Poems About Deep Underground Poetry Seeking Honest Critique
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
14th Aug 2024 2:45am
14th Aug 2024 2:45am
How would one know if they are being seduced?
How does one know if they are being seduced?
In a society where bold assumptions are passed as compliments
If one should graze a hand subtly, not in dominance but to show interest. Is that seduction?
When a glance of innocence lingers longer than necessary, is that seduction?
What would seduction be today?
There are no longer handwritten notes shared between the sender and the receiver, to covet and be hidden in intimate things.
Flowers can be sent but can be misconstrued to mean a number of things.
How would I know...
In a society where bold assumptions are passed as compliments
If one should graze a hand subtly, not in dominance but to show interest. Is that seduction?
When a glance of innocence lingers longer than necessary, is that seduction?
What would seduction be today?
There are no longer handwritten notes shared between the sender and the receiver, to covet and be hidden in intimate things.
Flowers can be sent but can be misconstrued to mean a number of things.
How would I know...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
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24 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
11th Aug 2024 1:49am
11th Aug 2024 1:49am
Incense Dreams
The sweet scent of incense in the air
Ignites a memory deep within my mind
Of longing stares
and held breaths
of wish me nots
and of past regrets
Of should have moments
...
Ignites a memory deep within my mind
Of longing stares
and held breaths
of wish me nots
and of past regrets
Of should have moments
...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
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25 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
7th Aug 2024 11:57pm
7th Aug 2024 11:57pm
Debby
I'm delicate, sometimes ferocious.
Think you've seen my tropical storm?
Babe, you ain't seen nothin' yet.
Just wait until I blow!
Watch as I descend,
Into a full blown hurricane.
You won't know what hit you!
You won't wanna be around me then -
BABY!
Feel the surge, this violent urge,
As I fill you with my flood.
Feel the torrent, my raging torment...
'Til you can't take it anymore!
Think you've seen my tropical storm?
Babe, you ain't seen nothin' yet.
Just wait until I blow!
Watch as I descend,
Into a full blown hurricane.
You won't know what hit you!
You won't wanna be around me then -
BABY!
Feel the surge, this violent urge,
As I fill you with my flood.
Feel the torrent, my raging torment...
'Til you can't take it anymore!
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#funny
143 reads
21 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
5th Aug 2024 00:47am
5th Aug 2024 00:47am
Jack and Lilly in Legend
The sun smiles
the clouds weep
as I run in through the forest
it is you I seek
They do not know
lips are sealed
Until it meets yours
and the magic we weld
I call out your name
As I run in the meadow
little wishes float in the sun
I hope one is bestowed
You appear my young lover
my heart can now beat
You hold me in your arms
and our lips meet.
""Have you been sweet or were you tart?"
I giggle in his arms
He knew the answer
from the start. ...
the clouds weep
as I run in through the forest
it is you I seek
They do not know
lips are sealed
Until it meets yours
and the magic we weld
I call out your name
As I run in the meadow
little wishes float in the sun
I hope one is bestowed
You appear my young lover
my heart can now beat
You hold me in your arms
and our lips meet.
""Have you been sweet or were you tart?"
I giggle in his arms
He knew the answer
from the start. ...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#FallingInLove
55 reads
16 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
4th Aug 2024 4:08pm
4th Aug 2024 4:08pm
It's No Sonnet!
I remember long ago
When the first snow fell
When my cheeks blushed from a glance
As time went by
That was the moment
Where my hopes were big
My eyes glazed over
And his love was a fairytale -
Meant for another!
I wanted to believe in fairytales
I was no Princess
But he...
Definitely a frog!
When the first snow fell
When my cheeks blushed from a glance
As time went by
That was the moment
Where my hopes were big
My eyes glazed over
And his love was a fairytale -
Meant for another!
I wanted to believe in fairytales
I was no Princess
But he...
Definitely a frog!
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#funny
95 reads
21 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
4th Aug 2024 1:57am
4th Aug 2024 1:57am
SOS Mercedes Benz pt 2
Carla
“The car sent out the SOS emergency call because it thinks the air bags have been deployed.
Looking under the hood I can see whoever drove this before you were messing with wires they shouldn’t have. In short, you need to call someone to come and pick you up, because the car will be coming with me.”
He looks as if he wants to yell or punch something or both.
“Is there another car at the shop? I have a long way to go and I can drop it off at the other dealer when I get there.”
I looked at him and considered saying no because I was in a bad mood but that was...
“The car sent out the SOS emergency call because it thinks the air bags have been deployed.
Looking under the hood I can see whoever drove this before you were messing with wires they shouldn’t have. In short, you need to call someone to come and pick you up, because the car will be coming with me.”
He looks as if he wants to yell or punch something or both.
“Is there another car at the shop? I have a long way to go and I can drop it off at the other dealer when I get there.”
I looked at him and considered saying no because I was in a bad mood but that was...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#lust
#sex
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2 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
3rd Aug 2024 10:38am
3rd Aug 2024 10:38am
Long for true sleep
Why can't I sleep a little bit longer?
