Call To Action Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#CallToAction
call to action seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 2:32pm
2nd Feb 2025 2:32pm
~the red revolutionary turban poet
his revolutionary verses
implodes heartmindsoul
in red & radical realization
in an inner & more innards
of this a probing midnight
lightness amidst a tranquil
darkness, the cosmic abyss
truth dies a neverdeath, an
eternity reign & infinitely
sprawling realm
beyond your
such dust & dirt stinking
sticky stacks of #SoothuTheEvil
& moreso
much & much beyond
all your venomously culturing
cyanic mastermind gangrene
in ruthless graveyard of generations
from, but...
implodes heartmindsoul
in red & radical realization
in an inner & more innards
of this a probing midnight
lightness amidst a tranquil
darkness, the cosmic abyss
truth dies a neverdeath, an
eternity reign & infinitely
sprawling realm
beyond your
such dust & dirt stinking
sticky stacks of #SoothuTheEvil
& moreso
much & much beyond
all your venomously culturing
cyanic mastermind gangrene
in ruthless graveyard of generations
from, but...
#admiration
#anger
#CallToAction #love
#CallToAction #love
125 reads
5 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 1:46am
29th Jan 2025 1:46am
Watch and see
I'll end the war in Ukraine
within the first 24 hours
if elected president
Trump said
Day 21:
Russian troops push
toward Pokrovsk
as we speak
Trump remains silent
far too busy raging war
on our democracy
to maintain control:
commuting his militia
—J6 insurrectionists—
who'll beat police officers
and the national guard,
replacing qualified personnel
with predators and drunks
he deems loyalists,
cancelling health research
education...
within the first 24 hours
if elected president
Trump said
Day 21:
Russian troops push
toward Pokrovsk
as we speak
Trump remains silent
far too busy raging war
on our democracy
to maintain control:
commuting his militia
—J6 insurrectionists—
who'll beat police officers
and the national guard,
replacing qualified personnel
with predators and drunks
he deems loyalists,
cancelling health research
education...
#CallToAction
#faith
#politics #rebellion
#politics #rebellion
307 reads
29 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 8:45am
28th Jan 2025 8:45am
~cua cua
crabby
crustaceans parade
from highly salted
& pressurised mid-seas ..
inspired from the so
recent news …simmering
in bloodied human hunger..
towards
namesake summoned peace
treaties of the tricky capital..
wearing their trending
military-labelled terrorism ..
enroute the trading roguish
& pirating- the deadly silent Atlantic..
they had sumptuously drunk in their
quizzically coloured beverage.. that’s
ubiquitously smothering the seas
in nacreous rainbow
spills- those...
crustaceans parade
from highly salted
& pressurised mid-seas ..
inspired from the so
recent news …simmering
in bloodied human hunger..
towards
namesake summoned peace
treaties of the tricky capital..
wearing their trending
military-labelled terrorism ..
enroute the trading roguish
& pirating- the deadly silent Atlantic..
they had sumptuously drunk in their
quizzically coloured beverage.. that’s
ubiquitously smothering the seas
in nacreous rainbow
spills- those...
#animals
#CallToAction
#consumerism
#nature
#violence
106 reads
6 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 12:51pm
18th Jan 2025 12:51pm
Money and sex
Take them away from the psychopath class,
the class that takes excessively and calls trickling back to the workers the unfair part. The people who infiltrated our corporations, government, media entertainment outlets, nonprofits and school boards.
Give them no more money, as little as you absolutely can, and
give them no more sex, none at all.
Money gives them the means, but sex enables and empowers their behaviors.
I know the pickens are slim, but fuck more the conscientious free-thinkers. Fuck more their brains into responsible social action, because,...
the class that takes excessively and calls trickling back to the workers the unfair part. The people who infiltrated our corporations, government, media entertainment outlets, nonprofits and school boards.
Give them no more money, as little as you absolutely can, and
give them no more sex, none at all.
Money gives them the means, but sex enables and empowers their behaviors.
