Poems About I Miss You by Top Critiquers
#IMissYou
Poems about i miss you by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
7th Apr 2022 3:35am
7th Apr 2022 3:35am
3523
(¡)
I sat in your chair today.
Usually, I avoid it.
It still seems wrong
when anyone but you
occupies a space
only your big presence could fill.
Breathed in deep
from these inhereted lungs
and let you soak in.
(¡¡)
There is a photo,
You with Madison on your shoulders.
The epitome of grandpa
It hangs joyously
on the side of the extra fridge
in the hallway utility room
Like entering church,
it was...
I sat in your chair today.
Usually, I avoid it.
It still seems wrong
when anyone but you
occupies a space
only your big presence could fill.
Breathed in deep
from these inhereted lungs
and let you soak in.
(¡¡)
There is a photo,
You with Madison on your shoulders.
The epitome of grandpa
It hangs joyously
on the side of the extra fridge
in the hallway utility room
Like entering church,
it was...
#mother
#father
#TruthOfLife
#IMissYou
#daughter
350 reads
55 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
15th Jun 2022 7:57am
15th Jun 2022 7:57am
daddy
my dad was a crop dusting pilot
no pretenses there he was a good ole boy
he was a proud man and a shit kicker
cowboy boots and all
a real womanizer
he loved the ladies
he had a love of guns too
but his soft spot was reserved for his different little girl
I liked to read and had a high intellect
but I was odd
down deep I think my dad knew
I would never fit
he drew hard lines for me
and I never crossed them
until I did
what did my dad know he thought in simple terms
black and white
I was...
no pretenses there he was a good ole boy
he was a proud man and a shit kicker
cowboy boots and all
a real womanizer
he loved the ladies
he had a love of guns too
but his soft spot was reserved for his different little girl
I liked to read and had a high intellect
but I was odd
down deep I think my dad knew
I would never fit
he drew hard lines for me
and I never crossed them
until I did
what did my dad know he thought in simple terms
black and white
I was...
#love
#father
#IMissYou
72 reads
4 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
25th Sep 2019 2:33am
25th Sep 2019 2:33am
In Remembrance (DUP Bow Your Head In Silence)
DUP let's show our poetic support to one of our fallen poets and to let his family know how much we cared for LiamReddus, a poet, a husband and a father, through poem, a thought, let him know he will be surely missed in words and his deeds
Anonymous
16th Aug 2019 3:26pm
Ive never ran a marathon but ive ran. I do a 5 mile morning run 10 mile when i need to get my head straight. But i train as though a mad man sometimes
Anonymous
14th Aug 2019 8:56pm
As always miss an amazing write nevermind the message i sent
Anonymous ...
Anonymous
16th Aug 2019 3:26pm
Ive never ran a marathon but ive ran. I do a 5 mile morning run 10 mile when i need to get my head straight. But i train as though a mad man sometimes
Anonymous
14th Aug 2019 8:56pm
As always miss an amazing write nevermind the message i sent
Anonymous ...
#grief
#death
#memorial #IMissYou
#memorial #IMissYou
605 reads
22 Comments
paperstains
Poem Published
28th Mar 2021 7:30am
28th Mar 2021 7:30am
Can't Stop the Ringing in My Ears
Fell asleep on the fucking sofa
again and woke to the sound
of your ring tone coming from my dreams
and my stupid hand fumbling
for the phone
Torn between laughter and weeping
it's been seventeen and a half weeks
since the last call
my head still hasn't got the message
Decide on neither, take a deep breath
and drag my sad ass to bed
again and woke to the sound
of your ring tone coming from my dreams
and my stupid hand fumbling
for the phone
Torn between laughter and weeping
it's been seventeen and a half weeks
since the last call
my head still hasn't got the message
Decide on neither, take a deep breath
and drag my sad ass to bed
#emptiness
#IMissYou
290 reads
6 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
9th Aug 2021 7:38am
9th Aug 2021 7:38am
MY HEALTH GETS IN THE WAY (INSPIRED BY TRUELOVER'S POEM)
#erotic
#rhyming
#illness #IMissYou
#illness #IMissYou
187 reads
2 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
25th May 2022 3:51pm
25th May 2022 3:51pm
At Your Grave
At your grave Tomaizusu
I lay in respects of thy life
The life we once had
The passionate of ah nights
How funny we were
How tasteful our secret be
Oh how I miss u dearly
Love is still only thee
Raitaita never could see
Life with u not near
From the first time we drank water
Those passionate nights we drank beer
And such crazy we were
When we were in fights
Defending our gay
Our ah nightly secret rights
I must move on
I must stand into another within
And forever my family u be ...
I lay in respects of thy life
The life we once had
The passionate of ah nights
How funny we were
How tasteful our secret be
Oh how I miss u dearly
Love is still only thee
Raitaita never could see
Life with u not near
From the first time we drank water
Those passionate nights we drank beer
And such crazy we were
When we were in fights
Defending our gay
Our ah nightly secret rights
I must move on
I must stand into another within
And forever my family u be ...
#sadness
#loneliness
#UnrequitedLove
#IMissYou
#hurt
42 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
20th Mar 2021 10:02am
20th Mar 2021 10:02am
For my father who passed Three years today
A POEM FOR MY DAD
By R Summers
Heaven has an Angel, they've taken in our Dad. There's one more star to see at night, that just leaves us sad.
No more stories shall he tell of mad and crazy things. Gone will be his laughter and the happiness it brings.
No more sitting by the waters edge waiting for a bite, you swapped you're Rod forg Angels wings ans now you've taken flight.
You taught us so many things, we think of you and cry, but you never told us what to do, once you said goodbye.
