Call To Action Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#CallToAction
call to action seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 8:56pm
26th Nov 2024 8:56pm
OUT WITH THE TRASH
They say that we have to learn to walk away. FROM the very deepness of the negativity. 😞 That has no real reason to be able to judge, you in your own thoughts and insight and spiritual subconsciousness. Yet they do 🤨🤔 YET why they dislike you and they have no real reason. THAT THEY CAN REALLY JUSTIFY, THE TRUTH OF THE REASON BEHIND THE REAL MOTIVE. 🤔 Fact check ✔️ For sure some people's are just creatures of habits. 🤨 AS we have took the time to notice, the kinds of mental mind games. THAT has stimulate the truth covering it up behind...
#CallToAction
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 11:15am
20th Nov 2024 11:15am
Pro Death
Too many humans
Mankind is off track
The Black Plague was a dick
But it needs to come back
Our world's spinning faster
Like a playground carousel
With a trillion kids pushing
Until it flings us off to hell
China may be dystopia
But they got one thing right
One child per family
We could use their insight
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'll say it again
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'm not "Pro-Life"
So save your breath
And I'm not...
Mankind is off track
The Black Plague was a dick
But it needs to come back
Our world's spinning faster
Like a playground carousel
With a trillion kids pushing
Until it flings us off to hell
China may be dystopia
But they got one thing right
One child per family
We could use their insight
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'll say it again
No lives matter
We're all equally worthless
I'm not "Pro-Life"
So save your breath
And I'm not...
#CallToAction
#death
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#satirical
77 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 11:00am
20th Nov 2024 11:00am
Exterminate the boomers
Here they come, feasting on the young
No hair, no care
Shuffling like a zombie
They don't care about the future
As long as we keep bowing to them
Wrinkled hands write the script
No choice but follow
Treat it like an edict
Greed is the motto of the sick
Cloaked by the model of their politics
The broken structures they erect
Built inequality incarnate
Time will cast them aside
But when?
The damage is done
Progress is no friend to them
Simply accumulate
There's no room to...
No hair, no care
Shuffling like a zombie
They don't care about the future
As long as we keep bowing to them
Wrinkled hands write the script
No choice but follow
Treat it like an edict
Greed is the motto of the sick
Cloaked by the model of their politics
The broken structures they erect
Built inequality incarnate
Time will cast them aside
But when?
The damage is done
Progress is no friend to them
Simply accumulate
There's no room to...
#CallToAction
#parody
#philosophical
#satirical
#TruthOfLife
68 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 7:28pm
19th Nov 2024 7:28pm
Human Filth
There is nothing special
about human beings
we've raped the earth
the future is fleeting
We fight over bullshit
and make more new laws
living in denial
ignoring the cause
Beliefs are like opinions
We each have one and their all toxic
Obese specimens wasting air & water
mouth breathing morons
consuming and breeding
not wearing condoms
Carrying capacity
is far exceeded
a global extinction
that's what is needed
Can you handle this?
about human beings
we've raped the earth
the future is fleeting
We fight over bullshit
and make more new laws
living in denial
ignoring the cause
Beliefs are like opinions
We each have one and their all toxic
Obese specimens wasting air & water
mouth breathing morons
consuming and breeding
not wearing condoms
Carrying capacity
is far exceeded
a global extinction
that's what is needed
Can you handle this?
#anger
#CallToAction
#environment
#pollution
#TruthOfLife
76 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 5:41pm
15th Nov 2024 5:41pm
YOUR ENERGY LEVEL
There will come a time in each of our lives, for the mind to develop a sense of rebuilding, your thoughts on a positive level. Because with real substance with real intelligences, with your own thoughts to believe that you can
😉 with the strength of your own personal connection into the SUBCONSCIOUSNESS of your own mind thoughts. For sure have you ever wondered, 🤔 what is your true spiritual energy level, of your faith for you have to believe in thyself. For do you have the ability and perseverance, and true determination and real evidence of your strength.
Along...
😉 with the strength of your own personal connection into the SUBCONSCIOUSNESS of your own mind thoughts. For sure have you ever wondered, 🤔 what is your true spiritual energy level, of your faith for you have to believe in thyself. For do you have the ability and perseverance, and true determination and real evidence of your strength.
Along...
#CallToAction
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 8:41pm
11th Nov 2024 8:41pm
Take Him Down!
He is Satan, hear him roar
Hearing dark voices, too loud to ignore
The naive in pews, who worship air
Weak-minded drones, drowning in despair
Forced abstinence drives spineless blue-ball priests
Alter boy defilers, now it's time to feast
For my tips on how to waste these pricks
Dial me 1-900-666
Pedophile priests who pray on kids
Jesus hates you for what they say you did
The concept is quite simple
Command the flock to procreate
More babies, more Catholics
More money, controlling your fate
Let's...
Hearing dark voices, too loud to ignore
The naive in pews, who worship air
Weak-minded drones, drowning in despair
Forced abstinence drives spineless blue-ball priests
Alter boy defilers, now it's time to feast
For my tips on how to waste these pricks
Dial me 1-900-666
Pedophile priests who pray on kids
Jesus hates you for what they say you did
The concept is quite simple
Command the flock to procreate
More babies, more Catholics
More money, controlling your fate
Let's...