I know the pickens are slim, but fuck more the conscientious free-thinkers. Fuck more their brains into responsible social action, because,...
#CallToAction
#HumanRights
#inequality #LifeStruggles
#inequality #LifeStruggles
75 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 10:42am
13th Jan 2025 10:42am
Tired of your bullshit
I'm so sick and tired of hearing you
So much that I don't know what to do
I don't think you're handsome, pretty, or smart
I could find your personality cheap at the mini-mart
You think you're clever, funny, and kind
People like you make people like me lose our minds
I hate who you are, what you believe in, and stand what for
Being forced to be around you at any time is a chore
Everything you do, and everything you say
Makes me contemplate suicide every day
You do things so backwards, I don't even know where to start
I wish...
So much that I don't know what to do
I don't think you're handsome, pretty, or smart
I could find your personality cheap at the mini-mart
You think you're clever, funny, and kind
People like you make people like me lose our minds
I hate who you are, what you believe in, and stand what for
Being forced to be around you at any time is a chore
Everything you do, and everything you say
Makes me contemplate suicide every day
You do things so backwards, I don't even know where to start
I wish...
#anger
#CallToAction
#fiction
#frustration
#hate
120 reads
12 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 5:06pm
11th Jan 2025 5:06pm
Focus
Close your mind to truth.
Only think lies.
Wait for the world to come at you.
Demolish it with a surprise.
Don't tell God the truth.
He's a shitty guy.
Give him smoke and spoofs.
Bend over and hypnotize.
Cradle inside the web.
A monster full of eyes.
The spiders are in my bed.
Trying to shut my daughters eyes.
Only think lies.
Wait for the world to come at you.
Demolish it with a surprise.
Don't tell God the truth.
He's a shitty guy.
Give him smoke and spoofs.
Bend over and hypnotize.
Cradle inside the web.
A monster full of eyes.
The spiders are in my bed.
Trying to shut my daughters eyes.
#CallToAction
72 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 8:38pm
10th Jan 2025 8:38pm
March of the Crabs!
This message is for all you sex fiends here on DUP.
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Focus on Internet Porn and dirty mags
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
A prostitute is usually a red flag
Safe Sex Don't stop Crabs!
Itchy, hairy pubes, your partner starts to gag
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Tainted bed sheets, throw them in a garbage bag
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Disease ridden, need to report to the nearest lab
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
STD's for the rich and for the poor dressed in rags
Safe Sex Don't...
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Focus on Internet Porn and dirty mags
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
A prostitute is usually a red flag
Safe Sex Don't stop Crabs!
Itchy, hairy pubes, your partner starts to gag
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Tainted bed sheets, throw them in a garbage bag
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Disease ridden, need to report to the nearest lab
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
STD's for the rich and for the poor dressed in rags
Safe Sex Don't...
#illness
#MentalHealth
#satirical
#sex
#CallToAction
156 reads
13 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 1:20am
7th Jan 2025 1:20am
Thoughts and Dreams
Land of thoughts and dreams
Descend into lies and thievery
Star spangled on my soul
Watch a deceptive devil
Orange and loud
Drowns out the truth
Playing the part of Patriot
Hugs the flag my dad stood for
As he is corporal bone spurs
Says studio 54 was his Vietnam
Spits on McCain an American Hero
I don’t get it what’s in it for them
He translates patriotism into cash green
Build the wall keep the Rapist out
Grab em by the pussy
They let you if your evil
Shell of a tough...
Descend into lies and thievery
Star spangled on my soul
Watch a deceptive devil
Orange and loud
Drowns out the truth
Playing the part of Patriot
Hugs the flag my dad stood for
As he is corporal bone spurs
Says studio 54 was his Vietnam
Spits on McCain an American Hero
I don’t get it what’s in it for them
He translates patriotism into cash green
Build the wall keep the Rapist out
Grab em by the pussy
They let you if your evil
Shell of a tough...
