Poems About Forbidden Love Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about forbidden love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Poet__2248
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 12:54pm
29th Sep 2024 12:54pm
Forgetting me
I didnt want you to forget me, please don’t forget me.
I want to stay in your memory. I want to be there forever.
Let me burrow deeper and deeper. Into your thoughts, into your mind so that I am free to torment you, comfort you just as you do me in mine.
Let me conquer your dreams as well, let the face you see always be mine.
Keep me with you.
Please.
I want to stay in your memory. I want to be there forever.
Let me burrow deeper and deeper. Into your thoughts, into your mind so that I am free to torment you, comfort you just as you do me in mine.
Let me conquer your dreams as well, let the face you see always be mine.
Keep me with you.
Please.
#admiration
#beauty
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#love
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Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
7th Sep 2024 1:48pm
7th Sep 2024 1:48pm
The Unlikely Church
In a rustic western bar nestled in the heart of Oklahoma City, the night was in full swing. Wooden floors, worn smooth by countless boots, creaked softly under the weight of the evening crowd. A country guitar hummed in the background, providing a comforting soundtrack to the low buzz of conversation and laughter. The air was thick with the scents of aged whiskey and fried food, the dim lighting casting long shadows across the room.
At the far end of the bar, a young woman named Sarah, barely in her twenties, perched on a stool. She wore a modest dress and carried an air of...
At the far end of the bar, a young woman named Sarah, barely in her twenties, perched on a stool. She wore a modest dress and carried an air of...
#ForbiddenLove
#morality
#religion #romantic
#religion #romantic
228 reads
8 Comments
Sageofsongs
Poem Published
5th Sep 2024 3:46pm
5th Sep 2024 3:46pm
Nice Guy Chronicles I
"She speaks about you a lot you know"
"Ohhhh-kay" I reply
Not knowing if that's a good thing or bad thing.
As her boyfriend gives me a suspicious look.
I break the ice with a joke pretending that
This situation isn't awkward.
"Ohhhh-kay" I reply
Not knowing if that's a good thing or bad thing.
As her boyfriend gives me a suspicious look.
I break the ice with a joke pretending that
This situation isn't awkward.
#ForbiddenLove
#girlfriend
#love #relationships
#love #relationships
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UbiquitousVoid
Poem Published
3rd Sep 2024 8:32am
3rd Sep 2024 8:32am
WHITE
How could it be
My oath of malice, broken?
What did I see
From out my dreams, awoken?
Fair and unbeknownst to me
With radiance bequeathed the shade
To my orbicular gates
Stricken
The purity refined therein
Made every light anemic
And the rose of her smile
My kaleidoscopic prison
A single thought escaped
As I made away
"Goodness, me"
My oath of malice, broken?
What did I see
From out my dreams, awoken?
Fair and unbeknownst to me
With radiance bequeathed the shade
To my orbicular gates
Stricken
The purity refined therein
Made every light anemic
And the rose of her smile
My kaleidoscopic prison
A single thought escaped
As I made away
"Goodness, me"
#admiration
#beauty
#ForbiddenLove
130 reads
2 Comments
copingwithwords__
Poem Published
26th Aug 2024 8:07pm
26th Aug 2024 8:07pm
i want what you can give me
i want what you can give me
or at least i think i do
your messages, your face in my mind
they haunt me all damn night
i want you to give me that attention
to be soft and sweet and - oh, not again neglection!
i‘ll let you walk all over my boundaries
end up being used and never getting to have anniversaries.
i hate the power you have over me
and my power over you, the one i physically feel
can’t you just be nice to me, supportive even?
can‘t you show me affection, love i really believe in?
all you do is use me,...
or at least i think i do
your messages, your face in my mind
they haunt me all damn night
i want you to give me that attention
to be soft and sweet and - oh, not again neglection!
i‘ll let you walk all over my boundaries
end up being used and never getting to have anniversaries.
i hate the power you have over me
and my power over you, the one i physically feel
can’t you just be nice to me, supportive even?
can‘t you show me affection, love i really believe in?
all you do is use me,...
#conflict
#ForbiddenLove
#friendship
#manipulation
#temptation
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OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
19th Aug 2024 3:24am
19th Aug 2024 3:24am
LOVE IN MY ARMS (I)(original 1st draft;1976; Poretto Jetty, Galveston, Texas; struggling with being Gay at 22 yr.s old)
love in my arms
here then gone
comes and goes
like some rare moon tide
so infrequently in my life
sunrise soon brightened
into new day
but it s clarity only added to
my ever deepening
self loathing s confusions
so i chose to stay home
until the sun had gone down
as evening eventually arrived
only a comfortable disguise
then down to the beach i walked
as night s darkness soon fell upon me
out at the end of a jetty
where upon looking back towards shore
i stared up at the seawall s...
here then gone
comes and goes
like some rare moon tide
so infrequently in my life
sunrise soon brightened
into new day
but it s clarity only added to
my ever deepening
self loathing s confusions
so i chose to stay home
until the sun had gone down
as evening eventually arrived
only a comfortable disguise
then down to the beach i walked
as night s darkness soon fell upon me
out at the end of a jetty
where upon looking back towards shore
i stared up at the seawall s...
