Poems About I Miss You by Top Critiquers
#IMissYou
Poems about i miss you by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
6th Nov 2022 1:54am
6th Nov 2022 1:54am
A Soft Whisper In The Lost Sensations Of Time
VILLA KENNEDY
FRANKFURT, GERMANY
Georg Speyer Presidential Suite
Steffen tossed and turned in the king size bed, nocturnal rest refused to abide. He clasped both hands behind his head. He silently asked himself, just where the fuck was Isabella?
Julius has been attempting to make verbal contact with her for days now. He glanced over at the radio clock on the nightstand; the time registered six o’clock.
Of all the nights to be have experienced a bout of insomnia he thought.
He knew the speech he had to address later today have...
FRANKFURT, GERMANY
Georg Speyer Presidential Suite
Steffen tossed and turned in the king size bed, nocturnal rest refused to abide. He clasped both hands behind his head. He silently asked himself, just where the fuck was Isabella?
Julius has been attempting to make verbal contact with her for days now. He glanced over at the radio clock on the nightstand; the time registered six o’clock.
Of all the nights to be have experienced a bout of insomnia he thought.
He knew the speech he had to address later today have...
#lover
#IMissYou
#passion
602 reads
8 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
1st Jun 2023 10:24am
1st Jun 2023 10:24am
quench
I
want
to
quench
your
thirst
that's
why
I
write
poems
want
to
quench
your
thirst
that's
why
I
write
poems
#love
#IMissYou
400 reads
18 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
26th Sep 2024 9:22pm
26th Sep 2024 9:22pm
Dreams of Autumn
aeries in glades continue to dance
to memories of sunny days and blooms passed
but darker shadows are arrived
mantles to the spirit of Fall
the sighs of breeze through the trees
shedding their beauty to the ground
standing stark among evergreens
with branches like anguished claws
warmth of the hearth embrace
call the beloved to their home
watching the last leaf of autumn
makes it way to the ground below
to memories of sunny days and blooms passed
but darker shadows are arrived
mantles to the spirit of Fall
the sighs of breeze through the trees
shedding their beauty to the ground
standing stark among evergreens
with branches like anguished claws
warmth of the hearth embrace
call the beloved to their home
watching the last leaf of autumn
makes it way to the ground below
#IMissYou
130 reads
10 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2024 2:14pm
22nd Apr 2024 2:14pm
Loop
Sometimes I think
I already forgot your name
then I hear the rustle of leaves
and that wind so jealous
pulling your hair
and reminding me of your voice
everything in the stones spells your name
everything in the fire supposes your eyes
water boils and air evaporates
just to make me remember
that I can't forget you
I turn to the side and try to ignore the light
ineffective attempt to lull my sleep
to dissolve me into an eternal dream
lullabies that I never sang
that I never heard from you
I want...
I already forgot your name
then I hear the rustle of leaves
and that wind so jealous
pulling your hair
and reminding me of your voice
everything in the stones spells your name
everything in the fire supposes your eyes
water boils and air evaporates
just to make me remember
that I can't forget you
I turn to the side and try to ignore the light
ineffective attempt to lull my sleep
to dissolve me into an eternal dream
lullabies that I never sang
that I never heard from you
I want...
#dreams
#forgiveness
#IMissYou
#sadness
#sleep
95 reads
4 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
17th Oct 2024 9:30am
17th Oct 2024 9:30am
Kindred
..It's the Purgatory of Us
Witnessed where Pantheons peer intently
...from Realms of Otherness
Forever entwined...deeply rooted...
...In spaces Reserved for Gaia's Gallery
The Watchers Know who We are...familiar with our Scars
...our Akashic secrets...
Sacred...
We've done things this Karmic Uni-Verse
has Voyeured in our randomness with distinct explicitness ...
Witnessed where Pantheons peer intently
...from Realms of Otherness
Forever entwined...deeply rooted...
...In spaces Reserved for Gaia's Gallery
The Watchers Know who We are...familiar with our Scars
...our Akashic secrets...
Sacred...
We've done things this Karmic Uni-Verse
has Voyeured in our randomness with distinct explicitness ...
#love
#spiritual
#travel
#memories
#IMissYou
223 reads
Betty
Poem Published
20th Oct 2024 5:07am
20th Oct 2024 5:07am
time howls its silence
I shivered in a blanket of
cobwebbed emotions
as a day passed
with just a
scattered light
through the holes
in my soul
and it felt like
teeth clenching
in darkness
so honest
it showed
nothing
It felt like that
like that
it felt like alarms
blaring danger
on all sides as
the wind howled
like a raving thing
thirsting for
the spare copper
in my veins
yet less survivable
Yes.