A Father, Granddad, Legend some names that you...
By R Summers
Heaven has an Angel, they've taken in our Dad. There's one more star to see at night, that just leaves us sad.
No more stories shall he tell of mad and crazy things. Gone will be his laughter and the happiness it brings.
No more sitting by the waters edge waiting for a bite, you swapped you're Rod forg Angels wings ans now you've taken flight.
You taught us so many things, we think of you and cry, but you never told us what to do, once you said goodbye.
A Father, Granddad, Legend some names that you...
#love
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
173 reads
7 Comments
DanielChristensen
Poem Published
12th Nov 2019 5:07pm
12th Nov 2019 5:07pm
For Mira
It’s a funeral. It’s a loss. That’s why there are no words.
There’s nothing documented between
Aardvark
And
Zyzzyva
That can fill the void
Of you
In my life,
Nor frame
My utter
Devastation
Nothing
That will unwound you, but
The day is long and
Boring, so
I fucking dance,
Kick up my
Heels,
Amidst
The dim
Procession
I fuck stupid
I, stupid fuck
I, Exilis
I fuck things up
Hey,...
There’s nothing documented between
Aardvark
And
Zyzzyva
That can fill the void
Of you
In my life,
Nor frame
My utter
Devastation
Nothing
That will unwound you, but
The day is long and
Boring, so
I fucking dance,
Kick up my
Heels,
Amidst
The dim
Procession
I fuck stupid
I, stupid fuck
I, Exilis
I fuck things up
Hey,...
#heartbroken
#confessional
#TruthOfLife #IMissYou
#TruthOfLife #IMissYou
768 reads
33 Comments
SweetOblivion
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2018 00:00am
2nd Jan 2018 00:00am
Love Has Set (ottava rima)
Now his brief light has set, life is one long
and everlasting sleep, so I'll just make
the least fuss every day - I'll sing my songs
of love and lust and passion; I'll equate
each day to his short lifetime; repeat wrongs
to support needs and frailties; I will wake,
denying possibilities; repose
is not for sleepless ones; I'd kiss his nose...
In photographs upon the mantelpiece,
he stares so luminously; decayed suns
leave me at dusk to shine elsewhere; release
my bleak...
and everlasting sleep, so I'll just make
the least fuss every day - I'll sing my songs
of love and lust and passion; I'll equate
each day to his short lifetime; repeat wrongs
to support needs and frailties; I will wake,
denying possibilities; repose
is not for sleepless ones; I'd kiss his nose...
In photographs upon the mantelpiece,
he stares so luminously; decayed suns
leave me at dusk to shine elsewhere; release
my bleak...
#heartbroken
#breakup
#conflict #IMissYou
#conflict #IMissYou
655 reads
16 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
4th Dec 2019 12:35pm
4th Dec 2019 12:35pm
Run Roughshod, My Heart
Even on your return
there will always be an emptiness
all those lost moments
forever gone
never to be experienced
nothing to share in solitude
nothing but my sorrow
Who needs that wallowing
who asks for that heartache
Smile for me when meet again
Splendid description
dusk
Moon dances silhouettes
Orange hour
there will always be an emptiness
all those lost moments
forever gone
never to be experienced
nothing to share in solitude
nothing but my sorrow
Who needs that wallowing
who asks for that heartache
Smile for me when meet again
Splendid description
dusk
Moon dances silhouettes
Orange hour
#love
#father
#IMissYou #daughter
#IMissYou #daughter
307 reads
3 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
14th Jun 2019 4:22pm
14th Jun 2019 4:22pm
words of silence
I imagine we talk in tongues of silence
but I'm not sure you miss my words
the way I miss the space between your thoughts
I'm lonely without you
though my dreams no longer feature you
with your soul stripped bare
You found the sunlight
while I languish
in these melancholy shadows
I keep calling home
'cause there's beauty in the overcast
if you learn to ignore the rain
And I ache with the absence of people
that hold my heart to ransom
unknowing of the way my ribcage creaks their names
when there's...
but I'm not sure you miss my words
the way I miss the space between your thoughts
I'm lonely without you
though my dreams no longer feature you
with your soul stripped bare
You found the sunlight
while I languish
in these melancholy shadows
I keep calling home
'cause there's beauty in the overcast
if you learn to ignore the rain
And I ache with the absence of people
that hold my heart to ransom
unknowing of the way my ribcage creaks their names
when there's...
#love
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
434 reads
4 Comments
zinnzinn
ZINNNNIZ
ZINNNNIZ
Poem Published
12th Dec 2020 5:54am
12th Dec 2020 5:54am
Ode To The Over Thinking Insomniaddict
One-sheep-two-sheep-three sheet whore
Black sheep-lost sheep-six feet no more
It's highly pastime to cast away stones
So a hardened heart will soften
If we let bygones be gone bye bye Just a tad little bit more often
Found left alone in my own wake
At my own wake
Waking up coughing in my coffin
So that's the bed I got to lie in
A dirt nap is what their talking
Well I ain't made that flower bed yet
For now I'm just a dead man sleepwalking
Shadowy shapeless sights by candle the light
From the wax and the wick is relentless like...
Black sheep-lost sheep-six feet no more
It's highly pastime to cast away stones
So a hardened heart will soften
If we let bygones be gone bye bye Just a tad little bit more often
Found left alone in my own wake
At my own wake
Waking up coughing in my coffin
So that's the bed I got to lie in
A dirt nap is what their talking
Well I ain't made that flower bed yet
For now I'm just a dead man sleepwalking
Shadowy shapeless sights by candle the light
From the wax and the wick is relentless like...
#regret
#heartbroken
#insomnia
#addiction
#IMissYou
293 reads
1 Comment
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