#anger
#betrayal
#CallToAction
#deception
#lies
75 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 9:37pm
5th Jan 2025 9:37pm
I HATE ASS KISSERS!
Go ahead
Insert your tongue really deep into their asshole
Taste your bosses rectum
Maybe this will get you what you want from them
You have an image to maintain
An agenda to get ahead, to reach a goal
Do you think this will get you what you want?
If it don't, then your brown nose will look even shittier then it does now
I hope you fall flat on your face, you pathetic scumbag
Here's some advice,
Clean that shit off your nose, don't come near me ever again
and please go fuck yourself!
Insert your tongue really deep into their asshole
Taste your bosses rectum
Maybe this will get you what you want from them
You have an image to maintain
An agenda to get ahead, to reach a goal
Do you think this will get you what you want?
If it don't, then your brown nose will look even shittier then it does now
I hope you fall flat on your face, you pathetic scumbag
Here's some advice,
Clean that shit off your nose, don't come near me ever again
and please go fuck yourself!
#anger
#CallToAction
#hate
116 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 12:16pm
15th Dec 2024 12:16pm
No Chance To Live
Grown matured are the formerly abused
Forced
Mutilated souls
Damaged
They are sadists turned on by the young
They are sickeningly inexplicit about many forms of masochism and violence to enact upon
Beaten to submission and other forms of punishment
Beyond domination
Intrigued of the violent sides of man
This is the abstract conception
This generation takes a spanking to another level
The next generation will beg for mutilation as these maniacs get off on their torturous pain filled screams
Our kids are dead before they have a chance...
Forced
Mutilated souls
Damaged
They are sadists turned on by the young
They are sickeningly inexplicit about many forms of masochism and violence to enact upon
Beaten to submission and other forms of punishment
Beyond domination
Intrigued of the violent sides of man
This is the abstract conception
This generation takes a spanking to another level
The next generation will beg for mutilation as these maniacs get off on their torturous pain filled screams
Our kids are dead before they have a chance...
#abuse
#anger
#CallToAction
#children
#violence
83 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 7:32pm
11th Dec 2024 7:32pm
The Truth Will f**k You Dry
If you could disappear, I'd be a happy man
What does not kill you, only makes you much more vulnerable for the next time
Take a huge bite of my psychotic addiction
Come a little closer, I'll knife you in the kitchen
Consequences and truth led to your conviction
Trial made up of errors, another crucifixion
Eat it whole
Guzzle it down
Vomit it up
Fuck the ground
The enemy is within you
Kiss your ass, as you are your only friend
What does not kill you, only makes you much more vulnerable for the next time
Take a huge bite of my psychotic addiction
Come a little closer, I'll knife you in the kitchen
Consequences and truth led to your conviction
Trial made up of errors, another crucifixion
Eat it whole
Guzzle it down
Vomit it up
Fuck the ground
The enemy is within you
Kiss your ass, as you are your only friend
#angels
#CallToAction
#dark
#hate
#lies
165 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 10:37am
10th Dec 2024 10:37am
Maxed Out & Defeated
Advertising temptation
A credit possession driven nation
So determined, so obsessed
With having only the best
Swipe away what isn’t yours
To compare and compete
Take out another loan
Beg, borrow, steal
Fancy car, you’re in debt
House on show, not your asset
Immaterial, material
Death by debt
Blinded by greed
Termination damnation
They got everything to lose
It’s all taken by the bank
Drowning in booze
Society fueled by greed
Just know your children watch you
And they will follow your...
A credit possession driven nation
So determined, so obsessed
With having only the best
Swipe away what isn’t yours
To compare and compete
Take out another loan
Beg, borrow, steal
Fancy car, you’re in debt
House on show, not your asset
Immaterial, material
Death by debt
Blinded by greed
Termination damnation
They got everything to lose
It’s all taken by the bank
Drowning in booze
Society fueled by greed
Just know your children watch you
And they will follow your...
#CallToAction
#greed
#LifeStruggles #money
#LifeStruggles #money
85 reads
11 Comments
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