Less survivable
than...
cobwebbed emotions
as a day passed
with just a
scattered light
through the holes
in my soul
and it felt like
teeth clenching
in darkness
so honest
it showed
nothing
It felt like that
like that
it felt like alarms
blaring danger
on all sides as
the wind howled
like a raving thing
thirsting for
the spare copper
in my veins
yet less survivable
Yes.
Less survivable
than...
#IMissYou
#love
#passion #sadness
#passion #sadness
220 reads
13 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
19th Nov 2023 11:04pm
19th Nov 2023 11:04pm
Hearts in the Sand (song)
Sunlight on the harbour
sparkles like mischievous eyes
Laughter of seagulls
Questions float on wind and tide
The trees where we used to walk together
They miss your footsteps now
Life comes in waves, they just keep coming
We don’t get to ride them all
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
It’s gonna be alright
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
I’m gonna be alright
The tides went on and on before us
The tides go on and...
sparkles like mischievous eyes
Laughter of seagulls
Questions float on wind and tide
The trees where we used to walk together
They miss your footsteps now
Life comes in waves, they just keep coming
We don’t get to ride them all
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
It’s gonna be alright
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
I’m gonna be alright
The tides went on and on before us
The tides go on and...
#love
#nature
#music
#LifeCycle
#IMissYou
278 reads
10 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
31st Aug 2023 1:22am
31st Aug 2023 1:22am
sleepy head
her train was due in at nine forty three
I was still in bed,
unfortunately
I was still in bed,
unfortunately
#IMissYou
99 reads
1 Comment
smackdownraven
Poem Published
4th Sep 2022 4:43am
4th Sep 2022 4:43am
a kiss
touch me in my shadow places I'm lonely for your resolve
who silently admonishes me to weep no more
there in the dark you wait for me
to quiet my noise and see you once more
a man of great patience
who watched on while my demons rage
and I sat in utter desolation
you had my attention in the pain
I pace the bleak and you counted my steps
catching my tears as they fall
I didn't see you then
I couldn't see my own haunted reflection mirrored in your gaze
but your stillness moved me hardman
with deft...
who silently admonishes me to weep no more
there in the dark you wait for me
to quiet my noise and see you once more
a man of great patience
who watched on while my demons rage
and I sat in utter desolation
you had my attention in the pain
I pace the bleak and you counted my steps
catching my tears as they fall
I didn't see you then
I couldn't see my own haunted reflection mirrored in your gaze
but your stillness moved me hardman
with deft...
#love
#IMissYou
375 reads
3 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
24th Apr 2024 9:55am
24th Apr 2024 9:55am
Goodbye Isn't Final
No goodbye
Is truly final
For destiny
Hands out favors
Unlike a
Cop who
Passes out
His menacing
tickets
Is truly final
For destiny
Hands out favors
Unlike a
Cop who
Passes out
His menacing
tickets
#breakup
#grief
#IMissYou
188 reads
20 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
9th Nov 2022 3:49am
9th Nov 2022 3:49am
17 years of tears
17 years of tears
Seventeen long years ago, the Angel's got their way, i couldn't stop them taking you, no matter how hard I seemed to pray
Why did they take you, there was so much still to share, now I have a whole in my heart and a pain so hard to bare
Surely they didn't need you, as much as i did down here, there's still moments when I cry for you, my tears still sting and sear
There were plenty others the Angel's could have had, but they chose the best I guess, though it made me sad
You taught me so many...
Seventeen long years ago, the Angel's got their way, i couldn't stop them taking you, no matter how hard I seemed to pray
Why did they take you, there was so much still to share, now I have a whole in my heart and a pain so hard to bare
Surely they didn't need you, as much as i did down here, there's still moments when I cry for you, my tears still sting and sear
There were plenty others the Angel's could have had, but they chose the best I guess, though it made me sad
You taught me so many...
#love
#grief
#IMissYou
295 reads
4 Comments
Rew
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2023 8:22pm
2nd Feb 2023 8:22pm
I remember
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea
when the tide was out and seaweed lay about
and little clickety-creatures scuttled away from me,
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea,
Among those shallow pools among fractured rocks
and those deep-green pools, those dark green stains
in the crack of rocks cracked by the restless sea,
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea,
By the rooshing inward woosh the receding hush
of the sound of the sea on cobbly pebbley road
the click and clack as we walked under the bullying gulls ...
when the tide was out and seaweed lay about
and little clickety-creatures scuttled away from me,
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea,
Among those shallow pools among fractured rocks
and those deep-green pools, those dark green stains
in the crack of rocks cracked by the restless sea,
I remember the aroma left behind by the sea,
By the rooshing inward woosh the receding hush
of the sound of the sea on cobbly pebbley road
the click and clack as we walked under the bullying gulls ...
#rhyming
#SelfReflection
#IMissYou #FirstLove
#IMissYou #FirstLove
197 reads
2 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About I Miss You by Top Critiquers
