Poems About I Miss You by Top Critiquers
#IMissYou
Poems about i miss you by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
19th Nov 2023 11:04pm
19th Nov 2023 11:04pm
Hearts in the Sand (song)
Sunlight on the harbour
sparkles like mischievous eyes
Laughter of seagulls
Questions float on wind and tide
The trees where we used to walk together
They miss your footsteps now
Life comes in waves, they just keep coming
We don’t get to ride them all
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
It’s gonna be alright
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
I’m gonna be alright
The tides went on and on before us
The tides go on and...
sparkles like mischievous eyes
Laughter of seagulls
Questions float on wind and tide
The trees where we used to walk together
They miss your footsteps now
Life comes in waves, they just keep coming
We don’t get to ride them all
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
It’s gonna be alright
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
I’m gonna be alright
The tides went on and on before us
The tides go on and...
#love
#nature
#music
#LifeCycle
#IMissYou
375 reads
10 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
6th Nov 2022 1:54am
6th Nov 2022 1:54am
A Soft Whisper In The Lost Sensations Of Time
VILLA KENNEDY
FRANKFURT, GERMANY
Georg Speyer Presidential Suite
Steffen tossed and turned in the king size bed, nocturnal rest refused to abide. He clasped both hands behind his head. He silently asked himself, just where the fuck was Isabella?
Julius has been attempting to make verbal contact with her for days now. He glanced over at the radio clock on the nightstand; the time registered six o’clock.
Of all the nights to be have experienced a bout of insomnia he thought.
He knew the speech he had to address later today have...
FRANKFURT, GERMANY
Georg Speyer Presidential Suite
Steffen tossed and turned in the king size bed, nocturnal rest refused to abide. He clasped both hands behind his head. He silently asked himself, just where the fuck was Isabella?
Julius has been attempting to make verbal contact with her for days now. He glanced over at the radio clock on the nightstand; the time registered six o’clock.
Of all the nights to be have experienced a bout of insomnia he thought.
He knew the speech he had to address later today have...
#lover
#IMissYou
#passion
680 reads
8 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
4th Sep 2022 4:43am
4th Sep 2022 4:43am
a kiss
touch me in my shadow places I'm lonely for your resolve
who silently admonishes me to weep no more
there in the dark you wait for me
to quiet my noise and see you once more
a man of great patience
who watched on while my demons rage
and I sat in utter desolation
you had my attention in the pain
I pace the bleak and you counted my steps
catching my tears as they fall
I didn't see you then
I couldn't see my own haunted reflection mirrored in your gaze
but your stillness moved me hardman
with deft...
who silently admonishes me to weep no more
there in the dark you wait for me
to quiet my noise and see you once more
a man of great patience
who watched on while my demons rage
and I sat in utter desolation
you had my attention in the pain
I pace the bleak and you counted my steps
catching my tears as they fall
I didn't see you then
I couldn't see my own haunted reflection mirrored in your gaze
but your stillness moved me hardman
with deft...
#love
#IMissYou
442 reads
3 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
12th Aug 2022 10:38am
12th Aug 2022 10:38am
It's Pretty Simple, Really
#sadness
#disappointment
#IMissYou
#separation
#bittersweet
298 reads
0 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 1:51am
24th Feb 2025 1:51am
The Missing Game (lyrics)
verse]
You're chasing ghosts
in this missing game
don't look down
no, don't look down
stay a while and maybe we'll forget
all these things we've learned to hate
before I leave you standing
at the edge of lonely
[Verse 2]
I don't miss you like a lover should
I'm done making love to ghosts
under these bruised skies
that spell out our names
in a broken you me tragedy
[Chorus]
We hold on
when we should let go
I'm lost without you
in this missing game
missing game
I hold...
You're chasing ghosts
in this missing game
don't look down
no, don't look down
stay a while and maybe we'll forget
all these things we've learned to hate
before I leave you standing
at the edge of lonely
[Verse 2]
I don't miss you like a lover should
I'm done making love to ghosts
under these bruised skies
that spell out our names
in a broken you me tragedy
[Chorus]
We hold on
when we should let go
I'm lost without you
in this missing game
missing game
I hold...
#breakup
#heartbroken
#IMissYou #love
#IMissYou #love
134 reads
2 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
14th Sep 2019 2:56pm
14th Sep 2019 2:56pm
Sand and Foam
I am forever walking upon these shores,
Betwixt the sand and the foam.
The high tide will erase my foot-prints,
And the wind will blow away the foam.
But the sea and the shore will remain
Forever"
Khalil Gibran
***
I guess I shouldn’t be surprised the world is a harder place than I imagined it should be.
Reality always had more substance than the stuff of dreams.
Clearly defined and unyielding as if bolts and bars were set between us…
and perhaps they are,
but in my dreams,
...
Betwixt the sand and the foam.
The high tide will erase my foot-prints,
And the wind will blow away the foam.
But the sea and the shore will remain
Forever"
Khalil Gibran
***
I guess I shouldn’t be surprised the world is a harder place than I imagined it should be.
Reality always had more substance than the stuff of dreams.
Clearly defined and unyielding as if bolts and bars were set between us…
and perhaps they are,
but in my dreams,
...
