Poems About Life Goals Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about life goals seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
MalcolmG
Poem Published
12th Nov 2024 5:31am
12th Nov 2024 5:31am
Principles of Success in Haiku
Timed Achievement
A goal timed with care,
each step woven with purpose,
the end line in sight.
Peaceful Resolve
Clear conscience, like light,
guides calmly toward your aim,
strong and sure of self.
Fading in Shadows
Misery awaits,
for those pleasing all but self
dreams lost in shadow.
Bound by Purpose
A man bound within,
purpose wrapped tight in silence,
seeking a new path.
Ignition of Dreams
Mediocre sparks, ...
A goal timed with care,
each step woven with purpose,
the end line in sight.
Peaceful Resolve
Clear conscience, like light,
guides calmly toward your aim,
strong and sure of self.
Fading in Shadows
Misery awaits,
for those pleasing all but self
dreams lost in shadow.
Bound by Purpose
A man bound within,
purpose wrapped tight in silence,
seeking a new path.
Ignition of Dreams
Mediocre sparks, ...
#LifeGoals
#PersonalGrowth
#SelfDiscovery #success
#SelfDiscovery #success
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ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 1:03am
7th Nov 2024 1:03am
Prosthetic Gardens
Is this wellness or just the illusion of it
Getting hung up on luxuries in the illusion of what is need
Price gouging desperation
Manufactures of the living
Manipulating circumstances by strings weaved through the hands of multiple marionettes
How do I learn to lead this dance when I’m getting pulled in every direction
When all everyone knows is what not to do
Lording over us at the mercy of this pride
Enlighten me with outdated wisdom in yesterdays landscape
Could you navigate it all so well today
Dysfunctions on repeat, the panic...
Getting hung up on luxuries in the illusion of what is need
Price gouging desperation
Manufactures of the living
Manipulating circumstances by strings weaved through the hands of multiple marionettes
How do I learn to lead this dance when I’m getting pulled in every direction
When all everyone knows is what not to do
Lording over us at the mercy of this pride
Enlighten me with outdated wisdom in yesterdays landscape
Could you navigate it all so well today
Dysfunctions on repeat, the panic...
#anxiety
#dreams
#family
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
33 reads
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ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2024 5:40pm
3rd Nov 2024 5:40pm
Lying Sorrows
At the foot of a mountain
Every precipice a false summit
Every peak stands tall but is still just a valley
Tending to dying gardens on repeat
Every season of our glory is temporal
Every breath we take but a means to an end
Caught in routine ruts and count downs to moments of fleeting beauty
Constructing a perishing kingdom
A slow fix for a sinking ship
Capsizing, it’s a losing battle to salvage the vessel
No escapes but for rescues
Living like this is the end all be all
Making our beds in transition
This waiting room...
Every precipice a false summit
Every peak stands tall but is still just a valley
Tending to dying gardens on repeat
Every season of our glory is temporal
Every breath we take but a means to an end
Caught in routine ruts and count downs to moments of fleeting beauty
Constructing a perishing kingdom
A slow fix for a sinking ship
Capsizing, it’s a losing battle to salvage the vessel
No escapes but for rescues
Living like this is the end all be all
Making our beds in transition
This waiting room...
#faith
#LifeCycle
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#spiritual
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TimWombles
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 2:59pm
2nd Nov 2024 2:59pm
If only I had been
Do I believe in reincarnation, the answer is no
I don't think there is a heaven, we got no place to go
I believe my ship came and went
I think my tokens have all been spent
When my chances came, I took the bus
I've got nothing left but total disgust
Think my world is coming to an end
I'm left without a penny to spend
I wasn't brave enough to do something with my life
~Chorus~
If only I had taken that chance
If only I had stepped out on that limb
Maybe I could have been someone
Instead of sinking I could...
I don't think there is a heaven, we got no place to go
I believe my ship came and went
I think my tokens have all been spent
When my chances came, I took the bus
I've got nothing left but total disgust
Think my world is coming to an end
I'm left without a penny to spend
I wasn't brave enough to do something with my life
~Chorus~
If only I had taken that chance
If only I had stepped out on that limb
Maybe I could have been someone
Instead of sinking I could...
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#regret
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Naajir
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 5:55am
1st Nov 2024 5:55am
What's the occasion?...
Lost your job? Let's drink
Got a new job? Hey, let's drink
It's Monday....Let's drink
Got a new job? Hey, let's drink
It's Monday....Let's drink
#alcohol
#funny
#LifeGoals
78 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 10:15pm
29th Oct 2024 10:15pm
Accolade
It's hard to tell just what the years will do
and how or why we will be led astray
into a place where nothing makes our day
more than routine melancholy anew.
Youth does nothing so well
as to get its nose out of joint,
and to keep it there...
where no humility will check it.
Old age be praised.
and how or why we will be led astray
into a place where nothing makes our day
more than routine melancholy anew.
Youth does nothing so well
as to get its nose out of joint,
and to keep it there...
where no humility will check it.
Old age be praised.
