Time Heals by Top Critiquers Poems
#TimeHeals
time heals by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
moon_bather
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 4:37am
28th Dec 2024 4:37am
The One You Won't Forget
You won’t forget me
I am amnesia’s worst enemy
I am amnesia’s worst enemy
#bittersweet
#loneliness
#redemption
#strength
#TimeHeals
64 reads
4 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
28th Nov 2022 1:38am
28th Nov 2022 1:38am
Temporary Grave
In a Temporary Grave
Buried alive but
Don’t worry about me
I’m doing just fine
Got veins that vine
Getting ready to climb
Through soil and dirt
Bloom into a garden of verses
Cause throughout it all
Might as well grow
Into my own sense of style
I’ll be here for a while
Waiting on future sunrays
Of brilliant amber strings
Strong enough to melt
Everything I once felt
Through ice and pain
Bloom within freezing sleet and rain
In a Temporary Grave
Buried...
Buried alive but
Don’t worry about me
I’m doing just fine
Got veins that vine
Getting ready to climb
Through soil and dirt
Bloom into a garden of verses
Cause throughout it all
Might as well grow
Into my own sense of style
I’ll be here for a while
Waiting on future sunrays
Of brilliant amber strings
Strong enough to melt
Everything I once felt
Through ice and pain
Bloom within freezing sleet and rain
In a Temporary Grave
Buried...
#courage
#inspirational
#TimeHeals
695 reads
45 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 3:52am
22nd Dec 2024 3:52am
These Scars Wont Define Us
Heartfelt, this goes out to all the poets here
those that for whatever the reason
have chosen to share their scars
I appreciate you all
Together WE shall cross this river
those that for whatever the reason
have chosen to share their scars
I appreciate you all
Together WE shall cross this river
#gratitude
#healing
#support #TimeHeals
#support #TimeHeals
51 reads
3 Comments
LibraSoul96
Poem Published
5th Feb 2022 00:13am
5th Feb 2022 00:13am
Trying to Heal
Just like glass cracking
I have broken into a million pieces
My heart is in foreclosure
So no need to put up a rent or numerous leases
I'm a lone wolf rummaging through the forests trying to stake my claim in this territory
My soul is like a game of hang man
It's holding on by a mere thread
For am I worthy of love
And to be healed from a past filled with
lively memories that are now dead
For like a yellow light, please tread me with caution
My heart is ancient and filled with dust
Never to be put up for sale or...
I have broken into a million pieces
My heart is in foreclosure
So no need to put up a rent or numerous leases
I'm a lone wolf rummaging through the forests trying to stake my claim in this territory
My soul is like a game of hang man
It's holding on by a mere thread
For am I worthy of love
And to be healed from a past filled with
lively memories that are now dead
For like a yellow light, please tread me with caution
My heart is ancient and filled with dust
Never to be put up for sale or...
#TimeHeals
#healing
#strength #hope
#strength #hope
299 reads
7 Comments
Thor_Azine
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 10:59pm
7th Oct 2024 10:59pm
To Hide a Heart
sunshine shadows cast
reeds intertwined to darkness
a shelter is born
reeds intertwined to darkness
a shelter is born
#dark
#grief
#love #TimeHeals
#love #TimeHeals
9 reads
4 Comments
darkcloud68
Poem Published
16th Oct 2023 4:16am
16th Oct 2023 4:16am
She Loves Me Not,And Does Not Matter Anymore.
I felt that the love I have given, was not appreciated,nor reciporcated. I once was a fool in love. Yet now my heart is wise and educated, my love is the real thing and never could be duplicated. I'm a great lover,, I can manifest it and illustrated. Tonight my bed is cold and I hate it. I admit her touch and beauty had me intoxcicated. But the loneliness she left me with had me sad frustrated and devestated. I must admit our love making, was pleasureable and unregulated. I admit I was a fool in love. And I am not ashamed to state it. So if she does not love me anymore, it does not...
#TimeHeals
#disappointment
#revenge
#separation
#bittersweet
281 reads
3 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 11:19pm
7th Dec 2024 11:19pm
Just Wait
You’re a devil running through heaven,
Left me tasting flames,
Ashes burned into my eyes.
Love blinded me so,
Locked heart, locked the skies.
Still, I watched you fly.
Angel with a devil’s tail,
Or devil with an angel’s wings
How do I escape you?
A ghost runs through my mind,
Eyes fixed on fading light,
What was our love, but a sick joke?
Just wait, the stars will turn,
One day, the flames won’t burn.
You’ll see the truth in the scars I earned, ...
