Poems About I Miss You by Top Critiquers
#IMissYou
Poems about i miss you by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Sometimes I Still Wonder
I still wonder
How it would feel
To have my dreams
Suddenly go my way
How life would be
Had you decided to stay
What it would be like
To wake up every day
In your arms
How it would feel
To be protected
From the world’s harm
The laughter you gave
Filled the hole
In my heart
I somehow managed
To survive when
You said we had to part
The roller coaster
Has stopped
My emotions have calmed
I no longer envision
A poem
Requesting a response
I know you may ...
How it would feel
To have my dreams
Suddenly go my way
How life would be
Had you decided to stay
What it would be like
To wake up every day
In your arms
How it would feel
To be protected
From the world’s harm
The laughter you gave
Filled the hole
In my heart
I somehow managed
To survive when
You said we had to part
The roller coaster
Has stopped
My emotions have calmed
I no longer envision
A poem
Requesting a response
I know you may ...
#love
#IMissYou
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17 Comments
Desire
A rain of shimmering diamonds
fell upon my naked thoughts of you.
In my depths spread a sparkling pool.
But your grueling absence torments
the empty arms of lonely midnight hours.
My longing hunger pangs, while my yearning devours.
Time ripped open, climb my curls to my tower.
Your heart a fairytale, both sweet and sour.
My want is my need.
My need is my want.
Desire is a mysterious savant.
Submerged in drops of your radiant soul.
Stars glisten across a sky of coal.
Drenched in destiny's dew.
Our lifetimes...
fell upon my naked thoughts of you.
In my depths spread a sparkling pool.
But your grueling absence torments
the empty arms of lonely midnight hours.
My longing hunger pangs, while my yearning devours.
Time ripped open, climb my curls to my tower.
Your heart a fairytale, both sweet and sour.
My want is my need.
My need is my want.
Desire is a mysterious savant.
Submerged in drops of your radiant soul.
Stars glisten across a sky of coal.
Drenched in destiny's dew.
Our lifetimes...
#love
#lust
#IMissYou
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20 Comments
Delicious
exciting lush, pink plaything
loved above measure
desired in the hell of my choice
you designed the torture to free me
and as a knee, knee Queen
I aim to please
conjuring some roughhousing
in the eternal scorn, we have a reckoning
it's just us Big Man
you need some sexual healing
blow off steam inside me
our descendants have been busy with surprises
riding that crazy wavelength like they do
first I call in the seductresses
male and female after our kind
they ache with the need
affectionate smile ...
loved above measure
desired in the hell of my choice
you designed the torture to free me
and as a knee, knee Queen
I aim to please
conjuring some roughhousing
in the eternal scorn, we have a reckoning
it's just us Big Man
you need some sexual healing
blow off steam inside me
our descendants have been busy with surprises
riding that crazy wavelength like they do
first I call in the seductresses
male and female after our kind
they ache with the need
affectionate smile ...
#love
#angels
#IMissYou
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3 Comments
3 A.M.
9/11
5 years
have
passed
since every
thing became
meaningless
9/12
we fought
so hard
you and i
though the
end became
inevitable
9/13
flashbacks
of once you
in my arms
so lively
so sweet
tears
blur
my eyes
my heart
can’t breathe
9/14
stone in my
stomach
...
5 years
have
passed
since every
thing became
meaningless
9/12
we fought
so hard
you and i
though the
end became
inevitable
9/13
flashbacks
of once you
in my arms
so lively
so sweet
tears
blur
my eyes
my heart
can’t breathe
9/14
stone in my
stomach
...
#IMissYou
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Spare Thoughts
You don't have to do anything
Just be in the moment
Spare thoughts
Magical
On the other side of somewhere
Just be in the moment
Spare thoughts
Magical
On the other side of somewhere
#IMissYou
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22 Comments
ascension of Babel
the wind curls around the house
in full-bodied howl
making the porch rails hum
and I'm reminded of you
...of us...
how laughter used to rattle our lives
turning the most mundane into moments of hilarity
entertained by things no one else knew
...or could see
because giggles covered the screaming of our personal demons
creating a temporary sanctuary
and like a ghost who won't move on
your memory still haunts
words still echoing in my head I thought I'd already said...
...but perhaps they bear repeating...
there are...
in full-bodied howl
making the porch rails hum
and I'm reminded of you
...of us...
how laughter used to rattle our lives
turning the most mundane into moments of hilarity
entertained by things no one else knew
...or could see
because giggles covered the screaming of our personal demons
creating a temporary sanctuary
and like a ghost who won't move on
your memory still haunts
words still echoing in my head I thought I'd already said...
