Call To Action Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#CallToAction
call to action seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:06pm
Yesterday 5:06pm
Focus
Close your mind to truth.
Only think lies.
Wait for the world to come at you.
Demolish it with a surprise.
Don't tell God the truth.
He's a shitty guy.
Give him smoke and spoofs.
Bend over and hypnotize.
Cradle inside the web.
A monster full of eyes.
The spiders are in my bed.
Trying to shut my daughters eyes.
Only think lies.
Wait for the world to come at you.
Demolish it with a surprise.
Don't tell God the truth.
He's a shitty guy.
Give him smoke and spoofs.
Bend over and hypnotize.
Cradle inside the web.
A monster full of eyes.
The spiders are in my bed.
Trying to shut my daughters eyes.
#CallToAction
27 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 8:38pm
10th Jan 2025 8:38pm
March of the Crabs!
This message is for all you sex fiends here on DUP.
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Focus on Internet Porn and dirty mags
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
A prostitute is usually a red flag
Safe Sex Don't stop Crabs!
Itchy, hairy pubes, your partner starts to gag
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Tainted bed sheets, throw them in a garbage bag
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Disease ridden, need to report to the nearest lab
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
STD's for the rich and for the poor dressed in rags
Safe Sex Don't...
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Focus on Internet Porn and dirty mags
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
A prostitute is usually a red flag
Safe Sex Don't stop Crabs!
Itchy, hairy pubes, your partner starts to gag
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Tainted bed sheets, throw them in a garbage bag
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
Disease ridden, need to report to the nearest lab
Safe Sex Don't Stop Crabs!
STD's for the rich and for the poor dressed in rags
Safe Sex Don't...
#illness
#MentalHealth
#satirical
#sex
#CallToAction
75 reads
13 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 1:20am
7th Jan 2025 1:20am
Thoughts and Dreams
Land of thoughts and dreams
Descend into lies and thievery
Star spangled on my soul
Watch a deceptive devil
Orange and loud
Drowns out the truth
Playing the part of Patriot
Hugs the flag my dad stood for
As he is corporal bone spurs
Says studio 54 was his Vietnam
Spits on McCain an American Hero
I don’t get it what’s in it for them
He translates patriotism into cash green
Build the wall keep the Rapist out
Grab em by the pussy
They let you if your evil
Shell of a tough...
Descend into lies and thievery
Star spangled on my soul
Watch a deceptive devil
Orange and loud
Drowns out the truth
Playing the part of Patriot
Hugs the flag my dad stood for
As he is corporal bone spurs
Says studio 54 was his Vietnam
Spits on McCain an American Hero
I don’t get it what’s in it for them
He translates patriotism into cash green
Build the wall keep the Rapist out
Grab em by the pussy
They let you if your evil
Shell of a tough...
#anger
#betrayal
#CallToAction
#deception
#lies
38 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 9:37pm
5th Jan 2025 9:37pm
I HATE ASS KISSERS!
Go ahead
Insert your tongue really deep into their asshole
Taste your bosses rectum
Maybe this will get you what you want from them
You have an image to maintain
An agenda to get ahead, to reach a goal
Do you think this will get you what you want?
If it don't, then your brown nose will look even shittier then it does now
I hope you fall flat on your face, you pathetic scumbag
Here's some advice,
Clean that shit off your nose, don't come near me ever again
and please go fuck yourself!
Insert your tongue really deep into their asshole
Taste your bosses rectum
Maybe this will get you what you want from them
You have an image to maintain
An agenda to get ahead, to reach a goal
Do you think this will get you what you want?
If it don't, then your brown nose will look even shittier then it does now
I hope you fall flat on your face, you pathetic scumbag
Here's some advice,
Clean that shit off your nose, don't come near me ever again
and please go fuck yourself!
