Poems About Forbidden Love Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about forbidden love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Damned through Love
#children
#sex
#family
#corruption
#ForbiddenLove
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Nameless To Me
It is nameless to me,
It has no name,
It lays there crying, in the fetal position as a child would,
First sounding like small whimpering,
Then rises to a more audible cry,
Something that even I can hear;
Words soon form, asking “Why” what is its crime,
Why am I doing this to it…
Hahaha…
There is no crime noted,
Nothing for to atone,
Just felt this particular way today,
And this smile, that particular feeling that comes over me
When am feeling extra...
It has no name,
It lays there crying, in the fetal position as a child would,
First sounding like small whimpering,
Then rises to a more audible cry,
Something that even I can hear;
Words soon form, asking “Why” what is its crime,
Why am I doing this to it…
Hahaha…
There is no crime noted,
Nothing for to atone,
Just felt this particular way today,
And this smile, that particular feeling that comes over me
When am feeling extra...
#dark
#gothic
#ForbiddenLove
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Sangraal Asunder
It wasn't Eve who first ate the naughty fruit
or over-stoked it with a repeating dart
love god launched from Cupid's competition shoot
aimed at every heart.
Nay! It was man who first snorkeled muffs apart
and strapped them to his face, like a mask, for gas,
to sample it like a patisserie tart
served among an ass.
The aroma yield was as no other
and brought unto the man an enchanted bliss
which compelled him to forthwith fetch another,
kiss by non-stop kiss!
The practice was misattributed as...
or over-stoked it with a repeating dart
love god launched from Cupid's competition shoot
aimed at every heart.
Nay! It was man who first snorkeled muffs apart
and strapped them to his face, like a mask, for gas,
to sample it like a patisserie tart
served among an ass.
The aroma yield was as no other
and brought unto the man an enchanted bliss
which compelled him to forthwith fetch another,
kiss by non-stop kiss!
The practice was misattributed as...
#ForbiddenLove
#temptation
110 reads
4 Comments
Liquid Arms
Drunk on remembering your body
I step into the tub and the fragrant water
Warm steam, music and candlelight
I am dreaming of you,
as I slip into liquid arms
The tantalizing scent of coconut sharpens my muse
I am warm ... flushed skin
and you are here with me
I remember your thighs around mine
Our bodies molding together to become one,
But my heart is in a solo flight
As I miss you tonight...
My one and only love
I step into the tub and the fragrant water
Warm steam, music and candlelight
I am dreaming of you,
as I slip into liquid arms
The tantalizing scent of coconut sharpens my muse
I am warm ... flushed skin
and you are here with me
I remember your thighs around mine
Our bodies molding together to become one,
But my heart is in a solo flight
As I miss you tonight...
My one and only love
#love
#loneliness
#ForbiddenLove
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2 Comments
Breaking Dawn
Caress of a weathered cheek
... Inhale
Piercing fresh air imbued upon his skin
Gilded radiance ignited in souls coalescing
Transcending a dawning sun
Breaking my horizon
He fuels fascination, admiration, wonder
... deep devotion
And ignites a pyre of feminine caprice
I crave the breathless music of my whispered name
when our zenith showers his need
... Inhale
Piercing fresh air imbued upon his skin
Gilded radiance ignited in souls coalescing
Transcending a dawning sun
Breaking my horizon
He fuels fascination, admiration, wonder
... deep devotion
And ignites a pyre of feminine caprice
I crave the breathless music of my whispered name
when our zenith showers his need
#love
#admiration
#ForbiddenLove
99 reads
4 Comments
Mira in the Crimson Union
#lust
#oppression
#aliens
#ForbiddenLove
#scifi
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Seduction
My favourite pass time is
With seduction
His long black hair
I want to dive in
Like it's a black ocean
And his eyes are so
Comforting , I fall in love.
As the seasons change
I wonder if he sees me
Like his sister, lover, wife,
Girlfriend
Or am I just a seductive
Wave of eternity
Waiting to be blessed
By him and his magic
I love the
His magic is so pure
And cures agony
And Rape
And that's where
We left off
Now I have to start
Again I look into his eyes ...
With seduction
His long black hair
I want to dive in
Like it's a black ocean
And his eyes are so
Comforting , I fall in love.
As the seasons change
I wonder if he sees me
Like his sister, lover, wife,
Girlfriend
Or am I just a seductive
Wave of eternity
Waiting to be blessed
By him and his magic
I love the
His magic is so pure
And cures agony
And Rape
And that's where
We left off
Now I have to start
Again I look into his eyes ...
#boyfriend
#admiration
#ForbiddenLove
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Affection's Symphony
Under the moon's caress, affection blooms,
Hidden in the dark, we share our sacred rooms.
Baring our cores, we spark a fervent blaze,
Embracing our truth, we free our essences, we amaze.
Within the dream's realm, we soar and glide,
Unveiling the unknown, where mysteries reside.
Cherishing our spell, a fragile and fine art,
Sealing our lips, a song, our pulses in sync.
Delight weaves our destiny, boundless and bright,
Vibrant colors rejoice, melodies exquisite.
Risking all for bliss, our pride and passion intertwine,
A tale of...
Hidden in the dark, we share our sacred rooms.
Baring our cores, we spark a fervent blaze,
Embracing our truth, we free our essences, we amaze.
Within the dream's realm, we soar and glide,
Unveiling the unknown, where mysteries reside.
Cherishing our spell, a fragile and fine art,
Sealing our lips, a song, our pulses in sync.
Delight weaves our destiny, boundless and bright,
Vibrant colors rejoice, melodies exquisite.
Risking all for bliss, our pride and passion intertwine,
A tale of...
#love
#lover
#gratitude
#ForbiddenLove
#passion
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4 Comments
The Catamite
a private-eye story
Just give me another, okay? You know I’m good for it. And I’ve not driven since three months ago when that cop hauled me in for chasing a punk down a culvert in the Bay.
So anyway, I got the job - a while before the last war - sitting in my car outside Georgie’s place. Georgie’s was a speakeasy just off Main, in a house where the bigwigs went, so as long as you kept your nose clean Eliot Ness and his boys let you be.
I was counting through bills to give to the doorman when a fruity-looking guy walks up in a lime green...
Just give me another, okay? You know I’m good for it. And I’ve not driven since three months ago when that cop hauled me in for chasing a punk down a culvert in the Bay.
So anyway, I got the job - a while before the last war - sitting in my car outside Georgie’s place. Georgie’s was a speakeasy just off Main, in a house where the bigwigs went, so as long as you kept your nose clean Eliot Ness and his boys let you be.
I was counting through bills to give to the doorman when a fruity-looking guy walks up in a lime green...
#violence
#ShortStory
#mystery #ForbiddenLove
#mystery #ForbiddenLove
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Cali Girl: A Cyberpunk Crime Story
#technology
#ForbiddenLove
#dystopian
#scifi
#ThrillSeeking
66 reads
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Love and Legion
#dark
#monsters
#ForbiddenLove
#temptation
#horror
72 reads
2 Comments
This Could Jeopardize Your Future
Scott, I'm
afraid of
what would
happen if your mom
and dad see you in
the buff and getting
it on
with your math
teacher.
afraid of
what would
happen if your mom
and dad see you in
the buff and getting
it on
with your math
teacher.
#school
#fiction
#dialogue
#sensual
#ForbiddenLove
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