juices on my tongue as if nothing else factored into its perfection.
It was like that when I saw her; everything was just perfect. Wearing a tight black dress with an overlay of lace, sheer in areas that would have made any one else blush, I stayed strong, and remained in control. Yet, as she turned, I found my eyes wandering...
#love
#hope
#relationships
#LifeCycle
#admiration
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The Resilience of a Poet
The resilience of a poet comes from the heart
From the deepest part of the human soul
And yet there is a strength from this poetess
It’s something that can’t be expressed in words
But there is a profound sense of understanding
Something that takes time and tide and time again
It goes beyond the realm of our comprehension
Something this poetess sees and feels and tells
With every breath poetry pours with calmness
Illuminating like a beacon beckoning a smile
Reckoning the intricate webs and nuances of life
In admiration of stars...
From the deepest part of the human soul
And yet there is a strength from this poetess
It’s something that can’t be expressed in words
But there is a profound sense of understanding
Something that takes time and tide and time again
It goes beyond the realm of our comprehension
Something this poetess sees and feels and tells
With every breath poetry pours with calmness
Illuminating like a beacon beckoning a smile
Reckoning the intricate webs and nuances of life
In admiration of stars...
#support
#admiration
#respect #NaPoWriMo2024
#respect #NaPoWriMo2024
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you are (what i need)
you are
that
moment,
that drop
of
midnight,
that
shade
above
light,
when the
rain comes,
you are
the storm
that
floods
my soul.
that
moment,
that drop
of
midnight,
that
shade
above
light,
when the
rain comes,
you are
the storm
that
floods
my soul.
#admiration
#hope
#inspirational
#respect
#strength
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DU Poetry : Poems About Admiration by Top Critiquers