Poems About I Miss You by Top Critiquers
#IMissYou
Poems about i miss you by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Sometimes I Still Wonder
I still wonder
How it would feel
To have my dreams
Suddenly go my way
How life would be
Had you decided to stay
What it would be like
To wake up every day
In your arms
How it would feel
To be protected
From the world’s harm
The laughter you gave
Filled the hole
In my heart
I somehow managed
To survive when
You said we had to part
The roller coaster
Has stopped
My emotions have calmed
I...
How it would feel
To have my dreams
Suddenly go my way
How life would be
Had you decided to stay
What it would be like
To wake up every day
In your arms
How it would feel
To be protected
From the world’s harm
The laughter you gave
Filled the hole
In my heart
I somehow managed
To survive when
You said we had to part
The roller coaster
Has stopped
My emotions have calmed
I...
#love
#IMissYou
441 reads
17 Comments
Help You Unwind
Nine days seems like an eternity
Without your presence near
Living feels like some absurdity
I’m not thinking very clear
Time can’t pass by fast enough
I’m on pins and needles
You know it’s been so rough
I even consulted The Beatles
Nothing seems to fill the void
Binge writing love poetic
Talking to me till I’m annoyed
Not even close to copacetic
Sunday is etched in my mind
I promise to help you unwind
Without your presence near
Living feels like some absurdity
I’m not thinking very clear
Time can’t pass by fast enough
I’m on pins and needles
You know it’s been so rough
I even consulted The Beatles
Nothing seems to fill the void
Binge writing love poetic
Talking to me till I’m annoyed
Not even close to copacetic
Sunday is etched in my mind
I promise to help you unwind
#IMissYou
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6 Comments
Life filled with silence
I can't believe your lying there
Silent,
my tears can't cry
You left the life we shared
Endless days after you died
Stars glisten in the night
Please come back to me
I need a sign from you
I miss you, can't you see
One last look at you
As I think back to our lives
I touch your face
Where your spirit lies
They close the coffin
I can't accept your gone
I'll see you on the other side
Silence beckons me, life carries on
Silent,
my tears can't cry
You left the life we shared
Endless days after you died
Stars glisten in the night
Please come back to me
I need a sign from you
I miss you, can't you see
One last look at you
As I think back to our lives
I touch your face
Where your spirit lies
They close the coffin
I can't accept your gone
I'll see you on the other side
Silence beckons me, life carries on
#death
#IMissYou
#lover
#rhyming
#silence
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6 Comments
Call Home
Hello baby
Are you busy
I really need you
I'm so tired of this reality
I need the comfort of you
Please don't ask me
what went on today
when that door closes, kiss my sorrow away
Look at me with those eyes
adore me like you did once
Let me breathe in the scent of your love
I stopped breathing when I left you
Answer
Come home
Are you busy
I really need you
I'm so tired of this reality
I need the comfort of you
Please don't ask me
what went on today
when that door closes, kiss my sorrow away
Look at me with those eyes
adore me like you did once
Let me breathe in the scent of your love
I stopped breathing when I left you
Answer
Come home
#IMissYou
#love
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12 Comments
Delicious
exciting lush, pink plaything
loved above measure
desired in the hell of my choice
you designed the torture to free me
and as a knee, knee Queen
I aim to please
conjuring some roughhousing
in the eternal scorn, we have a reckoning
it's just us Big Man
you need some sexual healing
blow off steam inside me
our descendants have been busy with surprises
riding that crazy wavelength like they do
first I call in the seductresses
male and female after our kind
they ache with the need
affectionate smile ...
loved above measure
desired in the hell of my choice
you designed the torture to free me
and as a knee, knee Queen
I aim to please
conjuring some roughhousing
in the eternal scorn, we have a reckoning
it's just us Big Man
you need some sexual healing
blow off steam inside me
our descendants have been busy with surprises
riding that crazy wavelength like they do
first I call in the seductresses
male and female after our kind
they ache with the need
affectionate smile ...
#love
#angels
#IMissYou
240 reads
3 Comments
Find Me
To be looked at like yours is the only existence
there ever was.
