Mothers Day Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#MothersDay
rasninjacaz
Poem Published
9th Nov 2018 10:46pm
9th Nov 2018 10:46pm
Mother
M - M is for mother. The matriarch, for you are the keeper of our home, our hearts, our joys, and our pains. You have always been there for me in my life through all the losses and gains. I could not imagine a world without you and I am truly blessed to have come from your womb.
To Whom! else does this adoration, respect, and love go to...none other than you mom.
O - Is for optimism because you know no failure. You stand in the face of fear, you flourish in the unknown, and you are the conqueror of your challenges and enemies. You have an air omnipresence to your...
To Whom! else does this adoration, respect, and love go to...none other than you mom.
O - Is for optimism because you know no failure. You stand in the face of fear, you flourish in the unknown, and you are the conqueror of your challenges and enemies. You have an air omnipresence to your...
#mother
#motherhood
#MothersDay #son
#MothersDay #son
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bean
Poem Published
21st Jan 2018 4:17am
21st Jan 2018 4:17am
Moms P.O.V
My little girl, voice choked by misty clouds filling her eyes, I, shocked, stalled, secondary took over; a blow of anger though beneath the veil I am heartbroken, Lacerations make of her, a lonely letter left behind by her, Exposed is the only aftermath a portray, hopelessness I hold, rough sky’s, how long can I stand through this downpour; separated, we take away through fog, calling for help I choke on an icy gust, melancholy nights as I wait, longing for hope, a clear sky, I grasp at tangents floating by, wishing my little girl was okay, warm, safe, and dry, though hurt and frail an...
#mother
#motherhood
#betrayal
#MothersDay
#deception
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Ahrima
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2017 1:54am
3rd Oct 2017 1:54am
To mother
Mother, Mother,
You are a comfort.
You are there everyday,
No matter the pain.
When i am broken,
You are always welcoming.
No matter the pain,
And no matter the shame,
I cause your there.
I tell you to sit down,
and take a nice long break.
But you stand up and say,
"I cant stop...
i need to get food on your plates."
And i say back,
"You need to relax."
But she says, "No."
"Im fine i let you know."
She inspires me,
To be Confident, Kind, And Willing to help.
She would go to...
You are a comfort.
You are there everyday,
No matter the pain.
When i am broken,
You are always welcoming.
No matter the pain,
And no matter the shame,
I cause your there.
I tell you to sit down,
and take a nice long break.
But you stand up and say,
"I cant stop...
i need to get food on your plates."
And i say back,
"You need to relax."
But she says, "No."
"Im fine i let you know."
She inspires me,
To be Confident, Kind, And Willing to help.
She would go to...
#mother
#birth
#motherhood
#childhood
#MothersDay
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DecipherMe
Poem Published
29th Sep 2017 00:59am
29th Sep 2017 00:59am
When Gigi Goes to Town
So many people play the clit like a fiddle.
Gigi plays it like a harp.
The melodies layer, layer up with every touch that resounds upon the next
to the Blue Danube Waltz and fall to a nocturne.
The stickiness of a honey trove on her pointer finger that strokes alone
while the other hand orchestrates the harmonic inside the puffing violet underground and brings she and her most inward nerves to one consciousness.
When Gigi Goes to town, it's raining outside.
The late night shows have expired into the midnight.
The milky moon stands...
Gigi plays it like a harp.
The melodies layer, layer up with every touch that resounds upon the next
to the Blue Danube Waltz and fall to a nocturne.
The stickiness of a honey trove on her pointer finger that strokes alone
while the other hand orchestrates the harmonic inside the puffing violet underground and brings she and her most inward nerves to one consciousness.
When Gigi Goes to town, it's raining outside.
The late night shows have expired into the midnight.
The milky moon stands...
#MothersDay
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Poetikmind
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Poem Published
14th May 2017 2:04pm
14th May 2017 2:04pm
Mother...Special
Happy Mother's Day, to all the Du moms*
I can recall few things better
than the scent of breakfast
in the kitchen, mom toiling
at the stove, preparing
sustenance for her family...
Oh how the food tasted,
like love being swallowed...
I remember days after school
another in a long line, of bitter
encounters with classless
jerks who taunted everything
thing about the not popular
kid in class...mom always
pulled out that 'magic
soothing potion' (her heart)
to make mine a bit...
I can recall few things better
than the scent of breakfast
in the kitchen, mom toiling
at the stove, preparing
sustenance for her family...
Oh how the food tasted,
like love being swallowed...
I remember days after school
another in a long line, of bitter
encounters with classless
jerks who taunted everything
thing about the not popular
kid in class...mom always
pulled out that 'magic
soothing potion' (her heart)
to make mine a bit...
#mother
#childhood
#MothersDay #memories
#MothersDay #memories
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KDAmB
Poem Published
23rd May 2016 6:18pm
23rd May 2016 6:18pm
A belated [single] mother's day tribute!
