Poems About I Miss You by Top Critiquers
#IMissYou
Poems about i miss you by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
AverageJoe
Poem Published
14th Sep 2019 2:56pm
14th Sep 2019 2:56pm
Sand and Foam
I am forever walking upon these shores,
Betwixt the sand and the foam.
The high tide will erase my foot-prints,
And the wind will blow away the foam.
But the sea and the shore will remain
Forever"
Khalil Gibran
***
I guess I shouldn’t be surprised the world is a harder place than I imagined it should be.
Reality always had more substance than the stuff of dreams.
Clearly defined and unyielding as if bolts and bars were set between us…
and perhaps they are,
but in my dreams,
...
Betwixt the sand and the foam.
The high tide will erase my foot-prints,
And the wind will blow away the foam.
But the sea and the shore will remain
Forever"
Khalil Gibran
***
I guess I shouldn’t be surprised the world is a harder place than I imagined it should be.
Reality always had more substance than the stuff of dreams.
Clearly defined and unyielding as if bolts and bars were set between us…
and perhaps they are,
but in my dreams,
...
#love
#relationships
#dreams #IMissYou
#dreams #IMissYou
686 reads
7 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
31st Aug 2023 1:22am
31st Aug 2023 1:22am
sleepy head
her train was due in at nine forty three
I was still in bed,
unfortunately
I was still in bed,
unfortunately
#IMissYou
135 reads
1 Comment
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
6th Nov 2022 1:54am
6th Nov 2022 1:54am
A Soft Whisper In The Lost Sensations Of Time
VILLA KENNEDY
FRANKFURT, GERMANY
Georg Speyer Presidential Suite
Steffen tossed and turned in the king size bed, nocturnal rest refused to abide. He clasped both hands behind his head. He silently asked himself, just where the fuck was Isabella?
Julius has been attempting to make verbal contact with her for days now. He glanced over at the radio clock on the nightstand; the time registered six o’clock.
Of all the nights to be have experienced a bout of insomnia he thought.
He knew the speech he had to address later today have...
FRANKFURT, GERMANY
Georg Speyer Presidential Suite
Steffen tossed and turned in the king size bed, nocturnal rest refused to abide. He clasped both hands behind his head. He silently asked himself, just where the fuck was Isabella?
Julius has been attempting to make verbal contact with her for days now. He glanced over at the radio clock on the nightstand; the time registered six o’clock.
Of all the nights to be have experienced a bout of insomnia he thought.
He knew the speech he had to address later today have...
#lover
#IMissYou
#passion
657 reads
8 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 1:32am
14th Jan 2025 1:32am
the indelible ephemera of you
I found forever in the ether
called your blue eyes salvation
and pretended we could be God
like we were capable of using
that kind of power for anything other
than mutual self destruction
I've loved you for a lifetime
made stained glassed pictograms of you
and cut my feet on their remains
after I smashed your memory
on the floor
when you traded me for a woman
you found wrapped around
a stripper pole
If I had a dollar for every woman
you wanted more than me
I...
called your blue eyes salvation
and pretended we could be God
like we were capable of using
that kind of power for anything other
than mutual self destruction
I've loved you for a lifetime
made stained glassed pictograms of you
and cut my feet on their remains
after I smashed your memory
on the floor
when you traded me for a woman
you found wrapped around
a stripper pole
If I had a dollar for every woman
you wanted more than me
I...
#IMissYou
#love
#lover #UnrequitedLove
#lover #UnrequitedLove
185 reads
2 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
21st Sep 2022 8:54pm
21st Sep 2022 8:54pm
Cherry Blossom Bather
Cherry Blossom Bather
Distant koto melody
Haunts her kimono folds
The beneath she knows
When she bathes
She decorates boughs
With his rice paper poems
Japanese Mistletoe
For her lonely kiss
Desolate petal in the eye
of a cherry blossom
Floats on an autumn river
Lonely as a moonbeam
When she loosens her sash for the lave
Distant koto melody
Haunts her kimono folds
The beneath she knows
When she bathes
She decorates boughs
With his rice paper poems
Japanese Mistletoe
For her lonely kiss
Desolate petal in the eye
of a cherry blossom
Floats on an autumn river
Lonely as a moonbeam
When she loosens her sash for the lave
#loneliness
#romantic
#IMissYou #sensual
#IMissYou #sensual
325 reads
2 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
1st Jun 2023 10:24am
1st Jun 2023 10:24am
quench
I
want
to
quench
your
thirst
that's
why
I
write
poems
want
to
quench
your
thirst
that's
why
I
write
poems
#love
#IMissYou
442 reads
18 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
7th Dec 2023 00:23am
7th Dec 2023 00:23am
Cage Striped Heart
My world’s so far away
Living in a parallel home
I’m hoping you’ll stay
Always on my asylum mind
How you move me even when
We’re so far apart
Locked down in a different town
Penitentiary art
Penitentiary art
Wondering where you are
And what you’re doing
Strumming bars on
My Cage Striped Heart
Phasing through concrete
Playing my heart out
Knowing you’ll hear me
Cause no one else sounds like me
I’ve got nothing but time
But I don’t want to wait
Your voice unlocks my
Paradise...
