Call To Action Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#CallToAction
call to action seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 2:27pm
5th Mar 2025 2:27pm
Have a f**ked up righteous day!
#CallToAction
#LifeChangingMoment
#philosophical
#rhyming
#TruthOfLife
38 reads
13 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 11:46am
4th Mar 2025 11:46am
Wake The f**k Up!
This democracy is so full of hypocrisy
The digital age spawned a cesspool of degeneracy
Repeating the cycle of stupidity
Taking a shit on our civil liberties
Divide the blind from those who see
They infect this nation with ideas of freedom
A false reality is what they give us
In their promise to "save" us
Terrorist-tic tactics feed the machine
We are all just slaves to corrupted authority
The CIA and the DEA burned the constitution of the USA
While Politicians in DC are never locked away
The controlled...
The digital age spawned a cesspool of degeneracy
Repeating the cycle of stupidity
Taking a shit on our civil liberties
Divide the blind from those who see
They infect this nation with ideas of freedom
A false reality is what they give us
In their promise to "save" us
Terrorist-tic tactics feed the machine
We are all just slaves to corrupted authority
The CIA and the DEA burned the constitution of the USA
While Politicians in DC are never locked away
The controlled...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#money
#politics
#rebellion
94 reads
16 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 11:12am
4th Mar 2025 11:12am
Anti-Establishment
Just beyond the Verizon I foresee
Our veins will become circuitry
Mindless drones consuming the disease in denial
No original thought process in their empty minds
Just blind leading the blind
Not serving a purpose
Only purposely serving on their knees
Kill your gods
Kill your governments
Freedom exists only in the mind
The mind is a weapon you should wield
Should you choose to ignore the blueprint facade
You will succumb the the programing of a false god and government
They plot for total domination ...
Our veins will become circuitry
Mindless drones consuming the disease in denial
No original thought process in their empty minds
Just blind leading the blind
Not serving a purpose
Only purposely serving on their knees
Kill your gods
Kill your governments
Freedom exists only in the mind
The mind is a weapon you should wield
Should you choose to ignore the blueprint facade
You will succumb the the programing of a false god and government
They plot for total domination ...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#greed
#HumanRights
#politics
69 reads
14 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 12:32pm
3rd Mar 2025 12:32pm
Disguised Dictatorship
Reign of corruption
Democracy came to an end
Money for justice
Blinded by the government
Vultures overflying
Waiting death of society
Death by the government
Maniac ideology spreading blood!!
Dictatorship disguised
Growing up on their lies
Brainwashing decadent minds
Hidden the truth of our eyes
Hiding the murders
Guilty without guiltiness
Rotten state
Rapist of justice and liberty
Bloodstained
Wrong-way of democracy
Ruling through fear
Amorphous equality painted with blood!!
...
Democracy came to an end
Money for justice
Blinded by the government
Vultures overflying
Waiting death of society
Death by the government
Maniac ideology spreading blood!!
Dictatorship disguised
Growing up on their lies
Brainwashing decadent minds
Hidden the truth of our eyes
Hiding the murders
Guilty without guiltiness
Rotten state
Rapist of justice and liberty
Bloodstained
Wrong-way of democracy
Ruling through fear
Amorphous equality painted with blood!!
...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#greed
#money
#politics
75 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 4:06pm
2nd Mar 2025 4:06pm
Upper-Class Low-Life
There's nothing I would do for you
You're a real scum bag
All you do is nag
Kiss my ass you goddamn fool
Go fuck yourself and I'll fuck your wife too!
The pile of shit is decorated for you to consume
Degradation
Accept the invitation
Your a shit sucking butt fucking disaster, now go to your room
Lick the dick you inherited between your ass cheeks!
Your nose is deep up corporate's ass
Are you his puppy?
I hate yuppies
Nobody gets a free pass
You look pathetic enough to...
You're a real scum bag
All you do is nag
Kiss my ass you goddamn fool
Go fuck yourself and I'll fuck your wife too!
The pile of shit is decorated for you to consume
Degradation
Accept the invitation
Your a shit sucking butt fucking disaster, now go to your room
Lick the dick you inherited between your ass cheeks!
Your nose is deep up corporate's ass
Are you his puppy?
I hate yuppies
Nobody gets a free pass
You look pathetic enough to...
#anger
#CallToAction
#corruption
#greed
#lies
90 reads
16 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 11:03am
1st Mar 2025 11:03am
Corrosion of Conformity
I cannot escape, the frequencies penetrate
Decibels pound me into submission
Camera eye, forever the spy
Motions captured for the living impaired
Silicone dictators in plastic mansions
Fiber optic propaganda
Streaming fashion inflames the passion
To climax in the blink of an eye
Terabyte brainwaves, upload in progress
Eternally the master and server
2.0 human alien being
Forever existing in some random computer
Technocracy
Is it saving me?
Technology
Inside of me
Technocracy
Is it freeing...
Decibels pound me into submission
Camera eye, forever the spy
Motions captured for the living impaired
Silicone dictators in plastic mansions
Fiber optic propaganda
Streaming fashion inflames the passion
To climax in the blink of an eye
Terabyte brainwaves, upload in progress
Eternally the master and server
2.0 human alien being
Forever existing in some random computer
Technocracy
Is it saving me?
