Poems About Life Goals Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about life goals seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:27am
Yesterday 00:27am
THE PATH AHEAD I CHOOSE TO TAKE (Sat., 4-5-2025, 12:00pm, Palm Springs, California)
this moment too
in timeless time
beyond
all it isn t
as with all things
in life
and this world
indeed nonetheless
still very simply
is
as it is
left on my own
for months and years
at a time
in my life s
journey
with no one else
present
to share it
all with
indeed at times
has left me feeling
so very alone
in this world
increasingly
growing more blind
indeed i know
i should still
feel grateful
for despite that fact
of my failing ...
in timeless time
beyond
all it isn t
as with all things
in life
and this world
indeed nonetheless
still very simply
is
as it is
left on my own
for months and years
at a time
in my life s
journey
with no one else
present
to share it
all with
indeed at times
has left me feeling
so very alone
in this world
increasingly
growing more blind
indeed i know
i should still
feel grateful
for despite that fact
of my failing ...
#acceptance
#healing
#LifeGoals
#MovingOn
#PersonalGrowth
19 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 3:33pm
2nd Mar 2025 3:33pm
The Road Back To You
All roads lead to something that we need in life
It's the something that leads us back to our inner-self
It's the something that leads us back to our inner-self
#identity
#LifeGoals
#minimalist #spiritual
#minimalist #spiritual
104 reads
13 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2025 1:36pm
22nd Feb 2025 1:36pm
We as one love
We as one love always and forever as we each change each others life and world. 🌍 For I knew that you were the one that was sent, from above to really brighten up my life and show me that love, does exist in some people's hearts and the minds of those who haven't given up, on finding that special one. For sure it was you and I together as one love, with honesty and truth and trust. FROM the very beginning of our paths crossing, like a shooting star shooting across the distance skies. For sure we both had our share of the make believe stories of lies, and false promises that required...
#determination
#happiness
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeGoals
#PersonalGrowth
100 reads
2 Comments
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
11th Feb 2025 4:13pm
11th Feb 2025 4:13pm
Looking Forward to Now
Today is our lump of clay
Open your eyes to present beauty that you surrounds
Make a masterpiece of every moment that comes and too quickly goes
Only you sit at the wheel shaping your day
Revealing your pain, joy, preoccupations, pleasures into whatever shape you choose
Reality can be influenced by your hands as they sculpt and your feet rotate your world
Overcome the urge to squash your art because it doesn’t look normal, like other artists in your studio of life
With patience, perseverance, love, and compassion for self and others create and display your...
Open your eyes to present beauty that you surrounds
Make a masterpiece of every moment that comes and too quickly goes
Only you sit at the wheel shaping your day
Revealing your pain, joy, preoccupations, pleasures into whatever shape you choose
Reality can be influenced by your hands as they sculpt and your feet rotate your world
Overcome the urge to squash your art because it doesn’t look normal, like other artists in your studio of life
With patience, perseverance, love, and compassion for self and others create and display your...
#happiness
#LifeCycle
#LifeGoals
#peace
#PersonalGrowth
109 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 7:43pm
28th Jan 2025 7:43pm
Roads to Nowhere
Roads to nowhere
Now that sure sounds ominous...roads to nowhere, Damn!!
Not really
It's not the roads to nowhere that are giving me trouble
It's the roads to everywhere that are driving me fucking crazy!
Literally!
Now that sure sounds ominous...roads to nowhere, Damn!!
Not really
It's not the roads to nowhere that are giving me trouble
It's the roads to everywhere that are driving me fucking crazy!
Literally!
#anxiety
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
169 reads
14 Comments
sweetdevil
CortneyB
CortneyB
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 10:37pm
19th Jan 2025 10:37pm
New Years Resolution
New year, new me
Every year, the same thing.
It's not to eat better or run more.
It's not to stop drinking.
I vow to learn to love myself,
More and more each day
To ignore the nasty words
That hateful people love to say.
I vow to love my nose,
Big as it may be.
I vow to love my belly,
Even if I am getting a bit "fluffy"
I vow to love my legs,
Stretchmarks and cellulite as well.
I should love every part of myself,
No matter how I bloat and swell.
But each year I catch myself,
Believing the...
Every year, the same thing.
It's not to eat better or run more.
It's not to stop drinking.
I vow to learn to love myself,
More and more each day
To ignore the nasty words
That hateful people love to say.
I vow to love my nose,
Big as it may be.
I vow to love my belly,
Even if I am getting a bit "fluffy"
I vow to love my legs,
Stretchmarks and cellulite as well.
I should love every part of myself,
No matter how I bloat and swell.
But each year I catch myself,
Believing the...
#LifeGoals
#SelfWorth
143 reads
3 Comments
Glaxian
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 3:52pm
14th Jan 2025 3:52pm
Step out
Arise sleeper and take up your plow.
Prepare your harnesses and oil your tack.
The ground has had its sabbath rest and is become disquieted.
Remove the rocks and rubble, burn the weeds and stubble.
Strike the fallow ground and don't relent.
Dig in and rip complacency away.
From sunrise until darkness covers the land.
