Poems About Forbidden Love Seeking Honest Critique
#ForbiddenLove
Related Theme
#UnrequitedLove
Poems about forbidden love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 4:48pm
19th Dec 2024 4:48pm
Soulmates?
She’s beautiful to me
And it’s easy for me to let her know it
I can’t keep my hands to myself
When she’s around
I’m captive to her brown eyes
Seductive is her stare
It’s so easy to let my guard down around her
It scares me
I love our deep conversations
I hate them at the same time
I don’t feel safe
Putting my emotions in the hands
Of a woman
Because the one time I did
She broke me
And I vowed to myself
I’d never let that happen again
I...
And it’s easy for me to let her know it
I can’t keep my hands to myself
When she’s around
I’m captive to her brown eyes
Seductive is her stare
It’s so easy to let my guard down around her
It scares me
I love our deep conversations
I hate them at the same time
I don’t feel safe
Putting my emotions in the hands
Of a woman
Because the one time I did
She broke me
And I vowed to myself
I’d never let that happen again
I...
#FallingInLove
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#forgiveness
#relationships
106 reads
4 Comments
Intepta
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 7:12pm
11th Dec 2024 7:12pm
what do you do when everything is grey
For today I've cried enough
And for tomorrow there's some cheese in the fridge
The tarot card I've drawn
Tells me to accept my situation and stop resisting
Only then I would see the solution
It was the hanged
The doctor I've fallen in love with is playing banjo
There's twelve other people around him playing the fiddle, bass, guitar and some more banjo
I'm holding onto my beer and two or three months ago he introduced himself with "Shaun, like the sheep"
and that's exactly how their music sounds like
I wish I felt the way...
And for tomorrow there's some cheese in the fridge
The tarot card I've drawn
Tells me to accept my situation and stop resisting
Only then I would see the solution
It was the hanged
The doctor I've fallen in love with is playing banjo
There's twelve other people around him playing the fiddle, bass, guitar and some more banjo
I'm holding onto my beer and two or three months ago he introduced himself with "Shaun, like the sheep"
and that's exactly how their music sounds like
I wish I felt the way...
#breakup
#conflict
#ForbiddenLove
75 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 11:54pm
1st Dec 2024 11:54pm
Why we do what we do
There comes a time in each of our lives, that we have to learn to walk away from the very darkness of deepness, with it's negativity that draws us into a different kind of space that's out of this world. 🌎 For sure my question. ❓ TO you is more beneficial, to the well being of your insanity that has taken, over your life even your thoughts and dreams. For my question to you. ❓Why do we do that what we do 😞 when it comes to our relationships, as we choose to stay in a bad situation. For is it out of the love that you have not yet truly received, for is it that you...
#dating
#ForbiddenLove
#LifeCycle
#LookingForLove
#misunderstood
76 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 00:14am
16th Nov 2024 00:14am
John and Jane Doe
We don't know each other
how our lives intertwine
a mystery to remain unsolved
and forever lost to time
He's John, and I'm Jane
Very ordinary common names
Met on an elevator ride
Standing close side by side
History has yet to be written
The present is what we're given
There could be a ring
on our fingers, and yet, tonight
this is not the question that lingers
Will he stay away
This is just for a night
A release to take the edge off
A release we both need tonight
Not...
how our lives intertwine
a mystery to remain unsolved
and forever lost to time
He's John, and I'm Jane
Very ordinary common names
Met on an elevator ride
Standing close side by side
History has yet to be written
The present is what we're given
There could be a ring
on our fingers, and yet, tonight
this is not the question that lingers
Will he stay away
This is just for a night
A release to take the edge off
A release we both need tonight
Not...
#ForbiddenLove
#lover
447 reads
32 Comments
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 2:37pm
9th Nov 2024 2:37pm
What Could’ve Been
Time has passed
We’ve both changed
From what, where, why and when
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We’re two different people
From those kids we knew
Even though we resemble them
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
It was a missed opportunity of yesteryear
When we labeled each other as,
Just a friend
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We both have different lives
Other lovers...
We’ve both changed
From what, where, why and when
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We’re two different people
From those kids we knew
Even though we resemble them
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
It was a missed opportunity of yesteryear
When we labeled each other as,
Just a friend
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We both have different lives
Other lovers...
#crush
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#obsession
#respect
226 reads
8 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 3:18pm
7th Nov 2024 3:18pm
She Told Me That She's Not One Of Them Anymore
Steven
went over
to Ruth's
apartment and saw
her naked on the
floor with Heidi kiss
and lick
her friend all
over.
went over
to Ruth's
apartment and saw
her naked on the
floor with Heidi kiss
and lick
her friend all
over.
#corruption
#fiction
#ForbiddenLove
#lesbian
#sex
174 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 1:56am
31st Oct 2024 1:56am
Laura Stepped Into The Sauna
Laura stepped into the sauna.
She dropped her towel before Tom's eyes.
She sat on his lap.
She dropped her towel before Tom's eyes.
She sat on his lap.
#fiction
#ForbiddenLove
#friendship
#home
#sex
165 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 7:17am
26th Oct 2024 7:17am
MY BIG MANDINGO
#erotic
#ForbiddenLove
#passion
#sensual
#sex
194 reads
1 Comment
Gracefull
Grace
Grace
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 8:06pm
25th Oct 2024 8:06pm
Destruction
#dreams
#ForbiddenLove
#heartbroken
#lover
#passion
100 reads
5 Comments
MusicallyMrM
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 5:13am
25th Oct 2024 5:13am
Lost 2 Last (Long Train Running.....)
#ForbiddenLove
#lover
#lust #passion
#lust #passion
221 reads
2 Comments
MusicallyMrM
Poem Published
21st Oct 2024 12:53pm
21st Oct 2024 12:53pm
Pictures (at an Exhibition.....)
#ForbiddenLove
#lover
#lust #passion
#lust #passion
349 reads
2 Comments
ChloesPoeticInk
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 6:32pm
29th Sep 2024 6:32pm
It’s Hard to Love a Poet
It’s hard to love a poet, I know it’s true,
because I’ll love you deeply, but never just you.
I’ll love the pain, the ache in my chest,
the quiet moments when I can’t find rest.
You’ll think you hold me, but I’m never there,
lost in a world you can’t touch, I swear.
I’ll whisper sweet lines, make you feel seen,
but between the verses, I’ll slip in between.
I bleed my love on pages, not in your arms,
and you’ll feel like you’re losing to invisible harms.
You’ll watch me drift, lost in my mind,
chasing ghosts...
because I’ll love you deeply, but never just you.
I’ll love the pain, the ache in my chest,
the quiet moments when I can’t find rest.
You’ll think you hold me, but I’m never there,
lost in a world you can’t touch, I swear.
I’ll whisper sweet lines, make you feel seen,
but between the verses, I’ll slip in between.
I bleed my love on pages, not in your arms,
and you’ll feel like you’re losing to invisible harms.
You’ll watch me drift, lost in my mind,
chasing ghosts...
#ForbiddenLove
#ILoveYou
#LookingForLove
#relationships
#romantic
228 reads
2 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Forbidden Love Seeking Honest Critique
