Poems About I Miss You by Top Critiquers
#IMissYou
Poems about i miss you by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
11th Jul 2024 9:40pm
11th Jul 2024 9:40pm
Help You Unwind
Nine days seems like an eternity
Without your presence near
Living feels like some absurdity
I’m not thinking very clear
Time can’t pass by fast enough
I’m on pins and needles
You know it’s been so rough
I even consulted The Beatles
Nothing seems to fill the void
Binge writing love poetic
Talking to me till I’m annoyed
Not even close to copacetic
Sunday is etched in my mind
I promise to help you unwind
Without your presence near
Living feels like some absurdity
I’m not thinking very clear
Time can’t pass by fast enough
I’m on pins and needles
You know it’s been so rough
I even consulted The Beatles
Nothing seems to fill the void
Binge writing love poetic
Talking to me till I’m annoyed
Not even close to copacetic
Sunday is etched in my mind
I promise to help you unwind
#IMissYou
239 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 1:20am
19th Jan 2025 1:20am
Attention K-Mart Shoppers
Jennifer, who would ever think that your trail would end at K-Mart
Did anyone tell you?
If you were alive right now
I mean if your brains hadn't been blown out of your skull with that shotgun you put to it
Would you have believed you would have done such a thing?
Jennifer, you didn't see what I saw
Oh girl,
Some kid had a hunk of your brains in a cheeseburger wrapper and was showing it to people
I went to the place where you shot yourself
You know the place I'm talking about
You were there about 26 hours before me
Jennifer, I searched...
Did anyone tell you?
If you were alive right now
I mean if your brains hadn't been blown out of your skull with that shotgun you put to it
Would you have believed you would have done such a thing?
Jennifer, you didn't see what I saw
Oh girl,
Some kid had a hunk of your brains in a cheeseburger wrapper and was showing it to people
I went to the place where you shot yourself
You know the place I'm talking about
You were there about 26 hours before me
Jennifer, I searched...
#horror
#IMissYou
#memories
#ShortStory
#suicide
119 reads
13 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
21st Mar 2024 2:33am
21st Mar 2024 2:33am
Delicious
exciting lush, pink plaything
loved above measure
desired in the hell of my choice
you designed the torture to free me
and as a knee, knee Queen
I aim to please
conjuring some roughhousing
in the eternal scorn, we have a reckoning
it's just us Big Man
you need some sexual healing
blow off steam inside me
our descendants have been busy with surprises
riding that crazy wavelength like they do
first I call in the seductresses
male and female after our kind
they ache with the need
affectionate smile ...
loved above measure
desired in the hell of my choice
you designed the torture to free me
and as a knee, knee Queen
I aim to please
conjuring some roughhousing
in the eternal scorn, we have a reckoning
it's just us Big Man
you need some sexual healing
blow off steam inside me
our descendants have been busy with surprises
riding that crazy wavelength like they do
first I call in the seductresses
male and female after our kind
they ache with the need
affectionate smile ...
#love
#angels
#IMissYou
289 reads
3 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
29th Jul 2024 9:34pm
29th Jul 2024 9:34pm
Call Home
Hello baby
Are you busy
I really need you
I'm so tired of this reality
I need the comfort of you
Please don't ask me
what went on today
when that door closes, kiss my sorrow away
Look at me with those eyes
adore me like you did once
Let me breathe in the scent of your love
I stopped breathing when I left you
Answer
Come home
Are you busy
I really need you
I'm so tired of this reality
I need the comfort of you
Please don't ask me
what went on today
when that door closes, kiss my sorrow away
Look at me with those eyes
adore me like you did once
Let me breathe in the scent of your love
I stopped breathing when I left you
Answer
Come home
#IMissYou
#love
92 reads
12 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 6:28pm
22nd Mar 2025 6:28pm
Our song made me hide in a taco joint
You called me
your beloved
as your misty
body broke my
reservations
and my granite soul
melted
at your tender
generosity
and the honest way
you wanted me to heal
my heart.
my whole fucking heart
I need you
I walked Savannnah
and found a taco joint
in the middle of a suburb
and our song came on
the muzac speaker
some 1990s
ballad with quavering
voices singing trite
notes to words
that somehow
became a vow
...
your beloved
as your misty
body broke my
reservations
and my granite soul
melted
at your tender
generosity
and the honest way
you wanted me to heal
my heart.
my whole fucking heart
I need you
I walked Savannnah
and found a taco joint
in the middle of a suburb
and our song came on
the muzac speaker
some 1990s
ballad with quavering
voices singing trite
notes to words
that somehow
became a vow
...
