LGBT Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#LGBT
LGBT seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
27th Nov 2023 7:31pm
27th Nov 2023 7:31pm
LGBTQ Propaganda Poetry
A certain social media platform supports LGBTQ propaganda poems.
I wonder if it also supports anti-LGBTQ poems and free speech.
A gay poet wrote, “You don’t fall in love with the gender, you fall in love with the person.”
This author does not have accurate knowledge of the subject.
I will not pull my punches, I say that line is a heap of garbage with a stench.
An intelligent person would not invent such nonsensical reasoning.
In fact, no individual exists without an identifiable gender.
The mind cannot give a person a gender of his or her choice. ...
I wonder if it also supports anti-LGBTQ poems and free speech.
A gay poet wrote, “You don’t fall in love with the gender, you fall in love with the person.”
This author does not have accurate knowledge of the subject.
I will not pull my punches, I say that line is a heap of garbage with a stench.
An intelligent person would not invent such nonsensical reasoning.
In fact, no individual exists without an identifiable gender.
The mind cannot give a person a gender of his or her choice. ...
#WritingPoetry
#love
#women
#men
#LGBT
145 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Nov 2023 1:55pm
25th Nov 2023 1:55pm
Is She Really Herself Or Someone Else?
Now, I know that this may sound crazy but the
one minute, this party guest is too shy to look
at us. And the next, she stripped down and joined a
couple for a threesome like she's someone else there.
one minute, this party guest is too shy to look
at us. And the next, she stripped down and joined a
couple for a threesome like she's someone else there.
#LGBT
#fiction
#dialogue
#confusion
#sensual
195 reads
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PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
24th Oct 2023 3:53am
24th Oct 2023 3:53am
Agreement and Disagreement on Opinions
I write the truth about people who perform wicked deeds.
Some commenters say they disagree with most of my opinions.
I expect to hear this kind of comment from wicked persons.
If I wanted agreement, I would try to please the lovers of lies.
Who cares what brainwashed and misguided people think?
I never told anybody that I was seeking agreement on my work.
Truth cannot change whether everyone agrees with it or not.
Of course, those who hate truth will disagree with my opinions.
Some readers do not like my opinions because they hate truth. ...
Some commenters say they disagree with most of my opinions.
I expect to hear this kind of comment from wicked persons.
If I wanted agreement, I would try to please the lovers of lies.
Who cares what brainwashed and misguided people think?
I never told anybody that I was seeking agreement on my work.
Truth cannot change whether everyone agrees with it or not.
Of course, those who hate truth will disagree with my opinions.
Some readers do not like my opinions because they hate truth. ...
#LGBT
#politics
#religion
#WritingPoetry
#reading
184 reads
0 Comments
VerseVoyager
Poem Published
18th Oct 2023 5:14pm
18th Oct 2023 5:14pm
These f**king amazing Dreams
Bittersweet night
And it’s just the feeling
(or your stupid fight!)
The best feeling ever had
It’s the feeling with the smile
It’s excitement for the next…
For the next what?
The next dream about her
(Reality is calling, it’s possible)
Be brave
(maybe next dream)
And it’s just the feeling
(or your stupid fight!)
The best feeling ever had
It’s the feeling with the smile
It’s excitement for the next…
For the next what?
The next dream about her
(Reality is calling, it’s possible)
Be brave
(maybe next dream)
#identity
#dreams
#fear #LGBT
#fear #LGBT
183 reads
2 Comments
copingwithwords__
Poem Published
14th Oct 2023 7:46pm
14th Oct 2023 7:46pm
her
she lights me up,
inspires and enlightens me
she’s there, even though it can be bad
because of me,
and when it does
she’s there.
she’s the stars
i’m the moon
together we come down in full bloom
when she smiles, she heals the parts where others left scars.
this goes out to her.
she, who sees me
she, who hears me
she, who cares
and she, who dares.
i’ve made mistakes
with you, i’m sorry
i miss you
i miss what we are, were
i miss your arms around me
miss the smile on your...
inspires and enlightens me
she’s there, even though it can be bad
because of me,
and when it does
she’s there.
she’s the stars
i’m the moon
together we come down in full bloom
when she smiles, she heals the parts where others left scars.
this goes out to her.
she, who sees me
she, who hears me
she, who cares
and she, who dares.
i’ve made mistakes
with you, i’m sorry
i miss you
i miss what we are, were
i miss your arms around me
miss the smile on your...
#love
#LGBT
#inspirational
#admiration
#IMissYou
316 reads
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Sinfulsagittarius
6vibez
6vibez
Poem Published
21st Sep 2023 11:46am
21st Sep 2023 11:46am
Only for a night
Most nights drift to dawn
Within those lonely hours
My bruised heart mourns.
Slowly freezing
Becoming numb.
When the love stopped flowing
So did it’s thump.
My soul stares back at me
Blind to what the public sees.
The love i seek in broken vessels
That could never reciprocate my energy
That i feed them with ease
Till I’m questioning their intent to leave
Nothing to bargain
Nothing to hand over
Rolling over to hold you
Pulling you closer
This is just another night
To you? yes ...
Within those lonely hours
My bruised heart mourns.
Slowly freezing
Becoming numb.
When the love stopped flowing
So did it’s thump.
My soul stares back at me
Blind to what the public sees.
The love i seek in broken vessels
That could never reciprocate my energy
That i feed them with ease
Till I’m questioning their intent to leave
Nothing to bargain
Nothing to hand over
Rolling over to hold you
Pulling you closer
This is just another night
To you? yes ...
