Christmas by Top Critiquers Poems
#Christmas
Christmas
Dona
nobis
pacem
Latin for
"grant us
peace"
is anyone
listening?
Dona
nobis
pacem
Dona
nobis
pacem
Dona
nobis
pacem
three little words
from the mouth
of God
into our waiting
hands
let us wait no
longer
Dona
nobis
pacem
joyeux Noel
to all
nobis
pacem
Latin for
"grant us
peace"
is anyone
listening?
Dona
nobis
pacem
Dona
nobis
pacem
Dona
nobis
pacem
three little words
from the mouth
of God
into our waiting
hands
let us wait no
longer
Dona
nobis
pacem
joyeux Noel
to all
#Christmas
#morality
#responsibility
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Vibrating Christmas...
He asked "What do you want for Christmas?"
In the routine of everyday affairs
She will not be touched by vanity,
and she said "I have everything I need, you"...
Accepting the challenge, he bought some sex toys.
He could tell all the right ones.
In his skillful, strong hands.
He gave her passion and bliss, vibrating her soul.
Revealed to her the secret of moisture in the petals...
Shamelessly with him for all she is ready,
Streams of passion pouring into the night,
And irrigating, pouring out again,
This was the best...
In the routine of everyday affairs
She will not be touched by vanity,
and she said "I have everything I need, you"...
Accepting the challenge, he bought some sex toys.
He could tell all the right ones.
In his skillful, strong hands.
He gave her passion and bliss, vibrating her soul.
Revealed to her the secret of moisture in the petals...
Shamelessly with him for all she is ready,
Streams of passion pouring into the night,
And irrigating, pouring out again,
This was the best...
#lust
#Christmas
#sensual
#sexy
#temptation
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The One Without Chill
A peaceful train ride has always calmed my mind
Transporting me from a world infested with chaos and crime,
“A dark silent visitor I am to those on the naughty list
Fibromyalgia inflicted into service, because of a personal wish,
“Every day after the false birthday of Christ until the new year
My mission is to travel the world and make the most corrupted disappear,
“The type of corruption, large or small does not mean shit
Because those targeted will feel death’s kiss,
“Flesh unknowingly marked with the holiday...
Transporting me from a world infested with chaos and crime,
“A dark silent visitor I am to those on the naughty list
Fibromyalgia inflicted into service, because of a personal wish,
“Every day after the false birthday of Christ until the new year
My mission is to travel the world and make the most corrupted disappear,
“The type of corruption, large or small does not mean shit
Because those targeted will feel death’s kiss,
“Flesh unknowingly marked with the holiday...
#Christmas
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In the Spirit...
In the Spirit...
#kindness
#Christmas
#humankind
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Christmas wish
#lust
#BDSM
#Christmas #sexy
#Christmas #sexy
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the ants are back_18/30
after a winter
of snooze
they busily send out
sorties to scout out
the land
of my kitchen
They congregate
in the pan
stacked upon another
the food hidden
from the one
revealed to the other
thanks to the ants
and me
I do not want
to kill these little bastards
so I sweep them off
as best I can
letting them fall
through the air
like bungee-jumpers
without the bungees
I feel a slight
twinge of guilt:
can we not co-exist?
Do...
of snooze
they busily send out
sorties to scout out
the land
of my kitchen
They congregate
in the pan
stacked upon another
the food hidden
from the one
revealed to the other
thanks to the ants
and me
I do not want
to kill these little bastards
so I sweep them off
as best I can
letting them fall
through the air
like bungee-jumpers
without the bungees
I feel a slight
twinge of guilt:
can we not co-exist?
Do...
#Christmas
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3 Comments
Xmas
STAR
top
tree
three baubles
bauble tree bauble
bauble garland garland bauble
tree tree tree bauble garland tree tree tree
lights bauble tree garland tree bauble lights
stem
stem
POT POT POT POT
POT POT POT
POT POT
maybe gifts maybe love maybe peace maybe
top
tree
three baubles
bauble tree bauble
bauble garland garland bauble
tree tree tree bauble garland tree tree tree
lights bauble tree garland tree bauble lights
stem
stem
POT POT POT POT
POT POT POT
POT POT
maybe gifts maybe love maybe peace maybe
#hope
#identity
#Christmas
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Do You Still Believe ? (NoPoo 44)
santa clause has been
merry christmas everyone
hope your wish came true
merry christmas everyone
hope your wish came true
#happiness
#kindness
#hope
#senryu
#Christmas
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Two hearts in the snow - cooperation with MichaelA
This song was part of a ‘same lyrics challenge’, when everyone involved made a song, based on MichaelA’s lovely lyrics.
As the first advent started today, it seemed like a good idea to dig this one up.
Instead of a syrupy Christmas song, I made a festival one.
Please copy paste this link in your browser, as DUP still hasn’t answered my prayers for clickable links:
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/2018-259-5-same-lyrics-challenge
And here‘s the most important thing of this challenge, @MichaelA ’s beautiful lyrics:
Two...
As the first advent started today, it seemed like a good idea to dig this one up.
Instead of a syrupy Christmas song, I made a festival one.
Please copy paste this link in your browser, as DUP still hasn’t answered my prayers for clickable links:
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/2018-259-5-same-lyrics-challenge
And here‘s the most important thing of this challenge, @MichaelA ’s beautiful lyrics:
Two...
#love
#Christmas
#lover
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A Christmas Quarrel.
Twas Christmas day in the workhouse
when Ebenezer's pappy died,
leaving Scrooge poor as a church mouse,
that Christmas day in the workhouse.
Haunted it gave him cause to grouse
scrimped, slaved and saved he never cried,
On Christmas day in the workhouse
when Ebenezer's pappy, died.
~
He got chained to work but got rich
and worked his workers nigh to death,
with tiny mind he penny pinched
crippled his workers as he got rich.
He had an itch an' he scratched it
worked...
when Ebenezer's pappy died,
leaving Scrooge poor as a church mouse,
that Christmas day in the workhouse.
Haunted it gave him cause to grouse
scrimped, slaved and saved he never cried,
On Christmas day in the workhouse
when Ebenezer's pappy, died.
~
He got chained to work but got rich
and worked his workers nigh to death,
with tiny mind he penny pinched
crippled his workers as he got rich.
He had an itch an' he scratched it
worked...
#Christmas
#parody
#triolet
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he looks for something to give her amidst the crowd
christmas isn’t a great time
to be in town hobbling around
with the aid of a stick at it, though, she’s worth it
to be in town hobbling around
with the aid of a stick at it, though, she’s worth it
#city
#Christmas
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Christmas Past
Those were heady, evocative times;
ensconced in a large, predominantly-female, matriarchal family,
on occasion, I'd spend Christmas in one house with all of them.
There were plenteous preparations to partake in;
endless chatter, raucous laughter, joyous games.
I loved it all, though usually from my favourite position:
having taken part, I'd invariably find myself curled up in a corner somewhere
with the latest Records book, fun facts or mind puzzles.
While others joked and laughed and played,
I'd frantically try to drink in the atmosphere and...
ensconced in a large, predominantly-female, matriarchal family,
on occasion, I'd spend Christmas in one house with all of them.
There were plenteous preparations to partake in;
endless chatter, raucous laughter, joyous games.
I loved it all, though usually from my favourite position:
having taken part, I'd invariably find myself curled up in a corner somewhere
with the latest Records book, fun facts or mind puzzles.
While others joked and laughed and played,
I'd frantically try to drink in the atmosphere and...
#family
#Christmas
#memories
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DU Poetry : Christmas by Top Critiquers Poems