Poems About I Miss You by Top Critiquers
#IMissYou
Poems about i miss you by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
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Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
9th Nov 2022 3:49am
9th Nov 2022 3:49am
17 years of tears
17 years of tears
Seventeen long years ago, the Angel's got their way, i couldn't stop them taking you, no matter how hard I seemed to pray
Why did they take you, there was so much still to share, now I have a whole in my heart and a pain so hard to bare
Surely they didn't need you, as much as i did down here, there's still moments when I cry for you, my tears still sting and sear
There were plenty others the Angel's could have had, but they chose the best I guess, though it made me sad
You taught me so many...
Seventeen long years ago, the Angel's got their way, i couldn't stop them taking you, no matter how hard I seemed to pray
Why did they take you, there was so much still to share, now I have a whole in my heart and a pain so hard to bare
Surely they didn't need you, as much as i did down here, there's still moments when I cry for you, my tears still sting and sear
There were plenty others the Angel's could have had, but they chose the best I guess, though it made me sad
You taught me so many...
#love
#grief
#IMissYou
262 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
6th Mar 2024 2:13pm
6th Mar 2024 2:13pm
Haiku #18
I miss missing you
and so you could disappear
for a certain time
and so you could disappear
for a certain time
#ILoveYou
#redemption
#MovingOn
#IMissYou
#healing
93 reads
2 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
6th Nov 2022 1:54am
6th Nov 2022 1:54am
A Soft Whisper In The Lost Sensations Of Time
VILLA KENNEDY
FRANKFURT, GERMANY
Georg Speyer Presidential Suite
Steffen tossed and turned in the king size bed, nocturnal rest refused to abide. He clasped both hands behind his head. He silently asked himself, just where the fuck was Isabella?
Julius has been attempting to make verbal contact with her for days now. He glanced over at the radio clock on the nightstand; the time registered six o’clock.
Of all the nights to be have experienced a bout of insomnia he thought.
He knew the speech he had to address later today have...
FRANKFURT, GERMANY
Georg Speyer Presidential Suite
Steffen tossed and turned in the king size bed, nocturnal rest refused to abide. He clasped both hands behind his head. He silently asked himself, just where the fuck was Isabella?
Julius has been attempting to make verbal contact with her for days now. He glanced over at the radio clock on the nightstand; the time registered six o’clock.
Of all the nights to be have experienced a bout of insomnia he thought.
He knew the speech he had to address later today have...
#lover
#IMissYou
#passion
535 reads
8 Comments
Confluence
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2024 6:16am
3rd Feb 2024 6:16am
Fingering you...again
My apologies....
I know I haven't fingered you in a while
Lingered my lewdness inside the folds of your
Quilled imagination...
I've been wondering...
Have you felt me stirring
Restless between these sheets
Still bearing the stain of each previous exploration
It's been too long since I've moved
Some of that furniture around the underbelly
Of your unique boutique
Fed you my rhapsodic aggression
Feng Shui your silky interior
Your brand of hunger demands my full...
I know I haven't fingered you in a while
Lingered my lewdness inside the folds of your
Quilled imagination...
I've been wondering...
Have you felt me stirring
Restless between these sheets
Still bearing the stain of each previous exploration
It's been too long since I've moved
Some of that furniture around the underbelly
Of your unique boutique
Fed you my rhapsodic aggression
Feng Shui your silky interior
Your brand of hunger demands my full...
#lover
#WritingPoetry
#IMissYou
399 reads
8 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
1st Jun 2023 10:24am
1st Jun 2023 10:24am
quench
I
want
to
quench
your
thirst
that's
why
I
write
poems
want
to
quench
your
thirst
that's
why
I
write
poems
#love
#IMissYou
330 reads
18 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
14th Nov 2023 8:16am
14th Nov 2023 8:16am
Zenn-La
Maybe...
...just maybe
Through the Sands of Time
...these calloused hands of mine
Can find a way
...to sift through the hurt
.......grovel through the catastrophic dirt
To find...a tiny semblance of
...what once was
A snap shot of remembrance
..stained by tears..pained by years...apart
Smeared...amongst the
......Fibonacci sequenced of
..anthropotic beauty
The cozmik mud of us...Sun dried
...moon stalked
..siphoned down as...
...just maybe
Through the Sands of Time
...these calloused hands of mine
Can find a way
...to sift through the hurt
.......grovel through the catastrophic dirt
To find...a tiny semblance of
...what once was
A snap shot of remembrance
..stained by tears..pained by years...apart
Smeared...amongst the
......Fibonacci sequenced of
..anthropotic beauty
The cozmik mud of us...Sun dried
...moon stalked
..siphoned down as...