#love
#regret
#loneliness
#LGBT
#seductive
270 reads
1 Comment
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
18th Sep 2023 9:02pm
18th Sep 2023 9:02pm
Complex Love
what is
more complex
than love?
knowing most of your life
you’re not the same
as other people
dark desperate desires
you can
hardly admit
wondering
if you’re damaged goods
sick in mind and soul
don’t dare tell anyone
(they’ll know
you’re different)
will never love you
if they know
what you really are
looking at you in a way
you try not to look at yourself
as something twisted and wrong
keeping dark secrets locked away
wanting dark scary...
more complex
than love?
knowing most of your life
you’re not the same
as other people
dark desperate desires
you can
hardly admit
wondering
if you’re damaged goods
sick in mind and soul
don’t dare tell anyone
(they’ll know
you’re different)
will never love you
if they know
what you really are
looking at you in a way
you try not to look at yourself
as something twisted and wrong
keeping dark secrets locked away
wanting dark scary...
#relationships
#LGBT
#BDSM #dialogue
#BDSM #dialogue
380 reads
4 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
15th Sep 2023 3:37pm
15th Sep 2023 3:37pm
Twilight Creatures
beings of dawn and dusk
straddle borders between
one thing and another
not quite and almost
between boundaries
and shadows
massive daylight exists
between desires and choices
taking on discomfort and risk
accords immense power
stepping outside our comfort zone
by definition is uncomfortable
challenges
don’t mean we are bad or wrong
pushback simply means
we’ve stepped outside the norm
it is a test
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
straddle borders between
one thing and another
not quite and almost
between boundaries
and shadows
massive daylight exists
between desires and choices
taking on discomfort and risk
accords immense power
stepping outside our comfort zone
by definition is uncomfortable
challenges
don’t mean we are bad or wrong
pushback simply means
we’ve stepped outside the norm
it is a test
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
#LGBT
#BDSM
#spiritual #risk
#spiritual #risk
216 reads
3 Comments
HarleyQuinn
Riah
Riah
Poem Published
11th Sep 2023 8:47pm
11th Sep 2023 8:47pm
Back and Forth
#lust
#LGBT
#passion
247 reads
5 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
30th Aug 2023 8:00pm
30th Aug 2023 8:00pm
My Views 12
The people of the LGBTQ community foolishly confuse sex with love.
Whether you accept it or not, sex is not love, neither is love sex.
In fact, many straight people are not in love with their sexual partners.
You can love without having sex and you can have sex without love.
Every human being receives a physical gender identity before birth.
The mind can never change the biological structure of a person.
Transsexuals and transgender people think they can create their own genders,
But a sex change does not make a man a woman or vice versa. ...
Whether you accept it or not, sex is not love, neither is love sex.
In fact, many straight people are not in love with their sexual partners.
You can love without having sex and you can have sex without love.
Every human being receives a physical gender identity before birth.
The mind can never change the biological structure of a person.
Transsexuals and transgender people think they can create their own genders,
But a sex change does not make a man a woman or vice versa. ...
#love
#women
#men
#sex
#LGBT
209 reads
1 Comment
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
18th Aug 2023 4:13pm
18th Aug 2023 4:13pm
The Straight People Express
We’re boarding an exclusive automobile.
This transport doesn’t carry LGBT people.
If homosexuals are waiting on the road,
We’ll pass them and we won’t look back.
If we see any lesbians hitchhiking,
We won’t stop and give them a lift.
If stranded bisexuals flag down the vehicle,
We’ll just pretend not to see them.
If transgender people ask for a ride,
We won’t let them travel with us.
But if we meet heterosexuals along the wayside,
We’ll stop and say, “Welcome aboard.”
This transport doesn’t carry LGBT people.
If homosexuals are waiting on the road,
We’ll pass them and we won’t look back.
If we see any lesbians hitchhiking,
We won’t stop and give them a lift.
If stranded bisexuals flag down the vehicle,
We’ll just pretend not to see them.
If transgender people ask for a ride,
We won’t let them travel with us.
But if we meet heterosexuals along the wayside,
We’ll stop and say, “Welcome aboard.”
#lesbian
#gay
#LGBT
#transgender
#bisexual
400 reads
1 Comment
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
13th Aug 2023 5:11pm
13th Aug 2023 5:11pm
US Gay Ambassador
We want the US government to know our stance on gays.
Jamaicans do not recognize same-sex marriage.
Furthermore, we will not accredit the spouses of homosexuals and lesbians.
LGBT people are not welcomed to this country.
Their rank, position or status makes no difference to us.
You call the United States of America Uncle Sam.
Is it really Uncle Sam or is it Aunty Sam?
You obviously have a problem with your gender identity.
In fact, you do not even know who you are.
You cannot force your nasty lifestyle on morally clean people.
...
Jamaicans do not recognize same-sex marriage.
Furthermore, we will not accredit the spouses of homosexuals and lesbians.
LGBT people are not welcomed to this country.
Their rank, position or status makes no difference to us.
You call the United States of America Uncle Sam.
Is it really Uncle Sam or is it Aunty Sam?
You obviously have a problem with your gender identity.
In fact, you do not even know who you are.
You cannot force your nasty lifestyle on morally clean people.
...
#marriage
#identity
#politics
#LGBT
#morality
174 reads
2 Comments
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