The trumpet speaks, the time is right,
The earth rumbles in anticipation.
The sowers are holding the seed
waiting, watching, watching, hoping for broken ground.
The husbandmen and shepherds bounce from...
Prepare your harnesses and oil your tack.
The ground has had its sabbath rest and is become disquieted.
Remove the rocks and rubble, burn the weeds and stubble.
Strike the fallow ground and don't relent.
Dig in and rip complacency away.
From sunrise until darkness covers the land.
The trumpet speaks, the time is right,
The earth rumbles in anticipation.
The sowers are holding the seed
waiting, watching, watching, hoping for broken ground.
The husbandmen and shepherds bounce from...
#escape
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeGoals #MovingOn
#LifeGoals #MovingOn
92 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 10:03pm
6th Jan 2025 10:03pm
Love it or lump it
Fear is your death
Pain is your hate
War is always hell
Cursed,denied at the gate
Slaves looked as sinners
Priests dream of fucking whores
How much more can you accept
Doesn't matter if you lock your doors
Love brings on hurt,
A sick and twisted mind
Screams flow into a pool of blood
Faith is a joke, are you still blind?
Hope is a black hole
Gold might be on a nearby vine
The middle class is a dying dream
Start thinking of creative crimes
Pain is your hate
War is always hell
Cursed,denied at the gate
Slaves looked as sinners
Priests dream of fucking whores
How much more can you accept
Doesn't matter if you lock your doors
Love brings on hurt,
A sick and twisted mind
Screams flow into a pool of blood
Faith is a joke, are you still blind?
Hope is a black hole
Gold might be on a nearby vine
The middle class is a dying dream
Start thinking of creative crimes
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#philosophical
93 reads
4 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 11:00pm
5th Jan 2025 11:00pm
HoW YoU WaNt It ToDaY - RAP POETRY
I don’t really vibe with old tunes
Find them tired,
stuck inside closed room
Chasing shadows of a dying old moon
Tired of pretending they’re still shining
Stuck rewinding
That's how You Want it today
Gotta Hall pass , to walk past
recycled tunes that won't last
Old grooves, old moves
I’m creating somethin new,
sparks feel true,
You got me wrong if you think I'm fake it, rather struggle until I make it,
excuse me, while I take it
I’ll break it then make it new ...
Find them tired,
stuck inside closed room
Chasing shadows of a dying old moon
Tired of pretending they’re still shining
Stuck rewinding
That's how You Want it today
Gotta Hall pass , to walk past
recycled tunes that won't last
Old grooves, old moves
I’m creating somethin new,
sparks feel true,
You got me wrong if you think I'm fake it, rather struggle until I make it,
excuse me, while I take it
I’ll break it then make it new ...
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#music #myself
#music #myself
91 reads
0 Comments
Heisenberg68
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 00:52am
3rd Jan 2025 00:52am
Covenant of the Stars (A Poem for Progress)
Journey to the Stars
We stand at the edge of a dream,
A whisper carried on the winds of time,
From ancient sands where Abraham walked,
A covenant made beneath endless skies.
He set forth, not knowing the road,
A man with faith as his only map.
He left the known for the promise of more,
A seed of hope in the soil of the vast unknown.
And now, we too are called,
Not to one land, but to all the heavens.
To chart the stars and claim the void,
To carry life where silence reigns.
But the road is hard, the...
We stand at the edge of a dream,
A whisper carried on the winds of time,
From ancient sands where Abraham walked,
A covenant made beneath endless skies.
He set forth, not knowing the road,
A man with faith as his only map.
He left the known for the promise of more,
A seed of hope in the soil of the vast unknown.
And now, we too are called,
Not to one land, but to all the heavens.
To chart the stars and claim the void,
To carry life where silence reigns.
But the road is hard, the...
#LifeGoals
#stars
#travel #universe
#travel #universe
179 reads
0 Comments
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 3:26pm
1st Jan 2025 3:26pm
Senryu, Hope 001
How to stay alive
in two thousand twenty-five
old man's bucket list
in two thousand twenty-five
old man's bucket list
#LifeGoals
95 reads
2 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
29th Dec 2024 11:41pm
29th Dec 2024 11:41pm
Three wishes...
I want to take Ed Sheeran to the planet
Mars and raise little cuddly puppy dogs.
Elon Musk - make my wish come true!
I want to dumb down all the people to
a mental stage close to Down Syndrome -
To make the world more peaceful.
Scientists? Do this and I'll pay you with sex!
I want the DEATH PENALTY back in all 50 states
and all around the world! But I get to flick the switch and decide who dies!!! It would be so awesome!
God? Do I have your fucking blessing on this?
Mars and raise little cuddly puppy dogs.
Elon Musk - make my wish come true!
I want to dumb down all the people to
a mental stage close to Down Syndrome -
To make the world more peaceful.
Scientists? Do this and I'll pay you with sex!
I want the DEATH PENALTY back in all 50 states
and all around the world! But I get to flick the switch and decide who dies!!! It would be so awesome!
God? Do I have your fucking blessing on this?
#LifeGoals
#wisdom
81 reads
4 Comments
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