Living in a parallel home
I’m hoping you’ll stay
Always on my asylum mind
How you move me even when
We’re so far apart
Locked down in a different town
Penitentiary art
Penitentiary art
Wondering where you are
And what you’re doing
Strumming bars on
My Cage Striped Heart
Phasing through concrete
Playing my heart out
Knowing you’ll hear me
Cause no one else sounds like me
I’ve got nothing but time
But I don’t want to wait
Your voice unlocks my
Paradise...
#lyrics
#LongDistanceRelationship
#IMissYou
676 reads
29 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 7:35pm
26th Jan 2025 7:35pm
Friendship...poof!
The Cycle of Friendship...
We played dolls every Friday while her Mom babysat me. Then our mothers fought and I never saw her again. I don't remember her name!
Lisa sat in front of me in 1st grade. We sat together at lunch. Then, my mother moved us across the city.
At the new school there was Chuckie. He made funny faces. The end of the school year was the last I saw him.
Kids came and went. I expected it. Then I married Fat Boy and I wasn't allowed friends. There were a couple women here and there that were almost friends until Fat Boy...
We played dolls every Friday while her Mom babysat me. Then our mothers fought and I never saw her again. I don't remember her name!
Lisa sat in front of me in 1st grade. We sat together at lunch. Then, my mother moved us across the city.
At the new school there was Chuckie. He made funny faces. The end of the school year was the last I saw him.
Kids came and went. I expected it. Then I married Fat Boy and I wasn't allowed friends. There were a couple women here and there that were almost friends until Fat Boy...
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#IMissYou
#MovingOn
#sadness
106 reads
8 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
19th Nov 2023 11:04pm
19th Nov 2023 11:04pm
Hearts in the Sand (song)
Sunlight on the harbour
sparkles like mischievous eyes
Laughter of seagulls
Questions float on wind and tide
The trees where we used to walk together
They miss your footsteps now
Life comes in waves, they just keep coming
We don’t get to ride them all
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
It’s gonna be alright
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
I’m gonna be alright
The tides went on and on before us
The tides go on and...
sparkles like mischievous eyes
Laughter of seagulls
Questions float on wind and tide
The trees where we used to walk together
They miss your footsteps now
Life comes in waves, they just keep coming
We don’t get to ride them all
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
It’s gonna be alright
Lifetimes wash away like hearts in the sand
You’re living in my memory
I’m gonna be alright
The tides went on and on before us
The tides go on and...
#love
#nature
#music
#LifeCycle
#IMissYou
332 reads
10 Comments
musht_e_ghubaar
Arsh
Arsh
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 6:46pm
14th Feb 2025 6:46pm
Waves
Waves of longing rises
Your touch, a tide I crave deeply.
I am drowning in your pull.
Arshad
Your touch, a tide I crave deeply.
I am drowning in your pull.
Arshad
#beauty
#ForbiddenLove
#IMissYou #romantic
#IMissYou #romantic
147 reads
4 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
9th Nov 2022 3:49am
9th Nov 2022 3:49am
17 years of tears
17 years of tears
Seventeen long years ago, the Angel's got their way, i couldn't stop them taking you, no matter how hard I seemed to pray
Why did they take you, there was so much still to share, now I have a whole in my heart and a pain so hard to bare
Surely they didn't need you, as much as i did down here, there's still moments when I cry for you, my tears still sting and sear
There were plenty others the Angel's could have had, but they chose the best I guess, though it made me sad
You taught me so many...
Seventeen long years ago, the Angel's got their way, i couldn't stop them taking you, no matter how hard I seemed to pray
Why did they take you, there was so much still to share, now I have a whole in my heart and a pain so hard to bare
Surely they didn't need you, as much as i did down here, there's still moments when I cry for you, my tears still sting and sear
There were plenty others the Angel's could have had, but they chose the best I guess, though it made me sad
You taught me so many...
#love
#grief
#IMissYou
330 reads
4 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
12th Aug 2022 10:38am
12th Aug 2022 10:38am
It's Pretty Simple, Really
#sadness
#disappointment
#IMissYou
#separation
#bittersweet
271 reads
0 Comments
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