To be known down to your bone.
Every touch has the electric intensity
of the very first and the very last.
You feel immediate and a thousand years.
Lips colliding twisted
with soft euphoric kisses.
We were alchemy.
My beacon eyes
flood love's iridescent light.
Find me.......
there ever was.
To be known down to your bone.
Every touch has the electric intensity
of the very first and the very last.
You feel immediate and a thousand years.
Lips colliding twisted
with soft euphoric kisses.
We were alchemy.
My beacon eyes
flood love's iridescent light.
Find me.......
#IMissYou
#love
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20 Comments
3 A.M.
9/11
5 years
have
passed
since every
thing became
meaningless
9/12
we fought
so hard
you and i
though the
end became
inevitable
9/13
flashbacks
of once you
in my arms
so lively
so sweet
tears
blur
my eyes
my heart
can’t breathe
9/14
stone in my
stomach
days pass
pitiless it’s
coming
closer
i hate
this week
9/15 ...
5 years
have
passed
since every
thing became
meaningless
9/12
we fought
so hard
you and i
though the
end became
inevitable
9/13
flashbacks
of once you
in my arms
so lively
so sweet
tears
blur
my eyes
my heart
can’t breathe
9/14
stone in my
stomach
days pass
pitiless it’s
coming
closer
i hate
this week
9/15 ...
#IMissYou
#love
1255 reads
MY HEALTH GETS IN THE WAY (INSPIRED BY TRUELOVER'S POEM)
#erotic
#rhyming
#illness #IMissYou
#illness #IMissYou
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3 Comments
An Epitaph For A Poetic Soul {I Miss You}
absence ....of your quill
resonates in me.... loss
a profound [feeling]
resonates in me.... loss
a profound [feeling]
#love
#senryu
#IMissYou
#confessional
#WritingPoetry
491 reads
6 Comments
Spare Thoughts
You don't have to do anything
Just be in the moment
Spare thoughts
Magical
On the other side of somewhere
Just be in the moment
Spare thoughts
Magical
On the other side of somewhere
#IMissYou
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22 Comments
slight change of plans...
we had a plan
reservations made
in the works for months
bringing your sweetie to you
she made a bucket list
& you were at the top
a homecoming...of sorts
revisit all the old haunts
going to Morey's & get your favorite fish
those special cheeses you always used to get
A&W with New York Vanilla ice cream floats
just like the old days...in better times
before everything changed in life
we were coming...I swear
but the universe had other ideas
so we had to pivot quickly
result of...
reservations made
in the works for months
bringing your sweetie to you
she made a bucket list
& you were at the top
a homecoming...of sorts
revisit all the old haunts
going to Morey's & get your favorite fish
those special cheeses you always used to get
A&W with New York Vanilla ice cream floats
just like the old days...in better times
before everything changed in life
we were coming...I swear
but the universe had other ideas
so we had to pivot quickly
result of...
#birthday
#father
#IMissYou
158 reads
10 Comments
Cage Striped Heart
My world’s so far away
Living in a parallel home
I’m hoping you’ll stay
Always on my asylum mind
How you move me even when
We’re so far apart
Locked down in a different town
Penitentiary art
Penitentiary art
Wondering where you are
And what you’re doing
Strumming bars on
My Cage Striped Heart
Phasing through concrete
Playing my heart out
Knowing you’ll hear me
Cause no one else sounds like me
I’ve got nothing but time
But I don’t want to wait
Your voice unlocks my
Paradise...
Living in a parallel home
I’m hoping you’ll stay
Always on my asylum mind
How you move me even when
We’re so far apart
Locked down in a different town
Penitentiary art
Penitentiary art
Wondering where you are
And what you’re doing
Strumming bars on
My Cage Striped Heart
Phasing through concrete
Playing my heart out
Knowing you’ll hear me
Cause no one else sounds like me
I’ve got nothing but time
But I don’t want to wait
Your voice unlocks my
Paradise...
#lyrics
#LongDistanceRelationship
#IMissYou
617 reads
29 Comments
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