#IMissYou
195 reads
PencilScribbles
Scribbles
Scribbles
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2024 1:55am
3rd Mar 2024 1:55am
There's No Place Like Hiraeth
I wish you knew how much I miss you.
The way you laugh & the things you would do.
I miss having someone down, to go with,
On spontaneous & loosely planned birding trips.
I wish you where here doing the research with me,
Life, something like we wanted it to be.
I wish you could help train undergrads that are new,
The way you helped when I was learning, too.
I wish you would write, or text, or call.
I wish I had my best friend through this all.
The way you laugh & the things you would do.
I miss having someone down, to go with,
On spontaneous & loosely planned birding trips.
I wish you where here doing the research with me,
Life, something like we wanted it to be.
I wish you could help train undergrads that are new,
The way you helped when I was learning, too.
I wish you would write, or text, or call.
I wish I had my best friend through this all.
#IMissYou
154 reads
8 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
4th Sep 2021 3:57pm
4th Sep 2021 3:57pm
An Epitaph For A Poetic Soul {I Miss You}
absence ....of your quill
resonates in me.... loss
a profound [feeling]
resonates in me.... loss
a profound [feeling]
#love
#confessional
#WritingPoetry
#senryu
#IMissYou
457 reads
6 Comments
Rew
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2023 8:22pm
2nd Feb 2023 8:22pm
I remember
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea
when the tide was out and seaweed lay about
and little clickety-creatures scuttled away from me,
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea,
Among those shallow pools among fractured rocks
and those deep-green pools, those dark green stains
in the crack of rocks cracked by the restless sea,
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea,
By the rooshing inward woosh the receding hush
of the sound of the sea on cobbly pebbley road
the click and clack as we walked under the bullying gulls ...
when the tide was out and seaweed lay about
and little clickety-creatures scuttled away from me,
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea,
Among those shallow pools among fractured rocks
and those deep-green pools, those dark green stains
in the crack of rocks cracked by the restless sea,
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea,
By the rooshing inward woosh the receding hush
of the sound of the sea on cobbly pebbley road
the click and clack as we walked under the bullying gulls ...
#rhyming
#SelfReflection
#IMissYou #FirstLove
#IMissYou #FirstLove
160 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
31st Aug 2023 1:22am
31st Aug 2023 1:22am
sleepy head
her train was due in at nine forty three
I was still in bed,
unfortunately
I was still in bed,
unfortunately
#IMissYou
70 reads
1 Comment
smackdownraven
Poem Published
4th Sep 2022 4:43am
4th Sep 2022 4:43am
a kiss
touch me in my shadow places I'm lonely for your resolve
who silently admonishes me to weep no more
there in the dark you wait for me
to quiet my noise and see you once more
a man of great patience
who watched on while my demons rage
and I sat in utter desolation
you had my attention in the pain
I pace the bleak and you counted my steps
catching my tears as they fall
I didn't see you then
I couldn't see my own haunted reflection mirrored in your gaze
but your stillness moved me hardman
with deft...
who silently admonishes me to weep no more
there in the dark you wait for me
to quiet my noise and see you once more
a man of great patience
who watched on while my demons rage
and I sat in utter desolation
you had my attention in the pain
I pace the bleak and you counted my steps
catching my tears as they fall
I didn't see you then
I couldn't see my own haunted reflection mirrored in your gaze
but your stillness moved me hardman
with deft...
#love
#IMissYou
339 reads
3 Comments
Diaryofabasketcase
Poem Published
4th Apr 2024 00:57am
4th Apr 2024 00:57am
Your Remnants
Your Remnants
If only I could let you go
You’d slip into the past
It feels as though
I lost control
A spell upon me cast
You haunt me in my dreams at night
The thoughts throughout the day
You’re everywhere I seem to look
And cannot look away
The pillow smells of your cologne
Your image floods my senses
I see you, smell you, taste your skin
I hear you, feel your presence
It’s though I’ve been consumed by you
The ghost of you still lingers
You took some pieces of me too
The day you...
If only I could let you go
You’d slip into the past
It feels as though
I lost control
A spell upon me cast
You haunt me in my dreams at night
The thoughts throughout the day
You’re everywhere I seem to look
And cannot look away
The pillow smells of your cologne
Your image floods my senses
I see you, smell you, taste your skin
I hear you, feel your presence
It’s though I’ve been consumed by you
The ghost of you still lingers
You took some pieces of me too
The day you...
#sadness
#heartbroken
#breakup
#MovingOn
#IMissYou
77 reads
2 Comments
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