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everyone who smiles at you
might not be a friend
out of everyone who kissed you,
only a few loved you until the end
Out of all the ones that left you
maybe no letters were sent
But just remember
your all in their heads.
might not be a friend
out of everyone who kissed you,
only a few loved you until the end
Out of all the ones that left you
maybe no letters were sent
But just remember
your all in their heads.
Published 25th Mar 2013
| Edited 26th Mar 2013
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25th Mar 2013 11:05pm
i like it, but the second 'the' in the 5th line sounds like it should be 'that'