You began this journey a tender soul
a bundle of joy a bouncing foal
your innocence melted every heart
when You didn't win wanted re-start
Then came the school and friends were made
time just flew with subjects, grades
then came the phase when glam was good
You felt lonely and mis-understood
Adolescent came with adventures, flames
had your share of hurtful games
friends fell away with passage of times
barely a memory of nursery rhymes
Then you met the one you thought meant for You
dreams are off priorities anew
what began...
a bundle of joy a bouncing foal
your innocence melted every heart
when You didn't win wanted re-start
Then came the school and friends were made
time just flew with subjects, grades
then came the phase when glam was good
You felt lonely and mis-understood
Adolescent came with adventures, flames
had your share of hurtful games
friends fell away with passage of times
barely a memory of nursery rhymes
Then you met the one you thought meant for You
dreams are off priorities anew
what began...
#MothersDay
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PoisonApple
Poem Published
12th May 2015 1:39pm
12th May 2015 1:39pm
For My Mother
(Sorry it's a little late but I wrote this for my Mother for Mother's Day)
The flowers will dance.
The birds will sing.
To thee on this Mothers' Day.
The children are grateful.
The Father is thankful.
For being blessed with your presence every day.
Good times come and go.
But forever we will know.
Mom will change our skies to blue from gray.
From birth to now.
To this Queen we shall bow.
For her happiness we pray.
Her knight in shining armor.
Will make sure the kids shower her.
With all the love she deserves...
The flowers will dance.
The birds will sing.
To thee on this Mothers' Day.
The children are grateful.
The Father is thankful.
For being blessed with your presence every day.
Good times come and go.
But forever we will know.
Mom will change our skies to blue from gray.
From birth to now.
To this Queen we shall bow.
For her happiness we pray.
Her knight in shining armor.
Will make sure the kids shower her.
With all the love she deserves...
#MothersDay
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PurplePandas
Poem Published
30th Jul 2013 1:42am
30th Jul 2013 1:42am
Mother's Day Poem
I love how you always care.
When I need you, You're always there.
One day isn't enough to show you how much I appreciate you.
I wish I had money to get you something, but this is all I can do.
If it wasn't for you, I wouldn't be here now.
You've always put up with me making me wonder "How?".
You're the most beautiful person I have ever seen.
Even when we're both being mean.
We always have these little play fights.
But, I know I'm safe whenever I go to sleep at night.
One time, I accidentally dropped groceries on the floor. ...
When I need you, You're always there.
One day isn't enough to show you how much I appreciate you.
I wish I had money to get you something, but this is all I can do.
If it wasn't for you, I wouldn't be here now.
You've always put up with me making me wonder "How?".
You're the most beautiful person I have ever seen.
Even when we're both being mean.
We always have these little play fights.
But, I know I'm safe whenever I go to sleep at night.
One time, I accidentally dropped groceries on the floor. ...
#MothersDay
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paolajane16
PKR.virus
PKR.virus
Poem Published
15th May 2013 2:17pm
15th May 2013 2:17pm
A song for Mother's Day
I feel the love you bestow,
Love such unconditional I owe.
Oh mother, though it is painful to give birth,
Vast warmth, a mother still has unearth!
Ease your fear, Oh mother dear!
You shall not shed a single tear,
Of God's loving arms, Daddy's up there,
Underneath the golden sky with angels and flare.
Mommy, thank you for being strong,
Of sorrows and tears you surpassed alone,
Mother's worth can be as lavishing
My verses might not be as promising
Yet I'll sing this song just...
Love such unconditional I owe.
Oh mother, though it is painful to give birth,
Vast warmth, a mother still has unearth!
Ease your fear, Oh mother dear!
You shall not shed a single tear,
Of God's loving arms, Daddy's up there,
Underneath the golden sky with angels and flare.
Mommy, thank you for being strong,
Of sorrows and tears you surpassed alone,
Mother's worth can be as lavishing
My verses might not be as promising
Yet I'll sing this song just...
#MothersDay
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lunaz69
Poem Published
12th May 2013 12:31pm
12th May 2013 12:31pm
For All Of Us Moms
for all the Band-Aids we placed on knees
and long talks about the birds and the bees
for all the things that we thought we knew
and the nightmares we talked them through
for all the tears that we wiped away
and all the hugs at the end of each day
for all the rides to your games
and the encouragement we gave
for all the joy brought into our lives
we love, cherish and thank God for you every night
Love Mom
Xoxoxo
Happy Mothers Day
and long talks about the birds and the bees
for all the things that we thought we knew
and the nightmares we talked them through
for all the tears that we wiped away
and all the hugs at the end of each day
for all the rides to your games
and the encouragement we gave
for all the joy brought into our lives
we love, cherish and thank God for you every night
Love Mom
Xoxoxo
Happy Mothers Day
#motherhood
#MothersDay
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lifespuppet
Poem Published
11th May 2013 10:35pm
11th May 2013 10:35pm
Happy mothers day
It is yet another mothers day
I knelt and prayed
That these words will make it your way
Our lifes are not perfect but we have sun rays
We have each others love every day
Your my best friend even when things arnt right
Your my mother even when we fight
we make up and forgett
I love your charm and your witt
I hope these words ring true
Happy mothersday I love you
I knelt and prayed
That these words will make it your way
Our lifes are not perfect but we have sun rays
We have each others love every day
Your my best friend even when things arnt right
Your my mother even when we fight
we make up and forgett
I love your charm and your witt
I hope these words ring true
Happy mothersday I love you
#mother
#MothersDay
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