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
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2 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 9:09am
27th Oct 2024 9:09am
October Poems 2024 >> what is my life
A poem for each day of the month in which I was born
DAY 26
what is my life
what is my life upon this golden strand,
tomorrow gone, although now, here, i stand,
a breath of shallow air upon the lung
of God’s great universe, where i am flung?
i am a blink of eye sparked by a glimpse
of paradise, from which man, fallen, limps
upon an earth that swallows soon his rhyme,
to make him but a blot in space and time.
i am a word scarce fallen from the lips,
a dance scarce cradled by a mother’s hips,
a butterfly...
DAY 26
what is my life
what is my life upon this golden strand,
tomorrow gone, although now, here, i stand,
a breath of shallow air upon the lung
of God’s great universe, where i am flung?
i am a blink of eye sparked by a glimpse
of paradise, from which man, fallen, limps
upon an earth that swallows soon his rhyme,
to make him but a blot in space and time.
i am a word scarce fallen from the lips,
a dance scarce cradled by a mother’s hips,
a butterfly...
#birthday
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeCycle
#LifeGoals
#TruthOfLife
119 reads
2 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 10:46pm
22nd Oct 2024 10:46pm
One thousand mile journey
Taking a first step
Another rep
One more punch
Another day
Of pain
Feeling the rain
As I train
One mile down
Almost One thousand
I may be out of my mind
But I don’t want to fall behind
For life is one big climb
I may break
And feel ache
But it’s all for the making
Of me
Light on my feet
I remember to breathe
Another rep
One more punch
Another day
Of pain
Feeling the rain
As I train
One mile down
Almost One thousand
I may be out of my mind
But I don’t want to fall behind
For life is one big climb
I may break
And feel ache
But it’s all for the making
Of me
Light on my feet
I remember to breathe
#LifeGoals
#meditation
#passion
#SelfWorth
#success
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King_Seraphiel
Joshua Jamal
Joshua Jamal
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 2:25am
11th Oct 2024 2:25am
Crawl, Stand, Walk
Hi World, I've realized that I'm content/ I use to fight my reality and didn't relent/ but the more I changed the more I began to resent/ My recent changes/ my personal changing stages/ only brought me back to the place of lack/ almost like I'm only able to stack and or perpetuate the problems in my life/ Frustration grew and I thought my means of salvation is through the barrel of a gun or knife/ My personal Strife kept me at a low state/ However I'm not mad/ I guess you can say I'm glad/ it seemed so bad and I was at a place where I kept saying I wish things were different or I wish I had/...
#choices
#LifeGoals
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drone
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 12:17pm
8th Oct 2024 12:17pm
I Can Do This
It is Dangerous
To have Faith
In yourself
Without
A little Commonsense
To Understand
The abilities
You have now
Need to be
Upgraded
To the Abilities
You need to have
To have Faith
You can do
What your thinking
Or one will
Crash and burn
Into the scrub lands
Of twisted Bitterness
Of what ifs
Poor me denials
To have Faith
In yourself
Without
A little Commonsense
To Understand
The abilities
You have now
Need to be
Upgraded
To the Abilities
You need to have
To have Faith
You can do
What your thinking
Or one will
Crash and burn
Into the scrub lands
Of twisted Bitterness
Of what ifs
Poor me denials
#determination
#LifeGoals
#motivational
#risk
#wisdom
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cabcool
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 7:38am
8th Oct 2024 7:38am
October Poems 2024 >> the flicker of my flame
A poem for each day of the month in which I was born
October 08
the flicker of my flame
the plans i’ve planned have withered in my hands,
upon whose page have raged my shattered dreams;
my golden hopes have slithered, like quicksands,
out of my grasp, into the cracks and seams
of circumstance. if i could dance again
upon young rocks whose shocks my spirit spurred,
or hoola-hoop across the vast terrain,
where danger and adventure lines are blurred:
might not then i my filigree again
replenish well, with...
October 08
the flicker of my flame
the plans i’ve planned have withered in my hands,
upon whose page have raged my shattered dreams;
my golden hopes have slithered, like quicksands,
out of my grasp, into the cracks and seams
of circumstance. if i could dance again
upon young rocks whose shocks my spirit spurred,
or hoola-hoop across the vast terrain,
where danger and adventure lines are blurred:
might not then i my filigree again
replenish well, with...
#birthday
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeCycle
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
69 reads
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oldmanG
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 8:17pm
7th Oct 2024 8:17pm
Just Speak
As I stare at the spiders web
I wonder what comes next something joyful
Or some pain put back into me
Each minute passes we think there are more than these
Next moment life changes rearrange my soul
So if you’re breathing suck all life out of it
Don’t go to your bed of roses regrets in your casket
Spit it out your Bible anything that passions you
You can’t take anything with you across the river
So stand up strong chest out
The world can’t hurt that I will not allow
Put your life’s dream into...
I wonder what comes next something joyful
Or some pain put back into me
Each minute passes we think there are more than these
Next moment life changes rearrange my soul
So if you’re breathing suck all life out of it
Don’t go to your bed of roses regrets in your casket
Spit it out your Bible anything that passions you
You can’t take anything with you across the river
So stand up strong chest out
The world can’t hurt that I will not allow
Put your life’s dream into...
#courage
#dreams
#LifeGoals #SelfWorth
#LifeGoals #SelfWorth
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