#love
#relationships
#dreams #IMissYou
#dreams #IMissYou
714 reads
7 Comments
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
13th May 2019 10:15pm
13th May 2019 10:15pm
Pezophaps solitaria
I know I should not feel this way
my path or A PATH of illogical stupidity
often I find though I try to fight this -
I am a willing slave to a feel of loss
knowing She loves me, yet unable
to shake this unreasonable feeling
of missing……….
missing my Love
When she is not online the updraft
that might lift my indolent wings
ink that usually flows from tepid
to a romantic infernal flame
becomes wet to a near lava ending
barely lit blue match fire droplet
breathed out
dried to angst and anxiousness
near...
my path or A PATH of illogical stupidity
often I find though I try to fight this -
I am a willing slave to a feel of loss
knowing She loves me, yet unable
to shake this unreasonable feeling
of missing……….
missing my Love
When she is not online the updraft
that might lift my indolent wings
ink that usually flows from tepid
to a romantic infernal flame
becomes wet to a near lava ending
barely lit blue match fire droplet
breathed out
dried to angst and anxiousness
near...
#technology
#confessional
#myself
#LongDistanceRelationship
#IMissYou
541 reads
4 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
31st Aug 2023 1:22am
31st Aug 2023 1:22am
sleepy head
her train was due in at nine forty three
I was still in bed,
unfortunately
I was still in bed,
unfortunately
#IMissYou
152 reads
1 Comment
KristinaX
Poem Published
8th Aug 2022 00:30am
8th Aug 2022 00:30am
You flip through me...
Closing my eyes feeling you overwhelm every cell.
Repeating mentally: "Just don't let go."
Tie me tightly and hold me here, this cell you put me in.
Reflecting the embodiment of your darkest desires.
I'm yours. I will melt with the dawn and disappear ...
But while I'm around, I whisper to you, as if in delirium:
Embroider me with the roughness of your fingers, flip through me.
Do whatever you want - just don't let go as I shake and vibrate!
...
Repeating mentally: "Just don't let go."
Tie me tightly and hold me here, this cell you put me in.
Reflecting the embodiment of your darkest desires.
I'm yours. I will melt with the dawn and disappear ...
But while I'm around, I whisper to you, as if in delirium:
Embroider me with the roughness of your fingers, flip through me.
Do whatever you want - just don't let go as I shake and vibrate!
...
#dark
#WritingPoetry
#IMissYou
#sensual
#orgasm
870 reads
55 Comments
Ljdynamic
Poem Published
25th May 2024 3:23pm
25th May 2024 3:23pm
Recapturing
Christmas has passed,
and the new year approaches.
I encroach upon you
with a belated text.
The pretext is the weather
to remind you
of everything we have been through.
The snow was our serenity.
Snowflakes fall, and I
want you to know that I walk
for blocks in the symphony
of the busy streets alone.
I have a bittersweet
but upbeat feeling reading your reply.
You have established roots
where it does not snow.
Still, I hope the fruits of your labor
are savored and receive water from the oasis.
I...
and the new year approaches.
I encroach upon you
with a belated text.
The pretext is the weather
to remind you
of everything we have been through.
The snow was our serenity.
Snowflakes fall, and I
want you to know that I walk
for blocks in the symphony
of the busy streets alone.
I have a bittersweet
but upbeat feeling reading your reply.
You have established roots
where it does not snow.
Still, I hope the fruits of your labor
are savored and receive water from the oasis.
I...
#BestFriend
#betrayal
#IMissYou #TimeHeals
#IMissYou #TimeHeals
31 reads
16 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 5:23pm
16th Mar 2025 5:23pm
farewelling to someone is never done with a smile
call it love
or something else,
my relationship
with you
was the strongest,
it was complete,,, yes
but without you???
it's incomplete,
you never tied it
but i never let go of it
now
suddenly you left me
N n i don't understand
..... my heart is breaking
nd i wonder why my eyes
aren't participating
in this phase...
or something else,
my relationship
with you
was the strongest,
it was complete,,, yes
but without you???
it's incomplete,
you never tied it
but i never let go of it
now
suddenly you left me
N n i don't understand
..... my heart is breaking
nd i wonder why my eyes
aren't participating
in this phase...
#IMissYou
#relationships
#sadness
120 reads
4 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
21st Jun 2023 5:56am
21st Jun 2023 5:56am
A Wake In The Mourne Of...
i awaken your love
caressing you
arresting your heart in
dark confections
flooding your senses
into a state of sensual overload
floating formless and naked
insecurities rattled you
along the journey of your willed exodus
within perennial frigidness
seeking a haven amongst the shadows
as a substitute for loneliness
i'm here to expose the strength
you once thought of as a vulnerability
undressing you while addressing
with touch and tenderness
the nuances of an introverted soul
...
caressing you
arresting your heart in
dark confections
flooding your senses
into a state of sensual overload
floating formless and naked
insecurities rattled you
along the journey of your willed exodus
within perennial frigidness
seeking a haven amongst the shadows
as a substitute for loneliness
i'm here to expose the strength
you once thought of as a vulnerability
undressing you while addressing
with touch and tenderness
the nuances of an introverted soul
...
#regret
#lover
#IMissYou
452 reads
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