Christmas by Top Critiquers Poems
#Christmas
Ambushed
It was two days before Christmas and all of the colored lights hanging about dressed up the avenue. He was enjoying his late night walk very much. There were so few nights like this one because his job as an emergency room doctor kept him busier than hell. So tonight he made a vow that he would treasure every moment of his walk.
As he walked along Market Street his mind began to wander. He was thinking about the conversation he had had with his wife that very morning. She accused him of being married to his job and that she and their daughter Kristen rarely got to see him...
As he walked along Market Street his mind began to wander. He was thinking about the conversation he had had with his wife that very morning. She accused him of being married to his job and that she and their daughter Kristen rarely got to see him...
#murder
#Christmas
#mystery
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Feeding the Birds on Christmas Day
Behold the feast on Christmas day.
An eclectic mix of feathered friends flock from their mysteriously unknown far aways.
Or those close by, drop in with their beaty hopeful watchful eyes.
An enigmatic warble as winter's hungry pang amplifies.
A fully stocked feeder and seed generously scattered in the patch of dank mulch beneath the tree.
The dark eyed junco arrives in threes, to merrily peck the decadent seed.
Coined as snowbirds. Tweets of contentment and excitement, thankful for the human that dispersed the Christmas festivities.
I peacefully smiled a...
An eclectic mix of feathered friends flock from their mysteriously unknown far aways.
Or those close by, drop in with their beaty hopeful watchful eyes.
An enigmatic warble as winter's hungry pang amplifies.
A fully stocked feeder and seed generously scattered in the patch of dank mulch beneath the tree.
The dark eyed junco arrives in threes, to merrily peck the decadent seed.
Coined as snowbirds. Tweets of contentment and excitement, thankful for the human that dispersed the Christmas festivities.
I peacefully smiled a...
#birds
#nature
#Christmas
106 reads
9 Comments
Merry Christmas 2022
crimson poinsettias adorn the room
my lips painted a matching shade
I'm all set save one thing you're not here
Merry Christmas lover over hope
I touch your soul and I know God
my immortal love
I seek you early in the morning and at night
sigh to feel your masculine presence
is a thrill to me
I need you in my hollow places
when Midnight is still
I desire your red light to lead the way
a smooth seduction, some slow play
caressing my passion I open up
deck the halls
as we jingle all the way
...
my lips painted a matching shade
I'm all set save one thing you're not here
Merry Christmas lover over hope
I touch your soul and I know God
my immortal love
I seek you early in the morning and at night
sigh to feel your masculine presence
is a thrill to me
I need you in my hollow places
when Midnight is still
I desire your red light to lead the way
a smooth seduction, some slow play
caressing my passion I open up
deck the halls
as we jingle all the way
...
#love
#Christmas
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24 Comments
Box Head ( be there or be square )
Happy
Holidays
from
your
Favorite
Box
Head
Holidays
from
your
Favorite
Box
Head
#technology
#Christmas
#holiday
#uplifting
#art
358 reads
27 Comments
LET ME BE YOUR TREE
#sex
#erotic
#Christmas #rhyming
#Christmas #rhyming
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2 Comments
Merry Christmas Everyone
It is Christmas
baubles on the trees
Merry Christmas songs
all over the shops
he sits at the curb
hands held out
he needs to go home
but he doesn't have fare
he wants to see his son
that his wife kept away
Merry Christmas
I gave him a dollar
the last piece in my purse
Merry Christmas
baubles on the trees
Merry Christmas songs
all over the shops
he sits at the curb
hands held out
he needs to go home
but he doesn't have fare
he wants to see his son
that his wife kept away
Merry Christmas
I gave him a dollar
the last piece in my purse
Merry Christmas
#Christmas
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16 Comments
In the Spirit...
In the Spirit...
#kindness
#Christmas
#humankind
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6 Comments
Jingling Loose Memories
Most people can't remember the last time
That they felt like a kid at Christmas time
But I can remember lying in bed with my heart racing
My nose filled with the most delicious scents in the world
I just wanted to sneak downstairs and gently unwrap a gift
Maybe play with it a little, only to rewrap it and tear into it later
Yes I was a naughty one, there was nothing like that morning eggnog
So sweet and creamy, I lapped at it as I played with my toy
Yes I remember being a kid at Christmas time
The moans and giggles as the stocking was...
That they felt like a kid at Christmas time
But I can remember lying in bed with my heart racing
My nose filled with the most delicious scents in the world
I just wanted to sneak downstairs and gently unwrap a gift
Maybe play with it a little, only to rewrap it and tear into it later
Yes I was a naughty one, there was nothing like that morning eggnog
So sweet and creamy, I lapped at it as I played with my toy
Yes I remember being a kid at Christmas time
The moans and giggles as the stocking was...
#erotic
#Christmas
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9 Comments
12 days of Christmas Violence
My true love gave
12 Christmas presents
for the 12 days of
Christmas she gave me
1 gun from hell
2 burning heads
3 heaven guns
4 katana swords
5 Golden bodies
6 screaming maidens
7 Wonders of the World
8 Freaks of the Night
9 Ninjas dancing
10 Court Jesters
11 Pipe Bombs
12 Rocket Launchers
So my true love has
Given me the World
12 Christmas presents
for the 12 days of
Christmas she gave me
1 gun from hell
2 burning heads
3 heaven guns
4 katana swords
5 Golden bodies
6 screaming maidens
7 Wonders of the World
8 Freaks of the Night
9 Ninjas dancing
10 Court Jesters
11 Pipe Bombs
12 Rocket Launchers
So my true love has
Given me the World
#murder
#violence
#Christmas
#music
#funny
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16 Comments
Holy
Visual Christmas
#Christmas
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16 Comments
Christmas Day, 2017
The presents are open, the tree is lit,
and we've emptied the giant red socks.
Yesterday's ham is reduced a bit,
but how can you tell if it came with hocks?
The shells are cracked and the filberts chewed
and the refrigerator is stoked.
Soon some more coffee will be brewed
and the woodstove embers lazily poked.
But best in show is that rare Christmas snow
Which fell this year in a civilized way,
and not in a vigorous subzero blow
that moves into town for a two month stay.
Second only to albinos out farming, ...
and we've emptied the giant red socks.
Yesterday's ham is reduced a bit,
but how can you tell if it came with hocks?
The shells are cracked and the filberts chewed
and the refrigerator is stoked.
Soon some more coffee will be brewed
and the woodstove embers lazily poked.
But best in show is that rare Christmas snow
Which fell this year in a civilized way,
and not in a vigorous subzero blow
that moves into town for a two month stay.
Second only to albinos out farming, ...
#Christmas
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0 Comments
Home For The Holidays
From My Family To Yours
Happy Holidays
Mini-Production Brought To You By
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Happy Holidays
Mini-Production Brought To You By
Another K Production™
#family
#Christmas
#peace #humankind
#peace #humankind
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DU Poetry : Christmas by Top Critiquers Poems