...but perhaps they bear repeating...
there are...
#sadness
#confessional
#acceptance #IMissYou
#acceptance #IMissYou
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4 Comments
MY HEALTH GETS IN THE WAY (INSPIRED BY TRUELOVER'S POEM)
#erotic
#rhyming
#illness #IMissYou
#illness #IMissYou
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3 Comments
AS I WAIT FOR YOU
I'll see your silhouette in the shadows as I turn into my bed, imagine your body draped across mine like fog in the bay in the early hours just before the sun rises. Will your kisses taste like dew when the sun rises just right?
Can I keep you here, with me, in the shadows? I just want to keep you, any part of you. Will your shadow be good enough to stay, stitched to a thimble long after you've left and gone? I hate to be so lonely without your touch, and the sway of the branches outside does nothing more than remind me of our own rhythm.
I'll lock my door so my visage...
Can I keep you here, with me, in the shadows? I just want to keep you, any part of you. Will your shadow be good enough to stay, stitched to a thimble long after you've left and gone? I hate to be so lonely without your touch, and the sway of the branches outside does nothing more than remind me of our own rhythm.
I'll lock my door so my visage...
#ILoveYou
#IMissYou
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4 Comments
Where Angels Tread Softly
in my dreams I walk alone
searching for angels in otherworldly realms
where their presence are felt like caresses
soft whispers showing me where
you are among the star dusts
Guiding souls in moments of rebirth
gentle angels tread softly and in whispers
holding hands in quiet moments
before the souls descend to be born
I watch hoping its your turn
souls leave the angels' gentle presence
their silvery wings wide unfurl
saying goodbye and hello to the world
mothers' welcome greeted with cries
they...
searching for angels in otherworldly realms
where their presence are felt like caresses
soft whispers showing me where
you are among the star dusts
Guiding souls in moments of rebirth
gentle angels tread softly and in whispers
holding hands in quiet moments
before the souls descend to be born
I watch hoping its your turn
souls leave the angels' gentle presence
their silvery wings wide unfurl
saying goodbye and hello to the world
mothers' welcome greeted with cries
they...
#dreams
#IMissYou
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8 Comments
skies above
did it hurt
when you fell
from skies above?
or was it
fast and easy
happening quickly enough?
were you aware
in that moment
of true love?
a sweet warrior
with true motivation
built ford tough
we'll miss you
and your motorcycle
wheelies and cuts
rest well soldier
incredible and kind
trusting your gut
big brown eyes
goofy silly smile
fell from skies above
when you fell
from skies above?
or was it
fast and easy
happening quickly enough?
were you aware
in that moment
of true love?
a sweet warrior
with true motivation
built ford tough
we'll miss you
and your motorcycle
wheelies and cuts
rest well soldier
incredible and kind
trusting your gut
big brown eyes
goofy silly smile
fell from skies above
#IMissYou
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12 Comments
A Soft Whisper In The Lost Sensations Of Time
VILLA KENNEDY
FRANKFURT, GERMANY
Georg Speyer Presidential Suite
Steffen tossed and turned in the king size bed, nocturnal rest refused to abide. He clasped both hands behind his head. He silently asked himself, just where the fuck was Isabella?
Julius has been attempting to make verbal contact with her for days now. He glanced over at the radio clock on the nightstand; the time registered six o’clock.
Of all the nights to be have experienced a bout of insomnia he thought.
He knew the speech he had to address later today have...
FRANKFURT, GERMANY
Georg Speyer Presidential Suite
Steffen tossed and turned in the king size bed, nocturnal rest refused to abide. He clasped both hands behind his head. He silently asked himself, just where the fuck was Isabella?
Julius has been attempting to make verbal contact with her for days now. He glanced over at the radio clock on the nightstand; the time registered six o’clock.
Of all the nights to be have experienced a bout of insomnia he thought.
He knew the speech he had to address later today have...
#lover
#IMissYou
#passion
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8 Comments
Hearts in the Sand (song)
Sunlight on the harbour
sparkles like mischievous eyes
Laughter of seagulls
Questions float on wind and tide
The trees where we used to walk together
They miss your footsteps now
Life comes in waves, they just keep coming
We don’t get to ride them all
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
It’s gonna be alright
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
I’m gonna be alright
The tides went on and on before us
The tides go on and...
sparkles like mischievous eyes
Laughter of seagulls
Questions float on wind and tide
The trees where we used to walk together
They miss your footsteps now
Life comes in waves, they just keep coming
We don’t get to ride them all
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
It’s gonna be alright
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
I’m gonna be alright
The tides went on and on before us
The tides go on and...
#love
#nature
#music
#LifeCycle
#IMissYou
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