Left me tasting flames,
Ashes burned into my eyes.
Love blinded me so,
Locked heart, locked the skies.
Still, I watched you fly.
Angel with a devil’s tail,
Or devil with an angel’s wings
How do I escape you?
A ghost runs through my mind,
Eyes fixed on fading light,
What was our love, but a sick joke?
Just wait, the stars will turn,
One day, the flames won’t burn.
You’ll see the truth in the scars I earned, ...
#hurt
#LifeCycle
#love #TimeHeals
#love #TimeHeals
78 reads
1 Comment
Sappho
Poem Published
15th Jan 2024 10:09am
15th Jan 2024 10:09am
Enchanted Heart
Wise old trees
Whispering mysteries
Tiny plant devas
Buzzing around wildflowers
Healing water of life
Flowing above gnarly roots
In small cascades within
The magical forest of my heart
I roam the wilderness in my chest
A willow basket
With little gifts in my hands
I feed the wildlife and
Leave gemstones for the fairies
I radiate loving kindness
Scooping of the abundance
Of my overflowing heart
All of a sudden
You cross my mind and
I...
Whispering mysteries
Tiny plant devas
Buzzing around wildflowers
Healing water of life
Flowing above gnarly roots
In small cascades within
The magical forest of my heart
I roam the wilderness in my chest
A willow basket
With little gifts in my hands
I feed the wildlife and
Leave gemstones for the fairies
I radiate loving kindness
Scooping of the abundance
Of my overflowing heart
All of a sudden
You cross my mind and
I...
#love
#kindness
#inspirational #TimeHeals
#inspirational #TimeHeals
136 reads
2 Comments
KendalM
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 12:05pm
7th Dec 2024 12:05pm
No Boys Allowed
She drapes white sheets over kitchen chairs, and just inside, lines the hard wood floor with fluffy pillows and downy blankets.
As she grabs her flashlight, your hand, and the journal with the heart shaped lock.
Sweetheart, let's just go be little girls again, everything you need to unload is safe with me, and when you leave this memory of our friendship, only take the little girl lost back with you upon your return to the world.
As she grabs her flashlight, your hand, and the journal with the heart shaped lock.
Sweetheart, let's just go be little girls again, everything you need to unload is safe with me, and when you leave this memory of our friendship, only take the little girl lost back with you upon your return to the world.
#emotions
#hope
#strength #TimeHeals
#strength #TimeHeals
47 reads
0 Comments
Everavalon
Poem Published
4th Mar 2023 10:40pm
4th Mar 2023 10:40pm
Atmospheric shaving
To this fear I am alluding
Catastrophic lies colluding
Empty flesh
So ever soothing
Whittle down my hardened core
Esoteric feelings
When the wisdom’s unappealing
Drawn in motion
always reeling
Adrift in simulated lore
Lay judgement on a sinner
To remake his spirit thinner
Always fraught
Never a winner
With a mind in constant war
Atmospheric shaving
Expressive thoughts all misbehaving
Melodies
a constant craving
Shape the surface
I implore
...
Catastrophic lies colluding
Empty flesh
So ever soothing
Whittle down my hardened core
Esoteric feelings
When the wisdom’s unappealing
Drawn in motion
always reeling
Adrift in simulated lore
Lay judgement on a sinner
To remake his spirit thinner
Always fraught
Never a winner
With a mind in constant war
Atmospheric shaving
Expressive thoughts all misbehaving
Melodies
a constant craving
Shape the surface
I implore
...
#TimeHeals
225 reads
4 Comments
Shon
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 5:21pm
31st Dec 2024 5:21pm
The eve of new year 2025
I'm going out not knowing.
hoping to find some knowing.
This year has been a trike.
Hoping next years betta.
Or at least no worst.
Through there's room
A plenty for betta.
For me and all others.
Other year...
lured by a lover.
This time last year.
Future promising looked.
Lover left me.
Off with my best friend.
Oh I do miss the fella lol.
Other things other.
Didn't seem to go right.
Going with the flow do I.
The ebb & flow of the tide. ...
hoping to find some knowing.
This year has been a trike.
Hoping next years betta.
Or at least no worst.
Through there's room
A plenty for betta.
For me and all others.
Other year...
lured by a lover.
This time last year.
Future promising looked.
Lover left me.
Off with my best friend.
Oh I do miss the fella lol.
Other things other.
Didn't seem to go right.
Going with the flow do I.
The ebb & flow of the tide. ...
#forgiveness
#kindness
#love
#redemption
#TimeHeals
41 reads
0 Comments
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