#anger
#CallToAction
#hate
73 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 12:16pm
15th Dec 2024 12:16pm
No Chance To Live
Grown matured are the formerly abused
Forced
Mutilated souls
Damaged
They are sadists turned on by the young
They are sickeningly inexplicit about many forms of masochism and violence to enact upon
Beaten to submission and other forms of punishment
Beyond domination
Intrigued of the violent sides of man
This is the abstract conception
This generation takes a spanking to another level
The next generation will beg for mutilation as these maniacs get off on their torturous pain filled screams
Our kids are dead before they have a chance...
Forced
Mutilated souls
Damaged
They are sadists turned on by the young
They are sickeningly inexplicit about many forms of masochism and violence to enact upon
Beaten to submission and other forms of punishment
Beyond domination
Intrigued of the violent sides of man
This is the abstract conception
This generation takes a spanking to another level
The next generation will beg for mutilation as these maniacs get off on their torturous pain filled screams
Our kids are dead before they have a chance...
#abuse
#anger
#CallToAction
#children
#violence
57 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 7:32pm
11th Dec 2024 7:32pm
The Truth Will f**k You Dry
If you could disappear, I'd be a happy man
What does not kill you, only makes you much more vulnerable for the next time
Take a huge bite of my psychotic addiction
Come a little closer, I'll knife you in the kitchen
Consequences and truth led to your conviction
Trial made up of errors, another crucifixion
Eat it whole
Guzzle it down
Vomit it up
Fuck the ground
The enemy is within you
Kiss your ass, as you are your only friend
What does not kill you, only makes you much more vulnerable for the next time
Take a huge bite of my psychotic addiction
Come a little closer, I'll knife you in the kitchen
Consequences and truth led to your conviction
Trial made up of errors, another crucifixion
Eat it whole
Guzzle it down
Vomit it up
Fuck the ground
The enemy is within you
Kiss your ass, as you are your only friend
#angels
#CallToAction
#dark
#hate
#lies
106 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 10:37am
10th Dec 2024 10:37am
Maxed Out & Defeated
Advertising temptation
A credit possession driven nation
So determined, so obsessed
With having only the best
Swipe away what isn’t yours
To compare and compete
Take out another loan
Beg, borrow, steal
Fancy car, you’re in debt
House on show, not your asset
Immaterial, material
Death by debt
Blinded by greed
Termination damnation
They got everything to lose
It’s all taken by the bank
Drowning in booze
Society fueled by greed
Just know your children watch you
And they will follow your...
A credit possession driven nation
So determined, so obsessed
With having only the best
Swipe away what isn’t yours
To compare and compete
Take out another loan
Beg, borrow, steal
Fancy car, you’re in debt
House on show, not your asset
Immaterial, material
Death by debt
Blinded by greed
Termination damnation
They got everything to lose
It’s all taken by the bank
Drowning in booze
Society fueled by greed
Just know your children watch you
And they will follow your...
#CallToAction
#greed
#LifeStruggles #money
#LifeStruggles #money
66 reads
11 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 9:27pm
5th Dec 2024 9:27pm
Bro-sencrantz and Shill-denstern
The mind gets boggled awful hard
when folks do stupid things,
like hoist with their own petard
outrageous votes for kings.
Bombs away, sirs, in your own boots,
to step in your own deuce,
but progress seeks far better routes...
where dipshits just vamoose!
when folks do stupid things,
like hoist with their own petard
outrageous votes for kings.
Bombs away, sirs, in your own boots,
to step in your own deuce,
but progress seeks far better routes...
where dipshits just vamoose!
#CallToAction
#lies
#manipulation #tragedy
#manipulation #tragedy
119 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 7:14pm
4th Dec 2024 7:14pm
Mental Difficulties
Our existence is vain
This world has taken us
The seconds tick away
Time eats away our souls
We fall through its existence
Clawing away
At any memory left behind
It all becomes so repetitive
The cold stares eat away at your skin
Their lies they consume
They filled your brain with shit
Churn and turn they wash away your very existence
They filled your brain with shit
And gossip eat away at our conscious
Nothing here is ours, unique is just a fabrication
You Are a Cold Hard Copy
The next one...
