Poems About I Miss You by Top Critiquers
#IMissYou
Poems about i miss you by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
poetOftragedy
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 00:21am
18th Dec 2024 00:21am
Miss me?
Miss me?
I miss myself too
I miss myself too
#confessional
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
78 reads
4 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
4th Sep 2022 4:43am
4th Sep 2022 4:43am
a kiss
touch me in my shadow places I'm lonely for your resolve
who silently admonishes me to weep no more
there in the dark you wait for me
to quiet my noise and see you once more
a man of great patience
who watched on while my demons rage
and I sat in utter desolation
you had my attention in the pain
I pace the bleak and you counted my steps
catching my tears as they fall
I didn't see you then
I couldn't see my own haunted reflection mirrored in your gaze
but your stillness moved me hardman
with deft...
who silently admonishes me to weep no more
there in the dark you wait for me
to quiet my noise and see you once more
a man of great patience
who watched on while my demons rage
and I sat in utter desolation
you had my attention in the pain
I pace the bleak and you counted my steps
catching my tears as they fall
I didn't see you then
I couldn't see my own haunted reflection mirrored in your gaze
but your stillness moved me hardman
with deft...
#love
#IMissYou
420 reads
3 Comments
Rew
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2023 8:22pm
2nd Feb 2023 8:22pm
I remember
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea
when the tide was out and seaweed lay about
and little clickety-creatures scuttled away from me,
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea,
Among those shallow pools among fractured rocks
and those deep-green pools, those dark green stains
in the crack of rocks cracked by the restless sea,
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea,
By the rooshing inward woosh the receding hush
of the sound of the sea on cobbly pebbley road
the click and clack as we walked under the bullying gulls ...
when the tide was out and seaweed lay about
and little clickety-creatures scuttled away from me,
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea,
Among those shallow pools among fractured rocks
and those deep-green pools, those dark green stains
in the crack of rocks cracked by the restless sea,
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea,
By the rooshing inward woosh the receding hush
of the sound of the sea on cobbly pebbley road
the click and clack as we walked under the bullying gulls ...
#rhyming
#SelfReflection
#IMissYou #FirstLove
#IMissYou #FirstLove
236 reads
2 Comments
Lilliputian
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 6:10pm
26th Jan 2025 6:10pm
Long Since
It’s been three years
since I first laid eyes on your amber iris,
since I tasted your words’ sweetness,
healing the bitterness of my tears,
and since I felt my name on your lips.
Almost one year since the last time I did,
when you steered your ship away
from my already wrecked one
that tried to save yours from sinking.
A hundred and twenty-six days
since I caught a glimpse of you,
fleeting among the stars.
And a few seconds since I cried
a sea for you, for the thousandth time.
Now, I’m feeling deprived, ...
since I first laid eyes on your amber iris,
since I tasted your words’ sweetness,
healing the bitterness of my tears,
and since I felt my name on your lips.
Almost one year since the last time I did,
when you steered your ship away
from my already wrecked one
that tried to save yours from sinking.
A hundred and twenty-six days
since I caught a glimpse of you,
fleeting among the stars.
And a few seconds since I cried
a sea for you, for the thousandth time.
Now, I’m feeling deprived, ...
#IMissYou
89 reads
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
26th Sep 2024 9:22pm
26th Sep 2024 9:22pm
Dreams of Autumn
aeries in glades continue to dance
to memories of sunny days and blooms passed
but darker shadows are arrived
mantles to the spirit of Fall
the sighs of breeze through the trees
shedding their beauty to the ground
standing stark among evergreens
with branches like anguished claws
warmth of the hearth embrace
call the beloved to their home
watching the last leaf of autumn
makes it way to the ground below
to memories of sunny days and blooms passed
but darker shadows are arrived
mantles to the spirit of Fall
the sighs of breeze through the trees
shedding their beauty to the ground
standing stark among evergreens
with branches like anguished claws
warmth of the hearth embrace
call the beloved to their home
watching the last leaf of autumn
makes it way to the ground below
#IMissYou
166 reads
10 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
24th Apr 2024 9:55am
24th Apr 2024 9:55am
Goodbye Isn't Final
No goodbye
Is truly final
For destiny
Hands out favors
Unlike a
Cop who
Passes out
His menacing
tickets
Is truly final
For destiny
Hands out favors
Unlike a
Cop who
Passes out
His menacing
tickets
#breakup
#grief
#IMissYou
237 reads
20 Comments
13
Poem Published
4th Aug 2024 8:25pm
4th Aug 2024 8:25pm
Hi Da
I need more time.
It's hard to go on
believing
everything will be fine.
I know it will.
But I don't feel like
I'm ready.
To let go
is to accept
the unthinkable.
I've lived through it.
Survived.
Unpleasantly.
But I am struggling
to endure it.
There is so much left
unsaid.
Undone.
I need time
to phrase this
in a way that
doesn't dishonour
your memory.
This is just
a reminder
to myself.
- your loving son.
It's hard to go on
believing
everything will be fine.
I know it will.
But I don't feel like
I'm ready.
To let go
is to accept
the unthinkable.
I've lived through it.
Survived.
Unpleasantly.
But I am struggling
to endure it.
There is so much left
unsaid.
Undone.
I need time
to phrase this
in a way that
doesn't dishonour
your memory.
This is just
a reminder
to myself.
- your loving son.
#death
#grief
#IMissYou #sadness
#IMissYou #sadness
206 reads
Maple666
Poem Published
17th Apr 2024 00:11am
17th Apr 2024 00:11am
Forever Worn
Love when it slips through, your fingers. you are left with a discarded cardigan. Its seen better days. It has been worn draped from shoulder's who never felt the weight of the world as it was shared and cared for with a label of delicacy and fibres that withstood the test of durability. A double-knit pearl one knit two with a tight stitch which was entwined. You never realised that years down the line it was exchangeable.
Now your favourite is demoted in an infrastructural remodel. It doesn't seem to meet the new guidelines it’s not considered to be a classic staple piece it...
Now your favourite is demoted in an infrastructural remodel. It doesn't seem to meet the new guidelines it’s not considered to be a classic staple piece it...
#heartbroken
#breakup
#conflict
#IMissYou
#bittersweet
152 reads
2 Comments
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