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.:Creep Thy Heart To Keep Thee Close:.
By now, there was no way that she couldn’t know-it
She was his Muse; his notion of a Poet
From the Sound Stage
He was now offering what might sound strange
Asking her outright “Could she spare some change?”
He promised this New Collection wouldn’t be a distraction
Adding…what she always gave was pure satisfaction
Saying to her, “Come on now.. this time? What should we expect?”
Incessantly pleading, “We mean NO disrespect”
And as always…she rendered him a specialized effect
She being The Classic to his Ultra-High Tech
Him now saying he couldn’t explain how he mistily got this way
While pervasive was this Muse…her Intricate Wordplay
She told him this feeling wasn’t small or less than a miracle
Yet from the start, crept his heart just being lyrical
Having him twist, then turn, then collapse into a rhyme
Her being Old School;
This Cool Jewel, again she gave him time
She told him, “I’m your Marionette on Delicate Strings…Boy you got me tricked out wanting to write you things…And
I do know without doubt what you say is true. If you never wrote another word I’d still ink one for you”
So we conclude that’s what one does when they love someone to death
They’ll speak of change… write what’s strange… all in one deep breath
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photo: Danny-Girl Portieous
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Published 28th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
28th Mar 2013 11:06pm
nice write kriticool
word plays for sure
strider
word plays for sure
strider
29th Mar 2013 00:01am
Anonymous
29th Mar 2013 9:26am
Amazing 2 lines you have ending and wrapping this up. Great story line in-bedded in the poem and I love how you pen the interaction with the muse-mentally and figuratively-perhaps literally as well.
Another great write Mr kriticool :-)
Another great write Mr kriticool :-)
30th Mar 2013 1:53am
when you play with so many words its hard to draw out the underlying meaning.
there's so much goin on in here.... teases, ruses, muses
classic to ultra high? like different ages? maybe she was older and he younger? that would also seem to fit
she does seem more learned than him... while he's completely swept off into lala land
the new collection - why wouldn't she want it? of course she would.
those last 2 lines she says to him. the poem was just that. also, it ended right there for me.
fucking beautiful!
there's so much goin on in here.... teases, ruses, muses
classic to ultra high? like different ages? maybe she was older and he younger? that would also seem to fit
she does seem more learned than him... while he's completely swept off into lala land
the new collection - why wouldn't she want it? of course she would.
those last 2 lines she says to him. the poem was just that. also, it ended right there for me.
fucking beautiful!
10th Apr 2013 4:51pm
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yea mon
dats a reel goot look write-dare one-three
very insightful
and of course, glad to offer a challenge
sometimes, most times for me a "complete meaning" is jus too easy!
thanks for readin.. sharin
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yea mon
dats a reel goot look write-dare one-three
very insightful
and of course, glad to offer a challenge
sometimes, most times for me a "complete meaning" is jus too easy!
thanks for readin.. sharin
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11th Apr 2014 8:04pm
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