This world has taken us
The seconds tick away
Time eats away our souls
We fall through its existence
Clawing away
At any memory left behind
It all becomes so repetitive
The cold stares eat away at your skin
Their lies they consume
They filled your brain with shit
Churn and turn they wash away your very existence
They filled your brain with shit
And gossip eat away at our conscious
Nothing here is ours, unique is just a fabrication
You Are a Cold Hard Copy
The next one...
#betrayal
#CallToAction
#deception
#lies
#manipulation
94 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 7:23pm
3rd Dec 2024 7:23pm
Privatization & Deregulation Ruined NYC
NYC doesn't have alligators but it does have moats, that at one time protected the downtown subculture.
This kept away the jocks, yuppies, normal people and other intruders.
By the late 1990's, crime subsided and the real estate developers magically made the hood livable.
NYC was losing it's soul.
By the time the new millennium was near, the real estate boom forever transformed the city's styles & attitudes.
The oddities lost their frontier
Some rolled with these changes, others left the city and some reminisced about the "Good old days". ...
This kept away the jocks, yuppies, normal people and other intruders.
By the late 1990's, crime subsided and the real estate developers magically made the hood livable.
NYC was losing it's soul.
By the time the new millennium was near, the real estate boom forever transformed the city's styles & attitudes.
The oddities lost their frontier
Some rolled with these changes, others left the city and some reminisced about the "Good old days". ...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#nonfiction
#politics
#rebellion
74 reads
6 Comments
Dan_ONeill
Dan ONeill
Dan ONeill
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 10:34am
29th Nov 2024 10:34am
The Beauty of the Mystery
They just laughed and said ‘what use little rhymes in the face of cold dust erupting,
What will your words achieve when our machines blister skin’?
‘Nothing’, I say, ‘nothing will be achieved if you’re taking domination as your measure.
All I can do is hold on to the beauty of the mystery.’
‘Look at you, an empty container, grasping and gasping, as the beast finds its feet,
How will holding hands advance the project we’ll soon complete?’
‘It won’t’, I say, ‘but some things trip monsters even when they stomp,
That’s how we reach for the mystery of the...
What will your words achieve when our machines blister skin’?
‘Nothing’, I say, ‘nothing will be achieved if you’re taking domination as your measure.
All I can do is hold on to the beauty of the mystery.’
‘Look at you, an empty container, grasping and gasping, as the beast finds its feet,
How will holding hands advance the project we’ll soon complete?’
‘It won’t’, I say, ‘but some things trip monsters even when they stomp,
That’s how we reach for the mystery of the...
#CallToAction
#humankind
#LifeStruggles
#nature
#technology
51 reads
1 Comment
Wordsmith
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 6:56am
28th Nov 2024 6:56am
Chains of Freedom
Hold up
Don’t talk
Or the grim reaper will steal your voice.
Words turn weapons stripped of choice
Next you're in cuffs
Bound and subdued
Dragged to halls where fairness is skewed.
“Arise my Lord” the bailiff calls
But justice has crumbled within those walls.
Judged for truths you dared to say
Now silenced tossed like waste-away.
In the jungle of law where power preys
Your rights dissolve in a smoky haze.
In the heart of the city beneath neon lights
Lies Mide a dreamer who fought for rights.
He raised his...
Don’t talk
Or the grim reaper will steal your voice.
Words turn weapons stripped of choice
Next you're in cuffs
Bound and subdued
Dragged to halls where fairness is skewed.
“Arise my Lord” the bailiff calls
But justice has crumbled within those walls.
Judged for truths you dared to say
Now silenced tossed like waste-away.
In the jungle of law where power preys
Your rights dissolve in a smoky haze.
In the heart of the city beneath neon lights
Lies Mide a dreamer who fought for rights.
He raised his...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#freedom
#politics
#rebellion
69 reads
2 Comments
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