Poems About Life Goals Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about life goals seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:15am
Yesterday 11:15am
Pro Death
Too many humans
Mankind is off track
The Black Plague was a dick
But it needs to come back
Our world's spinning faster
Like a playground carousel
With a trillion kids pushing
Until it flings us off to hell
China may be dystopia
But they got one thing right
One child per family
We could use their insight
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'll say it again
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'm not "Pro-Life"
So save your breath
And I'm not...
Mankind is off track
The Black Plague was a dick
But it needs to come back
Our world's spinning faster
Like a playground carousel
With a trillion kids pushing
Until it flings us off to hell
China may be dystopia
But they got one thing right
One child per family
We could use their insight
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'll say it again
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'm not "Pro-Life"
So save your breath
And I'm not...
#CallToAction
#death
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#satirical
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2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 00:09am
17th Nov 2024 00:09am
LET'S TAKE BACK THE WORLD
As we exchange thoughts on the situations, we have been subject to by the POWERS, that be. 🤨 HOW much more you have to 👁️ to really get the full, picture of the real world. 🌎 Not for the betterment of the American citizens. For a righteous change, is in motion just
moving at full 🚅 speed, to change it all together. For the betterment of life, and liberty and justice ⚖️ for all as ONE. THE NEW AMERICAN WORLD 🌎 FOR IT'S ALWAYS BEEN GOOD VERSUS THAT IS WHAT IS REALLY SEEN AS EVIL. 👿 FOR A CHANGE IS GONNA COME, TO CHANGE...
moving at full 🚅 speed, to change it all together. For the betterment of life, and liberty and justice ⚖️ for all as ONE. THE NEW AMERICAN WORLD 🌎 FOR IT'S ALWAYS BEEN GOOD VERSUS THAT IS WHAT IS REALLY SEEN AS EVIL. 👿 FOR A CHANGE IS GONNA COME, TO CHANGE...
#healing
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeGoals
#PersonalGrowth
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 11:12am
14th Nov 2024 11:12am
Creative Nights
I feel fire in my eyes
creative thoughts in the night
Losing my mind
going blind
what's this laughter
what's that sign
The night
where ideas and decisions dance
planning my next move
in the morning I'll take that chance
creative thoughts in the night
Losing my mind
going blind
what's this laughter
what's that sign
The night
where ideas and decisions dance
planning my next move
in the morning I'll take that chance
#LifeGoals
#night
47 reads
10 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
12th Nov 2024 5:31am
12th Nov 2024 5:31am
Principles of Success in Haiku
Timed Achievement
A goal timed with care,
each step woven with purpose,
the end line in sight.
Peaceful Resolve
Clear conscience, like light,
guides calmly toward your aim,
strong and sure of self.
Fading in Shadows
Misery awaits,
for those pleasing all but self
dreams lost in shadow.
Bound by Purpose
A man bound within,
purpose wrapped tight in silence,
seeking a new path.
Ignition of Dreams
Mediocre sparks, ...
A goal timed with care,
each step woven with purpose,
the end line in sight.
Peaceful Resolve
Clear conscience, like light,
guides calmly toward your aim,
strong and sure of self.
Fading in Shadows
Misery awaits,
for those pleasing all but self
dreams lost in shadow.
Bound by Purpose
A man bound within,
purpose wrapped tight in silence,
seeking a new path.
Ignition of Dreams
Mediocre sparks, ...
#LifeGoals
#PersonalGrowth
#SelfDiscovery #success
#SelfDiscovery #success
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2 Comments
ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 1:03am
7th Nov 2024 1:03am
Prosthetic Gardens
Is this wellness or just the illusion of it
Getting hung up on luxuries in the illusion of what is need
Price gouging desperation
Manufactures of the living
Manipulating circumstances by strings weaved through the hands of multiple marionettes
How do I learn to lead this dance when I’m getting pulled in every direction
When all everyone knows is what not to do
Lording over us at the mercy of this pride
Enlighten me with outdated wisdom in yesterdays landscape
Could you navigate it all so well today
Dysfunctions on repeat, the panic...
Getting hung up on luxuries in the illusion of what is need
Price gouging desperation
Manufactures of the living
Manipulating circumstances by strings weaved through the hands of multiple marionettes
How do I learn to lead this dance when I’m getting pulled in every direction
When all everyone knows is what not to do
Lording over us at the mercy of this pride
Enlighten me with outdated wisdom in yesterdays landscape
Could you navigate it all so well today
Dysfunctions on repeat, the panic...
#anxiety
#dreams
#family
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
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ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2024 5:40pm
3rd Nov 2024 5:40pm
Lying Sorrows
At the foot of a mountain
Every precipice a false summit
Every peak stands tall but is still just a valley
Tending to dying gardens on repeat
Every season of our glory is temporal
Every breath we take but a means to an end
Caught in routine ruts and count downs to moments of fleeting beauty
Constructing a perishing kingdom
A slow fix for a sinking ship
Capsizing, it’s a losing battle to salvage the vessel
No escapes but for rescues
Living like this is the end all be all
Making our beds in transition
This waiting room...
