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With You
When we sit and talk
I await your coy glance
it takes me somewhere,I've never been
the space where air,and fire dance
illuminating all the gloom
kept deep within
the rarest of beauties from inside to out
extraordinary,to say the least
I admire your individuality
above all else
and your caring nature
can give ones mind peace
I'll help you find a place to stand
or be there,when it all caves in
no matter what happens
I want you to know
I'll always be,a trustworthy friend
I await your coy glance
it takes me somewhere,I've never been
the space where air,and fire dance
illuminating all the gloom
kept deep within
the rarest of beauties from inside to out
extraordinary,to say the least
I admire your individuality
above all else
and your caring nature
can give ones mind peace
I'll help you find a place to stand
or be there,when it all caves in
no matter what happens
I want you to know
I'll always be,a trustworthy friend
Published 3rd Apr 2013
| Edited 29th Nov 2013
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3rd Apr 2013 4:56am
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12th Jul 2013 7:37am
This is truly beautiful, but I feel it tinged with underlying sadness... like there's a little more to it than meets the eye.
Enjoyed :)
Enjoyed :)
12th Jul 2013 7:40am
12th Jul 2013 8:17am
Merely reading between the lines; what's unsaid is sometimes more powerful than what we find the courage to scribe. :)