Why do my conscious and subconscious mind
want to wake up
When I don't have to
Dreams do not come as easily to me as they used to
The pitch of night and the stillness
greets me with every toss and turn
A slight doze and you are there
Lips a centimeter apart
Your scent surrounds me
You lightly graze your nose against mine
I want to move but I am frozen in time
I should feel fear
What I feel is sadness
I know you are not...
Why do my conscious and subconscious mind
want to wake up
When I don't have to
Dreams do not come as easily to me as they used to
The pitch of night and the stillness
greets me with every toss and turn
A slight doze and you are there
Lips a centimeter apart
Your scent surrounds me
You lightly graze your nose against mine
I want to move but I am frozen in time
I should feel fear
What I feel is sadness
I know you are not...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#FeelingLost
#UnrequitedLove
86 reads
26 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
2nd Aug 2024 11:17pm
2nd Aug 2024 11:17pm
SOS Mercerdes-Benz pt 1
Carla
I cannot believe I'm back here in my old room. I shouldn't be here; I should be in my own office in the city away from my family.
She looked around the room and realized they had changed nothing. For years as she grew up they kept telling her that her room is going to be the guest room or her mother was in woman cave.
I want some of the past dad just left everything. The house is too much of mom. So he moved into the guesthouse in the back.
I had convinced him to rent out the house while he was back there to make some extra money....
I cannot believe I'm back here in my old room. I shouldn't be here; I should be in my own office in the city away from my family.
She looked around the room and realized they had changed nothing. For years as she grew up they kept telling her that her room is going to be the guest room or her mother was in woman cave.
I want some of the past dad just left everything. The house is too much of mom. So he moved into the guesthouse in the back.
I had convinced him to rent out the house while he was back there to make some extra money....
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
40 reads
5 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
31st Jul 2024 3:25pm
31st Jul 2024 3:25pm
He Comes To Me In The Wind (with Darrow)
The wind whispers to me
announcing my destiny
As if kissed by a fallen feather
I feel you drawing nearer
And nearer, the wind blows me to you
A presence felt, not seen
I am chosen,
As a keeper of light,
Your ardent gaze I see,
looking up at me in glee,
In joyous delight
You have found me
I have waited so long, and I have longed
For this moment
For you
announcing my destiny
As if kissed by a fallen feather
I feel you drawing nearer
And nearer, the wind blows me to you
A presence felt, not seen
I am chosen,
As a keeper of light,
Your ardent gaze I see,
looking up at me in glee,
In joyous delight
You have found me
I have waited so long, and I have longed
For this moment
For you
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#vulnerability
51 reads
25 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
28th Jul 2024 00:15am
28th Jul 2024 00:15am
Me
I am on my hands and knees
Crawling through the soft earth
Feeling life beneath me
I am on my hands and knees
Crawling on the concrete
Manmade on purpose to control me
I am on my hands and knees
Crawling through the shards of glass
Being torn through without a care for me
I am on my hands and knees
Crawling, crawling through the sand
Too soft to stand, why don't you save me?
No more crawling, this was it.
I sunk down in the sand, the pit
Suffocating on my last respite ...
Crawling through the soft earth
Feeling life beneath me
I am on my hands and knees
Crawling on the concrete
Manmade on purpose to control me
I am on my hands and knees
Crawling through the shards of glass
Being torn through without a care for me
I am on my hands and knees
Crawling, crawling through the sand
Too soft to stand, why don't you save me?
No more crawling, this was it.
I sunk down in the sand, the pit
Suffocating on my last respite ...
#dark
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#depression
88 reads
23 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
27th Jul 2024 3:40am
27th Jul 2024 3:40am
Emergency Room
Am I moving
My body's moving
I'm just assuming
I'm moving
Intense reality
Crawling all through me
Slithering like leeches
Breaking the skin
Underneath and within
Am I moving
all-consuming
This...
My body's moving
I'm just assuming
I'm moving
Intense reality
Crawling all through me
Slithering like leeches
Breaking the skin
Underneath and within
Am I moving
all-consuming
This...
#dark
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#FreeVerse #sadness
#FreeVerse #sadness
63 reads
16 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
27th Jul 2024 1:19am
27th Jul 2024 1:19am
Dear
Dear Sorrow
You have guided me through a torrential storm
At times it seemed like you wanted to let go
But I beg for you to stay just a while longer
Until I meet the black of exhausted sleep
Dear Calm
You are rarely around these days
I have tried to seek you out
I have left you messages
I even thought of sending you smoke signals
To get your attention
But why bother?
You will come when you're ready
And not a second sooner!
Dear Restraint
Why do you hold me back
Allowing them to say such...
You have guided me through a torrential storm
At times it seemed like you wanted to let go
But I beg for you to stay just a while longer
Until I meet the black of exhausted sleep
Dear Calm
You are rarely around these days
I have tried to seek you out
I have left you messages
I even thought of sending you smoke signals
To get your attention
But why bother?
You will come when you're ready
And not a second sooner!
Dear Restraint
Why do you hold me back
Allowing them to say such...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#relationships
#romantic
55 reads
12 Comments
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