Every precipice a false summit
Every peak stands tall but is still just a valley
Tending to dying gardens on repeat
Every season of our glory is temporal
Every breath we take but a means to an end
Caught in routine ruts and count downs to moments of fleeting beauty
Constructing a perishing kingdom
A slow fix for a sinking ship
Capsizing, it’s a losing battle to salvage the vessel
No escapes but for rescues
Living like this is the end all be all
Making our beds in transition
This waiting room...
#faith
#LifeCycle
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#spiritual
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TimWombles
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 2:59pm
2nd Nov 2024 2:59pm
If only I had been
Do I believe in reincarnation, the answer is no
I don't think there is a heaven, we got no place to go
I believe my ship came and went
I think my tokens have all been spent
When my chances came, I took the bus
I've got nothing left but total disgust
Think my world is coming to an end
I'm left without a penny to spend
I wasn't brave enough to do something with my life
~Chorus~
If only I had taken that chance
If only I had stepped out on that limb
Maybe I could have been someone
Instead of sinking I could...
I don't think there is a heaven, we got no place to go
I believe my ship came and went
I think my tokens have all been spent
When my chances came, I took the bus
I've got nothing left but total disgust
Think my world is coming to an end
I'm left without a penny to spend
I wasn't brave enough to do something with my life
~Chorus~
If only I had taken that chance
If only I had stepped out on that limb
Maybe I could have been someone
Instead of sinking I could...
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#regret
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Naajir
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 5:55am
1st Nov 2024 5:55am
What's the occasion?...
Lost your job? Let's drink
Got a new job? Hey, let's drink
It's Monday....Let's drink
Got a new job? Hey, let's drink
It's Monday....Let's drink
#alcohol
#funny
#LifeGoals
96 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 10:15pm
29th Oct 2024 10:15pm
Accolade
It's hard to tell just what the years will do
and how or why we will be led astray
into a place where nothing makes our day
more than routine melancholy anew.
Youth does nothing so well
as to get its nose out of joint,
and to keep it there...
where no humility will check it.
Old age be praised.
and how or why we will be led astray
into a place where nothing makes our day
more than routine melancholy anew.
Youth does nothing so well
as to get its nose out of joint,
and to keep it there...
where no humility will check it.
Old age be praised.
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
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2 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 9:09am
27th Oct 2024 9:09am
October Poems 2024 >> what is my life
A poem for each day of the month in which I was born
DAY 26
what is my life
what is my life upon this golden strand,
tomorrow gone, although now, here, i stand,
a breath of shallow air upon the lung
of God’s great universe, where i am flung?
i am a blink of eye sparked by a glimpse
of paradise, from which man, fallen, limps
upon an earth that swallows soon his rhyme,
to make him but a blot in space and time.
i am a word scarce fallen from the lips,
a dance scarce cradled by a mother’s hips,
a butterfly...
DAY 26
what is my life
what is my life upon this golden strand,
tomorrow gone, although now, here, i stand,
a breath of shallow air upon the lung
of God’s great universe, where i am flung?
i am a blink of eye sparked by a glimpse
of paradise, from which man, fallen, limps
upon an earth that swallows soon his rhyme,
to make him but a blot in space and time.
i am a word scarce fallen from the lips,
a dance scarce cradled by a mother’s hips,
a butterfly...
#birthday
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeCycle
#LifeGoals
#TruthOfLife
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Whackytraveler
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 10:46pm
22nd Oct 2024 10:46pm
One thousand mile journey
Taking a first step
Another rep
One more punch
Another day
Of pain
Feeling the rain
As I train
One mile down
Almost One thousand
I may be out of my mind
But I don’t want to fall behind
For life is one big climb
I may break
And feel ache
But it’s all for the making
Of me
Light on my feet
I remember to breathe
Another rep
One more punch
Another day
Of pain
Feeling the rain
As I train
One mile down
Almost One thousand
I may be out of my mind
But I don’t want to fall behind
For life is one big climb
I may break
And feel ache
But it’s all for the making
Of me
Light on my feet
I remember to breathe
#LifeGoals
#meditation
#passion
#SelfWorth
#success
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King_Seraphiel
Joshua Jamal
Joshua Jamal
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 2:25am
11th Oct 2024 2:25am
Crawl, Stand, Walk
Hi World, I've realized that I'm content/ I use to fight my reality and didn't relent/ but the more I changed the more I began to resent/ My recent changes/ my personal changing stages/ only brought me back to the place of lack/ almost like I'm only able to stack and or perpetuate the problems in my life/ Frustration grew and I thought my means of salvation is through the barrel of a gun or knife/ My personal Strife kept me at a low state/ However I'm not mad/ I guess you can say I'm glad/ it seemed so bad and I was at a place where I kept saying I wish things were different or I wish I had/...
#choices
#LifeGoals
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