Time Heals by Top Critiquers Poems
#TimeHeals
time heals by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 5:57pm
17th Feb 2025 5:57pm
litte girl
talk to me little girl you've gone quiet
where do you hide when my soul can't find you
within my sacred sanctuary no one can harm you
death will not touch you I will take the pain on my back
soul child of time himself
forgive me sometimes I have to be fiersome
I will shield your eyes keeping the worst of it from you
you wonder where you came from
you are my soul's child
here are your birthcertificate and pictures of family
we are not from here
you will not be forced to take any one form
you will manifest where you like...
where do you hide when my soul can't find you
within my sacred sanctuary no one can harm you
death will not touch you I will take the pain on my back
soul child of time himself
forgive me sometimes I have to be fiersome
I will shield your eyes keeping the worst of it from you
you wonder where you came from
you are my soul's child
here are your birthcertificate and pictures of family
we are not from here
you will not be forced to take any one form
you will manifest where you like...
#children
#love
#TimeHeals
118 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 11:16pm
19th Mar 2025 11:16pm
Heart on fire
When the heart is on fire it holds the 🗝️ key of power of desire, in the heat of the sensual moments of sending vibes running, through your body and spiritual subconsciousness of your soul. For sure it's more than emotions and with genuine, feelings that creates a vibrant of colors of a special bond, between two lovers. For when the heart is on fire 🔥 it's because the feelings go deeper than deep into the deepness of the depths of dreams. For it's true that a heart on fire burns, with the closeness of inner senses of raw and uncut emotions. For it's that kind of mental...
#emotions
#hope
#love
#StreamOfConsciousness
#TimeHeals
106 reads
6 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 3:37am
7th Apr 2025 3:37am
Heartstrings Can Be Troublesome Things
It’s the innocence about the times that I miss most
The way they used to look up
The little voices pulling at the heart
When I used to drive by that church on Washington
There was a moon at the top of the steeple
His little voice would cry out “the moon daddy, the moon”
There was some comfort in hearing that
Yet I knew deep down inside as time would go by
All that would fade away
But that was years ago…
It was as we walked through the museum
That his silence pierced through me
His indifference growing
That...
The way they used to look up
The little voices pulling at the heart
When I used to drive by that church on Washington
There was a moon at the top of the steeple
His little voice would cry out “the moon daddy, the moon”
There was some comfort in hearing that
Yet I knew deep down inside as time would go by
All that would fade away
But that was years ago…
It was as we walked through the museum
That his silence pierced through me
His indifference growing
That...
#children
#fatherhood
#forgiveness #TimeHeals
#forgiveness #TimeHeals
37 reads
1 Comment
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 11:53pm
23rd Dec 2024 11:53pm
Regular / Irregular/ Regulated
Giving thanks this holiday season
Some of you knew
Others didn’t
In early January 2024
I was diagnosed with having a/fib
Atrial Fibrillation
How could that be ?
I never felt the symptoms particularly
Yet it was
Blood thinners immediately prescribed
Other heart drugs too
Then
Complications from drugs
More doctors
Lots of tests
Terrible interrupted sleep
Peeing like no tomorrow
Then
I started to listen to my doctors
Also to myself
Decisions to be...
Some of you knew
Others didn’t
In early January 2024
I was diagnosed with having a/fib
Atrial Fibrillation
How could that be ?
I never felt the symptoms particularly
Yet it was
Blood thinners immediately prescribed
Other heart drugs too
Then
Complications from drugs
More doctors
Lots of tests
Terrible interrupted sleep
Peeing like no tomorrow
Then
I started to listen to my doctors
Also to myself
Decisions to be...
#friendship
#healing
#LifeCycle
#MentalHealth
#TimeHeals
271 reads
37 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
3rd Jul 2024 12:25pm
3rd Jul 2024 12:25pm
willful amnesia
how honest are we with ourselves
when the night howls
& memory lies behind our eyes
is it the heart & it's infinite capacity to forget
gaslighting us into believing we must have...
...what we desire
as if that worked out so well the last time
& truth is...
reality tastes better dipped in arsenic
going down...at any rate
it's the gut clawing crawl to the end that reminds us
too late to kick ourselves
or renege on the deal we made
to appease our desperate need
to cave...giving in
...like a...
when the night howls
& memory lies behind our eyes
is it the heart & it's infinite capacity to forget
gaslighting us into believing we must have...
...what we desire
as if that worked out so well the last time
& truth is...
reality tastes better dipped in arsenic
going down...at any rate
it's the gut clawing crawl to the end that reminds us
too late to kick ourselves
or renege on the deal we made
to appease our desperate need
to cave...giving in
...like a...
#honesty
#memories
#SelfReflection #TimeHeals
#SelfReflection #TimeHeals
261 reads
6 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
18th Mar 2025 2:09pm
18th Mar 2025 2:09pm
NO MORE BEGGING
I
tried to be coy...
then suggestive...
then a little bolder;
finally an open but
somewhat sharing
between us...me too far,
YOU guarded and
suggestive.