#ForbiddenLove
#gay
#misunderstood
#sea
#UnrequitedLove
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OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
14th Aug 2024 2:17am
14th Aug 2024 2:17am
LOVE IN MY ARMS (IV)-(4th revision; 1976; Galveston, Texas; out at the end of Poretto Jetty, contemplating suicide.)
love in my arms
here then gone
comes and goes
like a rare moon tide
sunrise soon brightened
into new day
but it s clearness
only added
to my ever deepening
self loathing s confusions
evening eventually arrived
only a comfortable disguise
down to the beach
i slowly walked
as night s darkness
soon fell upon me
out at the end of a jetty
where i stared up at ...
here then gone
comes and goes
like a rare moon tide
sunrise soon brightened
into new day
but it s clearness
only added
to my ever deepening
self loathing s confusions
evening eventually arrived
only a comfortable disguise
down to the beach
i slowly walked
as night s darkness
soon fell upon me
out at the end of a jetty
where i stared up at ...
#beach
#conflict
#ForbiddenLove
#sea
#UnrequitedLove
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OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
5th Aug 2024 5:13am
5th Aug 2024 5:13am
LOVE IN MY ARMS (II)-(1976, Poretto Jetty, Galveston Island, Texas; on a dark night of struggling with my being Gay.)
love in my arms
here then gone
so rarely comes
but when it does
like some rare moon tide
and seems to be true and real
each new time around
it also seems
to almost always go away
as quickly as it comes
then just a short while later
after waking from my sleep s
already forgotten
meandering dreams
i got up to begin another new day
i wrote down those initial
still lingering thoughts
stil faintly echoing away in my head
which softly arose
as i...
here then gone
so rarely comes
but when it does
like some rare moon tide
and seems to be true and real
each new time around
it also seems
to almost always go away
as quickly as it comes
then just a short while later
after waking from my sleep s
already forgotten
meandering dreams
i got up to begin another new day
i wrote down those initial
still lingering thoughts
stil faintly echoing away in my head
which softly arose
as i...
#confusion
#ForbiddenLove
#LGBT
#loneliness
#shame
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Whackytraveler
Poem Published
5th Aug 2024 00:19am
5th Aug 2024 00:19am
Fine Blackberry Wine
BlackBerry Wine
The taste is fine
The shade of my lips
Before they’ve been kissed
And adorned with lipstick
The glass is half full
I still feel the pull of the sweet night
As I close my eyes
The moon keeps me company
I never feel lonely
Blackberry wine
The taste of a sweet line
One says to get you in bed
The type of man you want to forget but can’t
I might switch back to Blueberry
The taste is fine
The shade of my lips
Before they’ve been kissed
And adorned with lipstick
The glass is half full
I still feel the pull of the sweet night
As I close my eyes
The moon keeps me company
I never feel lonely
Blackberry wine
The taste of a sweet line
One says to get you in bed
The type of man you want to forget but can’t
I might switch back to Blueberry
#alcohol
#ForbiddenLove
#honesty
151 reads
4 Comments
Noble_Incubus
Poem Published
23rd Jul 2024 12:19pm
23rd Jul 2024 12:19pm
Lust Potion
#ForbiddenLove
#lust
#sex
298 reads
2 Comments
EveAteRedApples
Poem Published
11th Jul 2024 11:03pm
11th Jul 2024 11:03pm
it's stoner love, I promise
I rarely let people
see me stoned
but I like this good girl image
paired with the random sick things
I say when the lights are dim
and my body vibrates
to a frequency higher than my inhibitions
His smile fucking kills me
and I want to find out what lies
beneath his careless boho facade
like getting bent over
in the bushes at a hippy drum circle
I want feel the beat of every hit
he can drive into me
in this heightened frenzied ecstasy
I hand him the quarter he came for
but I don't speak...
see me stoned
but I like this good girl image
paired with the random sick things
I say when the lights are dim
and my body vibrates
to a frequency higher than my inhibitions
His smile fucking kills me
and I want to find out what lies
beneath his careless boho facade
like getting bent over
in the bushes at a hippy drum circle
I want feel the beat of every hit
he can drive into me
in this heightened frenzied ecstasy
I hand him the quarter he came for
but I don't speak...
#crush
#ForbiddenLove
#lust
268 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
7th Jul 2024 8:43pm
7th Jul 2024 8:43pm
Not sailing on the ocean
Not feeling pretty safe at all
Elaborate
Labor hate
Abort later
What's up?
Butterflies
Butter flies
Flies will fly
Around you.
Cocoa puff
Swimming
Into vodka
What's up?
Cow milk
Top hats
No taps
What's up?
No half full
Any glasses
No empty
Small cups
What's up?
Not ever
Full jugs
Bottoms up...
Elaborate
Labor hate
Abort later
What's up?
Butterflies
Butter flies
Flies will fly
Around you.
Cocoa puff
Swimming
Into vodka
What's up?
Cow milk
Top hats
No taps
What's up?
No half full
Any glasses
No empty
Small cups
What's up?
Not ever
Full jugs
Bottoms up...
#alcohol
#butterfly
#ForbiddenLove
#mirror
#SelfDiscovery
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2 Comments
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