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
#love
197 reads
7 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
21st May 2023 2:29pm
21st May 2023 2:29pm
Spare Thoughts
You don't have to do anything
Just be in the moment
Spare thoughts
Magical
On the other side of somewhere
Just be in the moment
Spare thoughts
Magical
On the other side of somewhere
#IMissYou
323 reads
22 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
5th Oct 2024 10:17am
5th Oct 2024 10:17am
slight change of plans...
we had a plan
reservations made
in the works for months
bringing your sweetie to you
she made a bucket list
& you were at the top
a homecoming...of sorts
revisit all the old haunts
going to Morey's & get your favorite fish
those special cheeses you always used to get
A&W with New York Vanilla ice cream floats
just like the old days...in better times
before everything changed in life
we were coming...I swear
but the universe had other ideas
so we had to pivot quickly
result of...
reservations made
in the works for months
bringing your sweetie to you
she made a bucket list
& you were at the top
a homecoming...of sorts
revisit all the old haunts
going to Morey's & get your favorite fish
those special cheeses you always used to get
A&W with New York Vanilla ice cream floats
just like the old days...in better times
before everything changed in life
we were coming...I swear
but the universe had other ideas
so we had to pivot quickly
result of...
#birthday
#father
#IMissYou
239 reads
10 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
18th Sep 2018 2:18pm
18th Sep 2018 2:18pm
3 A.M.
9/11
5 years
have
passed
since every
thing became
meaningless
9/12
we fought
so hard
you and i
though the
end became
inevitable
9/13
flashbacks
of once you
in my arms
so lively
so sweet
tears
blur
my eyes
my heart
can’t breathe
9/14
stone in my
stomach
days pass
pitiless it’s
coming
closer
i hate
this week
9/15 ...
5 years
have
passed
since every
thing became
meaningless
9/12
we fought
so hard
you and i
though the
end became
inevitable
9/13
flashbacks
of once you
in my arms
so lively
so sweet
tears
blur
my eyes
my heart
can’t breathe
9/14
stone in my
stomach
days pass
pitiless it’s
coming
closer
i hate
this week
9/15 ...
#IMissYou
#love
1390 reads
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
9th Aug 2021 7:38am
9th Aug 2021 7:38am
MY HEALTH GETS IN THE WAY (INSPIRED BY TRUELOVER'S POEM)
#erotic
#rhyming
#illness #IMissYou
#illness #IMissYou
401 reads
3 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2025 7:57am
23rd Mar 2025 7:57am
Weiner
You don't need to hide.
I wasn't hiding from you.
I let you do what you do.
It helps, if you're here too.
Ill help you out.
I have secrets to shout out.
Come hear the symphony,
Of me crying out loud.
I sit and brood.
Wishing you were here, too.
There's no privacy as you intrude.
With your calm, quiet attitude.
I find you like the truth.
Come out of hiding and introduce.
Your distance is abuse.
Don't cut me off of this noose.
I like to sway in the nude.
The weather decays as they view....
I wasn't hiding from you.
I let you do what you do.
It helps, if you're here too.
Ill help you out.
I have secrets to shout out.
Come hear the symphony,
Of me crying out loud.
I sit and brood.
Wishing you were here, too.
There's no privacy as you intrude.
With your calm, quiet attitude.
I find you like the truth.
Come out of hiding and introduce.
Your distance is abuse.
Don't cut me off of this noose.
I like to sway in the nude.
The weather decays as they view....
#IMissYou
#loneliness
75 reads
9 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2024 2:14pm
22nd Apr 2024 2:14pm
Loop
Sometimes I think
I already forgot your name
then I hear the rustle of leaves
and that wind so jealous
pulling your hair
and reminding me of your voice
everything in the stones spells your name
everything in the fire supposes your eyes
water boils and air evaporates
just to make me remember
that I can't forget you
I turn to the side and try to ignore the light
ineffective attempt to lull my sleep
to dissolve me into an eternal dream
lullabies that I never sang
that I never heard from you
I want...
I already forgot your name
then I hear the rustle of leaves
and that wind so jealous
pulling your hair
and reminding me of your voice
everything in the stones spells your name
everything in the fire supposes your eyes
water boils and air evaporates
just to make me remember
that I can't forget you
I turn to the side and try to ignore the light
ineffective attempt to lull my sleep
to dissolve me into an eternal dream
lullabies that I never sang
that I never heard from you
I want...
#dreams
#forgiveness
#IMissYou
#sadness
#sleep
155 reads
4 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
20th May 2024 11:38pm
20th May 2024 11:38pm
Find Me
To be looked at like yours is the only existence
there ever was.
To be known down to your bone.
Every touch has the electric intensity
of the very first and the very last.
You feel immediate and a thousand years.
Lips colliding twisted
with soft euphoric kisses.
We were alchemy.
My beacon eyes
flood love's iridescent light.
Find me.......
there ever was.
To be known down to your bone.
Every touch has the electric intensity
of the very first and the very last.
You feel immediate and a thousand years.
Lips colliding twisted
with soft euphoric kisses.
We were alchemy.
My beacon eyes
flood love's iridescent light.
Find me.......
#IMissYou
#love
486 reads
20 Comments
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