Poems About Life Goals Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about life goals seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
29th Dec 2024 11:41pm
29th Dec 2024 11:41pm
Three wishes...
I want to take Ed Sheeran to the planet
Mars and raise little cuddly puppy dogs.
Elon Musk - make my wish come true!
I want to dumb down all the people to
a mental stage close to Down Syndrome -
To make the world more peaceful.
Scientists? Do this and I'll pay you with sex!
I want the DEATH PENALTY back in all 50 states
and all around the world! But I get to flick the switch and decide who dies!!! It would be so awesome!
God? Do I have your fucking blessing on this?
Mars and raise little cuddly puppy dogs.
Elon Musk - make my wish come true!
I want to dumb down all the people to
a mental stage close to Down Syndrome -
To make the world more peaceful.
Scientists? Do this and I'll pay you with sex!
I want the DEATH PENALTY back in all 50 states
and all around the world! But I get to flick the switch and decide who dies!!! It would be so awesome!
God? Do I have your fucking blessing on this?
#LifeGoals
#wisdom
83 reads
4 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 11:54pm
11th Dec 2024 11:54pm
life goals
the thing about football
is it’s just twenty two players on a
pitch kicking
around a ball on yer
head, my son, oh yeah get in
there, mate, yesss!
is it’s just twenty two players on a
pitch kicking
around a ball on yer
head, my son, oh yeah get in
there, mate, yesss!
#LifeGoals
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4 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 12:54pm
11th Dec 2024 12:54pm
The 7 Wonders Of Life...
Joy, hope, forgiveness, wonder, friendship, family, and love:
Joy is satisfaction! Nothing more. YOU set the standard. No one else!
Hope is wanting to survive. Whether you do or not is the flip of a coin. It's not your coin!
Forgiveness is strength or weakness - no middle road!
Wonder is a waste of time. Stopping to think - your clock keeps ticking!
Friendship is extending trust and hoping you don't get bit in the ass!
Family are given to you. You can accept them or discard them!
Love is the need of having...
Joy is satisfaction! Nothing more. YOU set the standard. No one else!
Hope is wanting to survive. Whether you do or not is the flip of a coin. It's not your coin!
Forgiveness is strength or weakness - no middle road!
Wonder is a waste of time. Stopping to think - your clock keeps ticking!
Friendship is extending trust and hoping you don't get bit in the ass!
Family are given to you. You can accept them or discard them!
Love is the need of having...
#apathy
#LifeCycle
#LifeGoals
116 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 9:44am
30th Nov 2024 9:44am
loose ends
What secrets do you keep in the shadows of your mind?
What dreams do you chase when no one else can find?
Who was the first to break your heart, to make you cry?
What memories remain like echoes from a distant sky?
Do you have a place where you retreat to be alone?
What thoughts run through your head at home?
Have you ever whispered truths into the night air?
What fears do you hide, pretending they don't exist?
When you smile, is it genuine or is it a mask you wear?
What scars do you carry, sensitive and naked?
Who do...
What dreams do you chase when no one else can find?
Who was the first to break your heart, to make you cry?
What memories remain like echoes from a distant sky?
Do you have a place where you retreat to be alone?
What thoughts run through your head at home?
Have you ever whispered truths into the night air?
What fears do you hide, pretending they don't exist?
When you smile, is it genuine or is it a mask you wear?
What scars do you carry, sensitive and naked?
Who do...
#dreams
#emotional
#LifeCycle
#LifeGoals
#secrets
153 reads
6 Comments
Onyxceila
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 5:44am
29th Nov 2024 5:44am
The Oracles Song
To feel the light's nurturing embrace,
Is to have danced within darkness’s gaze.
For from the womb of suffering,
Is the place where strength is born.
the bosom of pain,
Where happiness drank,
remains the place
knowledge is stored.
through the act of deceit,
Truth is conceived.
the belly of hatred,
Where Love plants its seed.
in life’s internal furnace,
Balance is believed.
For to drink from an empty cup,
Does no one any good.
And to pour into a cup too full
Yields only...
Is to have danced within darkness’s gaze.
For from the womb of suffering,
Is the place where strength is born.
the bosom of pain,
Where happiness drank,
remains the place
knowledge is stored.
through the act of deceit,
Truth is conceived.
the belly of hatred,
Where Love plants its seed.
in life’s internal furnace,
Balance is believed.
For to drink from an empty cup,
Does no one any good.
And to pour into a cup too full
Yields only...
#acceptance
#gratitude
#inspirational #LifeGoals
#inspirational #LifeGoals
126 reads
1 Comment
AprylNovember
a. r. m.
a. r. m.
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 5:34am
28th Nov 2024 5:34am
Decisions, Decisions
The hardest decision.
Is the one with no choice.
An arduous attrition.
Of effort with no point.
A.R.M.
Is the one with no choice.
An arduous attrition.
Of effort with no point.
A.R.M.
#acceptance
#LifeGoals
125 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 8:13pm
26th Nov 2024 8:13pm
Always in a daze
Always in a daze
I live the same routine over & over again
Wear that empty gaze
The one that keeps me
Sane!
