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Dark Wishes
Tread..
with me...
down darkend corridors
that whisper the sins
of man...
Tread with me..
into the passage ways
that lead to distand lands
Follow me down...
into the blackness of the abyss
hold my hand...as we tumble
then kiss...
Before splashing into infinity
somehow...the shadows...get in to me
then I bleed a mixture of rage..and
melancholy...
I...
thought I heard an elemental
call me...
somewhere inside my mind
in that place that hasnt gotten
all twisted..inside
space and time
I try to delve deeper
until I get this thing right
Why...I wonder can I not
reverse the lines of time..
Alchemy..Necromancy...
Some form of Magic I decree
To allow time
to lay down..and
rewind for me...
Whispers in the dark
A penny for my thoughts...
If I ...could turn back time
My soul...
would surely
be bought.
with me...
down darkend corridors
that whisper the sins
of man...
Tread with me..
into the passage ways
that lead to distand lands
Follow me down...
into the blackness of the abyss
hold my hand...as we tumble
then kiss...
Before splashing into infinity
somehow...the shadows...get in to me
then I bleed a mixture of rage..and
melancholy...
I...
thought I heard an elemental
call me...
somewhere inside my mind
in that place that hasnt gotten
all twisted..inside
space and time
I try to delve deeper
until I get this thing right
Why...I wonder can I not
reverse the lines of time..
Alchemy..Necromancy...
Some form of Magic I decree
To allow time
to lay down..and
rewind for me...
Whispers in the dark
A penny for my thoughts...
If I ...could turn back time
My soul...
would surely
be bought.
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Re: Dark Wishes
27th Mar 2013 8:39pm
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28th Mar 2013 1:04am
Re: Dark Wishes
Anonymous
27th Mar 2013 8:46pm
Great write, a time machine would be helpful sometimes but we'd probably pay dearly for screwing it all up.
Thank's for a fine read
Thank's for a fine read
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Re: Dark Wishes
27th Mar 2013 10:14pm
Re: Dark Wishes
27th Mar 2013 10:34pm
The mystic/magical qualities of words the remind me of one of my favorite singer/composers, Al Stewart. "Time Passages" and "Merlin's Time" stand out.
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re: Re: Dark Wishes
28th Mar 2013 1:05am
Re: Dark Wishes
28th Mar 2013 00:22am
I love this...this is my kind of poem, one that takes the reader on a journey to the dark parts! Well done
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re: Re: Dark Wishes
28th Mar 2013 1:05am
Hey Nikkie....
I have been living in the Darkness for two weeks now......dont know when I will hit the light again
I have been living in the Darkness for two weeks now......dont know when I will hit the light again
Re: Dark Wishes
Anonymous
28th Mar 2013 2:02am
By putting pen to paper you have made poetic magic. A beautiful write and a satisfying read.
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re: Re: Dark Wishes
29th Mar 2013 8:31pm
Re: Dark Wishes
28th Mar 2013 5:45am
What vibrant dark wishes you've penned, my lovely friend! WOW!
This was written Amazingly, Fire!
*two snaps and a z formation!* Love This!
This was written Amazingly, Fire!
*two snaps and a z formation!* Love This!
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re: Re: Dark Wishes
29th Mar 2013 8:32pm
I am glad you enjoyed...
too bad I really ish I had the power to turn back time (sigh)
Thank you!
xoxo
Fire
too bad I really ish I had the power to turn back time (sigh)
Thank you!
xoxo
Fire
Re: Dark Wishes
28th Mar 2013 6:56pm
Beautiful Fire what a powerful poem, magical and mesmerizing..you sizzle!!! much love Crim :)
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re: Re: Dark Wishes
29th Mar 2013 8:33pm
My Crim,
always an honore when you grace my pages...
lately I have been full of sadness over my niece commiting suicide....
Thank you
xoxo
Fire
always an honore when you grace my pages...
lately I have been full of sadness over my niece commiting suicide....
Thank you
xoxo
Fire