Technology
Inside of me
Technocracy
Is it freeing...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#manipulation
#politics
#technology
99 reads
13 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 11:39am
24th Feb 2025 11:39am
In Musk, Should We Trust??
Zombified Society
Corrupted by technology
With Wires connected to our brain
Control our life
Cybernetic drug for our brain
Burning our cells to the end
We live now as modern slaves without souls
Just obey
We'll keep you safe
We are the truth
Technocracy
Just believe
We have control
We're the Technocracy
Hypocritical way to live
In a senselessness and empty reality
Blinded by conformity
The web of lies
Collective worldwide ignorance
Smoke and mirrors everywhere
Connected &...
Corrupted by technology
With Wires connected to our brain
Control our life
Cybernetic drug for our brain
Burning our cells to the end
We live now as modern slaves without souls
Just obey
We'll keep you safe
We are the truth
Technocracy
Just believe
We have control
We're the Technocracy
Hypocritical way to live
In a senselessness and empty reality
Blinded by conformity
The web of lies
Collective worldwide ignorance
Smoke and mirrors everywhere
Connected &...
#CallToAction
#dystopian
#manipulation
#scifi
#technology
61 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 2:02pm
23rd Feb 2025 2:02pm
Spiritual Wolf
The elders say that we each have a entity hiding with in each of us, who is waiting for the chance to escape from the deepness, and depth of our mind and heart and spiritual soul of our subconsciousness of our thoughts. AS we are the ALPHA OF THE WOLF PACK meant to be set free as a leader of the wolves. For I soon learned why BIG MAMA needed to see me on that greatful and blessed day at the family reunion. She told me who I was told that was my own destiny. For the spirit of the WOLF offers meaning in the realm as a most striking animal showing the deepness of the power of the truth of the...
#CallToAction
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#symbolism
55 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 9:36pm
13th Feb 2025 9:36pm
My Vision of Love & Peace
A peaceful world is not what I see,
death, lies & murder, I just want to flee
when I see you though, all those thoughts disappear
you make my world complete; I love you my dear
Happy Valentines Day to you & many many more
peace on earth, no more corruption, lets end all wars.
death, lies & murder, I just want to flee
when I see you though, all those thoughts disappear
you make my world complete; I love you my dear
Happy Valentines Day to you & many many more
peace on earth, no more corruption, lets end all wars.
#CallToAction
#love
#rhyming #ValentinesDay
#rhyming #ValentinesDay
123 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 6:24pm
13th Feb 2025 6:24pm
Taking Over
A new force has risen. The good old days are done
We reinvent this system. A new age has begun
Alliance of disappointed members who have now conjoined
We share the same disgusts. It's time to feel our wrath
We'll knock you out in one breath
It's our turn to converge
The world needs to be cleansed of all the putrid noise
This pursuit that we chase, the fight is our life choice
Our honor should not be mocked. We're justified to protect it
Try and you will get fucked and you shall feel our wrath
We'll take you down in one breath
It's...
We reinvent this system. A new age has begun
Alliance of disappointed members who have now conjoined
We share the same disgusts. It's time to feel our wrath
We'll knock you out in one breath
It's our turn to converge
The world needs to be cleansed of all the putrid noise
This pursuit that we chase, the fight is our life choice
Our honor should not be mocked. We're justified to protect it
Try and you will get fucked and you shall feel our wrath
We'll take you down in one breath
It's...
#CallToAction
#conflict
#oppression
#rebellion
#rhyming
88 reads
6 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 3:04am
13th Feb 2025 3:04am
Elon Musk Can Suck My Dick
The crumbling empire
Won’t stand
Much longer
The fortress walls
Are breaking, oh
So much faster
to you propagators
breeding lies
among blind eyes
keep pushing bullshit
keep having your fits
to succumb
to your master
OH...
ELON
you weak little insignificant delusional bitch
think you're important yet
you're just a little BITCH
I wave good-BYE
We do not need you
we recognize your nothingness
We wave good-BYE
Everyone is aware
of your bullshit ...
Won’t stand
Much longer
The fortress walls
Are breaking, oh
So much faster
to you propagators
breeding lies
among blind eyes
keep pushing bullshit
keep having your fits
to succumb
to your master
OH...
ELON
you weak little insignificant delusional bitch
think you're important yet
you're just a little BITCH
I wave good-BYE
We do not need you
we recognize your nothingness
We wave good-BYE
Everyone is aware
of your bullshit ...
#CallToAction
#freedom
#identity
#manipulation
#responsibility
94 reads
4 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 3:33pm
6th Feb 2025 3:33pm
Earplugs
Times like these are dangerous
darkness dimming sun song
No birth of notes splashing
against our ears
before the poem digs up the well
of our heart
I don't wish for silence
but a roar from the shadow
howling for the symphony
the unity
of a thousand instruments
orchestrated as one
shattering the disease
spreading like olive oil
over the flowers
who's petaled eyes
are glazing over in disbelief
I will not shut my mouth
to...
darkness dimming sun song
No birth of notes splashing
against our ears
before the poem digs up the well
of our heart
I don't wish for silence
but a roar from the shadow
howling for the symphony
the unity
of a thousand instruments
orchestrated as one
shattering the disease
spreading like olive oil
over the flowers
who's petaled eyes
are glazing over in disbelief
I will not shut my mouth
to...
#CallToAction
#freedom
#LGBT
229 reads
10 Comments
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