#abuse
#CallToAction
#corruption
#religion
#revenge
84 reads
6 Comments
JAZZMANOR
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 3:24pm
11th Nov 2024 3:24pm
It Is About Us All
For those who are dejected
at what election night brought
didn’t roll away way
I just want to share what I was taught
You may not have won
but if are still trying you haven’t failed
though I know the fear is
any opposition will be jailed
Yes there was a time when
Pete Seeger, Paul Robeson were blacklisted
harassed, scorned, ridiculed
opposition was tight fisted
But they served as models for other
how to oppose and not subsidize hate
still heroes in my eyes
no I must believe it isn’t to...
at what election night brought
didn’t roll away way
I just want to share what I was taught
You may not have won
but if are still trying you haven’t failed
though I know the fear is
any opposition will be jailed
Yes there was a time when
Pete Seeger, Paul Robeson were blacklisted
harassed, scorned, ridiculed
opposition was tight fisted
But they served as models for other
how to oppose and not subsidize hate
still heroes in my eyes
no I must believe it isn’t to...
#CallToAction
#hope
#universe #wisdom
#universe #wisdom
99 reads
7 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 9:47pm
10th Nov 2024 9:47pm
Lie in Wait
It slowly creeps in the shadows undetected
All the while everything on the surface seems fine
Even as the body fights it becomes subjected
To something sinister that at first seemed so benign
The fatal disease then spreads quickly without control
Destroying and consuming everything in its path
Even though warning signs may whisper it to the soul
The mind doesn’t want to realize it or do the math
The victim becomes brittle at the core, to the bone
Not realizing what it’s done until it’s too late
And all the medicine won’t help...
All the while everything on the surface seems fine
Even as the body fights it becomes subjected
To something sinister that at first seemed so benign
The fatal disease then spreads quickly without control
Destroying and consuming everything in its path
Even though warning signs may whisper it to the soul
The mind doesn’t want to realize it or do the math
The victim becomes brittle at the core, to the bone
Not realizing what it’s done until it’s too late
And all the medicine won’t help...
#CallToAction
#cancer
#hope #LifeStruggles
#hope #LifeStruggles
130 reads
6 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 7:52pm
7th Nov 2024 7:52pm
2024 November Poems >> before the jury of the Sage/this age
No. 02
before the jury of
the Sage/this age
“It is not the man who has too little, but the man
who craves more, that is poor.”—Seneca
i write/right life’s wrongs to make this world a better place to live.
i sing/swing sweet songs that metronome dull spirits from dismay.
i live/leave death far behind poor kinfolk destinied to grieve.
i hear/heir suave silence as a gift, to souls in disarray.
i see/seize the blindness of a white-cane man lost in the street.
i taste/test the bitterness of bitter salt that...
before the jury of
the Sage/this age
“It is not the man who has too little, but the man
who craves more, that is poor.”—Seneca
i write/right life’s wrongs to make this world a better place to live.
i sing/swing sweet songs that metronome dull spirits from dismay.
i live/leave death far behind poor kinfolk destinied to grieve.
i hear/heir suave silence as a gift, to souls in disarray.
i see/seize the blindness of a white-cane man lost in the street.
i taste/test the bitterness of bitter salt that...
#CallToAction
#inequality
#kindness
#morality
#UnrequitedLove
72 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 10:56am
7th Nov 2024 10:56am
The Pressure
Follow me into the room of hatred
Don't turn away don't close your eyes
Walk with me hand in hand to the end
Don't hide your face I see through your lies
The pressure
Pushing on me
Mistakes
Never give in never break
The hatred
Burning in me
The pain
Never give in, never break
Drown yourself in the name of a fake god
You think you're free you think you're right
Drown yourself in the name of nothing
You'll save yourself but through self sacrifice
Don't turn away don't close your eyes
Walk with me hand in hand to the end
Don't hide your face I see through your lies
The pressure
Pushing on me
Mistakes
Never give in never break
The hatred
Burning in me
The pain
Never give in, never break
Drown yourself in the name of a fake god
You think you're free you think you're right
Drown yourself in the name of nothing
You'll save yourself but through self sacrifice
#anger
#anxiety
#CallToAction
#frustration
#hate
132 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 10:53am
7th Nov 2024 10:53am
The fight begins, till death
We all dream of peace
Heard the tales of euphoria
We've all seen the land of hate
No tears in our eyes
No pain inside
No fear for us to hide
Two fists I'm ready to throw down
United, break down the walls
Shotgun blasts sound out the call now
The fight begins for us all
We've got to fight back
This burden in our hands
We've got to let them know
Rise up ready to attack
We are the final stand
We've got to let them know
We've got to let them know
This is the end
The fight begins, till death
Heard the tales of euphoria
We've all seen the land of hate
No tears in our eyes
No pain inside
No fear for us to hide
Two fists I'm ready to throw down
United, break down the walls
Shotgun blasts sound out the call now
The fight begins for us all
We've got to fight back
This burden in our hands
We've got to let them know
Rise up ready to attack
We are the final stand
We've got to let them know
We've got to let them know
This is the end
The fight begins, till death
#anger
#CallToAction
#corruption
#rebellion
#violence
110 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 9:09pm
6th Nov 2024 9:09pm
No Gods, No Masters
Into the mouth of war
Break through the walls of shadow
From the fires we will rise
Silence the ones who hide
We are the faithless! We are those who stay, nameless!
Into the gates of blackness
Now the pain is rising
Tortured, hallowed in hate!
We stand alone
Into the graves of eternity
This world fills with hate
Slowly we make our ways
The time has begun
Consumed by greed and anger
Now the time is near
Callused are the minds of the world
We hide ourselves
Consumed by fear and secrets
The...
Break through the walls of shadow
From the fires we will rise
Silence the ones who hide
We are the faithless! We are those who stay, nameless!
Into the gates of blackness
Now the pain is rising
Tortured, hallowed in hate!
We stand alone
Into the graves of eternity
This world fills with hate
Slowly we make our ways
The time has begun
Consumed by greed and anger
Now the time is near
Callused are the minds of the world
We hide ourselves
Consumed by fear and secrets
The...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#freedom
#identity
#rebellion
94 reads
2 Comments
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