OCCASIONALLY
it seemed the barrier was
collapsing as a few more
indications that YOU
were all in.
MY
desire is still YES.
BUT NO MORE BEGGING.
Remove your mask and
meet me at the Kissing Place.
OKAY?
tried to be coy...
then suggestive...
then a little bolder;
finally an open but
somewhat sharing
between us...me too far,
YOU guarded and
suggestive.
OCCASIONALLY
it seemed the barrier was
collapsing as a few more
indications that YOU
were all in.
MY
desire is still YES.
BUT NO MORE BEGGING.
Remove your mask and
meet me at the Kissing Place.
OKAY?
#emotions
#inspirational
#kindness
#love
#TimeHeals
123 reads
5 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 11:29am
25th Feb 2025 11:29am
Hoods
Childhood
Winds may blow harshly
Roots persist beneath the storm
We remain ourselves.
Adulthood
Light on the horizon
Path unshadowed by others
I am my own guide.
Elderhood
In the mirror, strength
Reflection of courage true
Voice of liberty.
Winds may blow harshly
Roots persist beneath the storm
We remain ourselves.
Adulthood
Light on the horizon
Path unshadowed by others
I am my own guide.
Elderhood
In the mirror, strength
Reflection of courage true
Voice of liberty.
#aging
#LifeCycle
#MovingOn
#PersonalGrowth
#TimeHeals
119 reads
13 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 3:09am
7th Feb 2025 3:09am
Storytime! Shut up and Listen!
#courage
#patience
#TimeHeals #vanity
#TimeHeals #vanity
139 reads
4 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
8th Jun 2022 2:03pm
8th Jun 2022 2:03pm
Just Wait
hollow effort
ticking in vain
time moves forward
nothing remains
success or failure
wrong or right
all of it fades
in dark of night
this will pass
just wait
none of it matters
just wait
days are hours
hours are breaths
boxes of dust
striving for death
triumphs worthless
anguish too
all that lingers
is how I touch you
this will pass
just wait
none of it matters
just wait
ticking in vain
time moves forward
nothing remains
success or failure
wrong or right
all of it fades
in dark of night
this will pass
just wait
none of it matters
just wait
days are hours
hours are breaths
boxes of dust
striving for death
triumphs worthless
anguish too
all that lingers
is how I touch you
this will pass
just wait
none of it matters
just wait
#depression
#death
#TimeHeals #apathy
#TimeHeals #apathy
570 reads
12 Comments
Styxian
Poem Published
21st Aug 2022 4:31pm
21st Aug 2022 4:31pm
The Light From Lu Bu's Bridge
Come meet me at the pillars
of Lu Bu's bridge, at dusk.
Through, and although, the crowd.
I will be distinguished,
by a torch held high.
A beacon for you, as unchanging
as it was once then.
During the expanse
of our separate journeys,
I met Father Time.
He called me up
several more steps
of his creaking porch.
Although I stepped back once,
perhaps twice, telling him
not that many just yet.
He said 'Then change'.
So I've traded my armor
for a mule.
My arrows are...
of Lu Bu's bridge, at dusk.
Through, and although, the crowd.
I will be distinguished,
by a torch held high.
A beacon for you, as unchanging
as it was once then.
During the expanse
of our separate journeys,
I met Father Time.
He called me up
several more steps
of his creaking porch.
Although I stepped back once,
perhaps twice, telling him
not that many just yet.
He said 'Then change'.
So I've traded my armor
for a mule.
My arrows are...
#love
#hope
#TimeHeals
856 reads
20 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
10th Dec 2022 6:24am
10th Dec 2022 6:24am
Concept
every horror
mini horror
demi horror
rocky horror
whatever
I've been through
in the past few months
every lapse in gratitude
every war zone day
every tear filled night
every deceitful person
for every maddening frustration
every night of fitful sleep
every comfort
far out of reach
there's the abstract
concept
of balance
equilibrium
hope
tangled in a fine gold chain
tiny two point font
whispers of joy
a paradigm shift
stuck between gears ...
mini horror
demi horror
rocky horror
whatever
I've been through
in the past few months
every lapse in gratitude
every war zone day
every tear filled night
every deceitful person
for every maddening frustration
every night of fitful sleep
every comfort
far out of reach
there's the abstract
concept
of balance
equilibrium
hope
tangled in a fine gold chain
tiny two point font
whispers of joy
a paradigm shift
stuck between gears ...
#hope
#TimeHeals
#frustration #despair
#frustration #despair
563 reads
16 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
6th Mar 2023 00:18am
6th Mar 2023 00:18am
drama at a busy surgery
I said to the doctor how
long have I got
he says I can give
you five minutes
what’s the problem ..
long have I got
he says I can give
you five minutes
what’s the problem ..
#TimeHeals
244 reads
1 Comment
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