Don't crucify me
You'll see
Inside I'm fragile....I'm weak
So much more to lose
if I don't try
But I cannot change
I'll just burn the ambition inside
Stared into a void
Of emptiness and a bitter feeling
Too much time alone
Leads me into darkness, dreaming
This road will take me nowhere
Suffocates my will
Today though, I will try again to be something I am not
I live the same routine over & over again
Wear that empty gaze
The one that keeps me
Sane!
Don't crucify me
You'll see
Inside I'm fragile....I'm weak
So much more to lose
if I don't try
But I cannot change
I'll just burn the ambition inside
Stared into a void
Of emptiness and a bitter feeling
Too much time alone
Leads me into darkness, dreaming
This road will take me nowhere
Suffocates my will
Today though, I will try again to be something I am not
#boredom
#dark
#LifeGoals
#loneliness
#vulnerability
108 reads
7 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 11:15am
20th Nov 2024 11:15am
Pro Death
Too many humans
Mankind is off track
The Black Plague was a dick
But it needs to come back
Our world's spinning faster
Like a playground carousel
With a trillion kids pushing
Until it flings us off to hell
China may be dystopia
But they got one thing right
One child per family
We could use their insight
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'll say it again
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'm not "Pro-Life"
So save your breath
And I'm not...
Mankind is off track
The Black Plague was a dick
But it needs to come back
Our world's spinning faster
Like a playground carousel
With a trillion kids pushing
Until it flings us off to hell
China may be dystopia
But they got one thing right
One child per family
We could use their insight
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'll say it again
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'm not "Pro-Life"
So save your breath
And I'm not...
#CallToAction
#death
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#satirical
104 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 00:09am
17th Nov 2024 00:09am
LET'S TAKE BACK THE WORLD
As we exchange thoughts on the situations, we have been subject to by the POWERS, that be. 🤨 HOW much more you have to 👁️ to really get the full, picture of the real world. 🌎 Not for the betterment of the American citizens. For a righteous change, is in motion just
moving at full 🚅 speed, to change it all together. For the betterment of life, and liberty and justice ⚖️ for all as ONE. THE NEW AMERICAN WORLD 🌎 FOR IT'S ALWAYS BEEN GOOD VERSUS THAT IS WHAT IS REALLY SEEN AS EVIL. 👿 FOR A CHANGE IS GONNA COME, TO CHANGE...
moving at full 🚅 speed, to change it all together. For the betterment of life, and liberty and justice ⚖️ for all as ONE. THE NEW AMERICAN WORLD 🌎 FOR IT'S ALWAYS BEEN GOOD VERSUS THAT IS WHAT IS REALLY SEEN AS EVIL. 👿 FOR A CHANGE IS GONNA COME, TO CHANGE...
#healing
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeGoals
#PersonalGrowth
#StreamOfConsciousness
95 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 11:12am
14th Nov 2024 11:12am
Creative Nights
I feel fire in my eyes
creative thoughts in the night
Losing my mind
going blind
what's this laughter
what's that sign
The night
where ideas and decisions dance
planning my next move
in the morning I'll take that chance
creative thoughts in the night
Losing my mind
going blind
what's this laughter
what's that sign
The night
where ideas and decisions dance
planning my next move
in the morning I'll take that chance
#LifeGoals
#night
93 reads
10 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
12th Nov 2024 5:31am
12th Nov 2024 5:31am
Principles of Success in Haiku
Timed Achievement
A goal timed with care,
each step woven with purpose,
the end line in sight.
Peaceful Resolve
Clear conscience, like light,
guides calmly toward your aim,
strong and sure of self.
Fading in Shadows
Misery awaits,
for those pleasing all but self
dreams lost in shadow.
Bound by Purpose
A man bound within,
purpose wrapped tight in silence,
seeking a new path.
Ignition of Dreams
Mediocre sparks, ...
A goal timed with care,
each step woven with purpose,
the end line in sight.
Peaceful Resolve
Clear conscience, like light,
guides calmly toward your aim,
strong and sure of self.
Fading in Shadows
Misery awaits,
for those pleasing all but self
dreams lost in shadow.
Bound by Purpose
A man bound within,
purpose wrapped tight in silence,
seeking a new path.
Ignition of Dreams
Mediocre sparks, ...
#LifeGoals
#PersonalGrowth
#SelfDiscovery #success
#SelfDiscovery #success
88 reads
2 Comments
TimWombles
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 2:59pm
2nd Nov 2024 2:59pm
If only I had been
Do I believe in reincarnation, the answer is no
I don't think there is a heaven, we got no place to go
I believe my ship came and went
I think my tokens have all been spent
When my chances came, I took the bus
I've got nothing left but total disgust
Think my world is coming to an end
I'm left without a penny to spend
I wasn't brave enough to do something with my life
~Chorus~
If only I had taken that chance
If only I had stepped out on that limb
Maybe I could have been someone
Instead of sinking I could...
I don't think there is a heaven, we got no place to go
I believe my ship came and went
I think my tokens have all been spent
When my chances came, I took the bus
I've got nothing left but total disgust
Think my world is coming to an end
I'm left without a penny to spend
I wasn't brave enough to do something with my life
~Chorus~
If only I had taken that chance
If only I had stepped out on that limb
Maybe I could have been someone
Instead of sinking I could...
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#regret
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