Poems About Admiration by Top Critiquers
#admiration
Poems about admiration by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Limp Sound Display (collaboration with PAR)
Unwind the clock
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find the stairway at the...
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find the stairway at the...
#admiration
#art
#collaboration
#dreams
#utopia
78 reads
12 Comments
Nothing Left Standing...
In making me your world
you have destroyed me
engulfing me in tenderness
sweet serenity.
I did not realize the cracks
the silent tremors
the microscopic lines
grinding against each other.
I am your whole world
I'm drowning in its depth
so deep, there is no bottom
there is just being.
when a kiss causes
volcanoes to erupt
and the ground shakes
know it is me.
I am right for you
the way I make you quake
the way you lose yourself
in the abyss.
this could be pure...
you have destroyed me
engulfing me in tenderness
sweet serenity.
I did not realize the cracks
the silent tremors
the microscopic lines
grinding against each other.
I am your whole world
I'm drowning in its depth
so deep, there is no bottom
there is just being.
when a kiss causes
volcanoes to erupt
and the ground shakes
know it is me.
I am right for you
the way I make you quake
the way you lose yourself
in the abyss.
this could be pure...
#admiration
#confusion
#courage #StreamOfConsciousness
#courage #StreamOfConsciousness
452 reads
19 Comments
Betty's Shine
lovely lady exciting us all
a passionate flower living life in bloom
love and love loss
painfully aware of her intimate need
she opens the door
to a great understanding of desire
I've never experienced, love like this
in wonder, I've examined each scar and freckle
listening as her heart broke
like voyuer, watch as she made her love moves
a Goddess to my eyes, because she lights the room with starlight
beaming images of a love so intense it burns and glows
in wonder, I look on wishing my desire was so fierce ...
a passionate flower living life in bloom
love and love loss
painfully aware of her intimate need
she opens the door
to a great understanding of desire
I've never experienced, love like this
in wonder, I've examined each scar and freckle
listening as her heart broke
like voyuer, watch as she made her love moves
a Goddess to my eyes, because she lights the room with starlight
beaming images of a love so intense it burns and glows
in wonder, I look on wishing my desire was so fierce ...
#admiration
#love
159 reads
12 Comments
Ode to Heilung
prehistoric findings have indicated that proto Germanic
was an actual official language though not of words
Sound was a first language perhaps elementally reflection
shaping reshaping like stone mason hands each rock
o p e n i n g
hearth
heart
dearth
an open cairn where I see the musk moist
in garments beholding nearing night
I sit sink beguiled I listen, Earth o Earth
in foster waters
gestating narcoleptic
surrounded by balm
o p u s ...
was an actual official language though not of words
Sound was a first language perhaps elementally reflection
shaping reshaping like stone mason hands each rock
o p e n i n g
hearth
heart
dearth
an open cairn where I see the musk moist
in garments beholding nearing night
I sit sink beguiled I listen, Earth o Earth
in foster waters
gestating narcoleptic
surrounded by balm
o p u s ...
#admiration
#music
95 reads
4 Comments
Anne-Ri999
Visual Expression Series X
#admiration
#respect
#spiritual
412 reads
18 Comments
Like Endless Starlight, A Lover’s Dream (Naajir)
He’s going to Feng Shui your interior
Until you can’t think clearly
And girl, your shower is going to become your best friend
His way with words is otherworldly
He makes you want to be HER
His muse
I never want it to end
He has a higher calling
A man who knows his worth
Refining himself
Pouring back into himself
A quest to be real
I’m honored to read his mind ...
Until you can’t think clearly
And girl, your shower is going to become your best friend
His way with words is otherworldly
He makes you want to be HER
His muse
I never want it to end
He has a higher calling
A man who knows his worth
Refining himself
Pouring back into himself
A quest to be real
I’m honored to read his mind ...
#admiration
#respect
213 reads
6 Comments
Ma!
Simple and complex words and chords are never enough to express or address you mum
A virtuous woman strong and so bold
You cuddled me to prevent me from catching any cold
With you on my side, I can conquer this world
Whenever you hold my hands, it's my safety gloves
If you unleash me in motion, I can go flying around the globe
The safest place is inside your womb
You are my one and only nuclear bomb
You see, me and you...
A virtuous woman strong and so bold
You cuddled me to prevent me from catching any cold
With you on my side, I can conquer this world
Whenever you hold my hands, it's my safety gloves
If you unleash me in motion, I can go flying around the globe
The safest place is inside your womb
You are my one and only nuclear bomb
You see, me and you...
#admiration
108 reads
4 Comments
It's a blessing in disguise
It's a blessing when we can connect on a positive, level of energy and understanding and respect. FOR what we share and have as one love. For it's true, that we all will go through so much sometimes, that it will test our strength and commitment which could either. Make us or break us or just separate us, from the deepness of the truth of our love and hearts. But yet we will find the deepness of being reunited so comfortable, even with the struggles that we have to face in the very depths of the darkness. For sure it's necessary to be able to share our thoughts, and insight and spiritual...
#admiration
#courage
#gratitude
#happiness
#strength
77 reads
8 Comments
She
Never try to change her
She comes from a place called love
Deep in your hearts chamber
She shines like the stars above
Whenever you feel uncertain
She's there when life gets tough
So never ever change her
She comes from that place called love
She comes from a place called love
Deep in your hearts chamber
She shines like the stars above
Whenever you feel uncertain
She's there when life gets tough
So never ever change her
She comes from that place called love
#admiration
#gratitude
#respect
162 reads
10 Comments
SHALL I COMPARE THEE....
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day,
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
#admiration
#beauty
#love
#relationships
#romantic
152 reads
4 Comments
My Better Angel
No femme fatale rocks a housecoat as well
as my beloved of thirty-five years,
since with it she bolstered me, truth to tell,
far beyond the phonemes of sonneteers
or any bunny in a magazine
shorn of their drapery mysterium
so notorious at setting the scene
for male gaze fever delirium...
which was always the wealth I truly craved
when often I had surplus love to spend
and she so fervent by that to be laved,
both inside and out, and at either end...
where even becoming fifty-seven
she comes across as a piece of heaven!
as my beloved of thirty-five years,
since with it she bolstered me, truth to tell,
far beyond the phonemes of sonneteers
or any bunny in a magazine
shorn of their drapery mysterium
so notorious at setting the scene
for male gaze fever delirium...
which was always the wealth I truly craved
when often I had surplus love to spend
and she so fervent by that to be laved,
both inside and out, and at either end...
where even becoming fifty-seven
she comes across as a piece of heaven!
#admiration
#birthday
#love #wife
#love #wife
109 reads
8 Comments
IT'S OKAY TO ADMIT IT
The Bard of Avon in Hamlet has
Polonius saying to his son, Laertes:
"This above all else: to thine own self
be true. And it must follow as the night
the day. Thou canst not then
be false to any man."
THIS
is a message for YOU my loved,
sought, and coy one. It's okay to
admit that you hunger and desire to
taste the pleasures that dare to transgress
the halls of your humanity and create
a falsehood that resists and keeps
YOU locked in a cage of denial.
ADMIT
what your racing heart and locked up ...
Polonius saying to his son, Laertes:
"This above all else: to thine own self
be true. And it must follow as the night
the day. Thou canst not then
be false to any man."
THIS
is a message for YOU my loved,
sought, and coy one. It's okay to
admit that you hunger and desire to
taste the pleasures that dare to transgress
the halls of your humanity and create
a falsehood that resists and keeps
YOU locked in a cage of denial.
ADMIT
what your racing heart and locked up ...
#admiration
#ForbiddenLove
#obsession #romantic
#obsession #romantic
70 reads
6 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Admiration by Top Critiquers