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To Rivers Wide.............
Naked.......
........a chosen masterpiece cast upon
the genesis of our beginning........
.....an ode to the motherland.
Fertile and rich
I stand before you.
It's power hangs long and full
It's gleam is cast upon your deep eyes
Fueling the burning desire
lying deep between your powerful thighs
The carnal fire
shut up in your bones
wetly, your pussy drips it's nectar
desire won't leave you alone
I grow harder, thicker
the longer I bask in the glow
of your sun
I throb and I drip clearly
The fertile fields call to us
before the flood
So much work to be done.......
I am the worker man
pon me worker girl in two
the twain doth meet
wet flesh melt together
my strong arms engage
your small stature
it's power lifts you
off your
delicate feet........
.......with every stroke and thrust
thy eros power delivers unto me
filling your pussy tightly
my jewels drawn closer to swollen lips....
...deeper than deep
so full inside your flowing river
our juices mix and seep
from the union of souls
O fertile motherland......
........your essence
closed eyes yet behold
My steely dark vein
purges your body
possessing your pussy
with each and every powerful stroke
Against the bright skies
your spirit wailing to Jah,
you are a volcanic eruption and
I am the ash filled smoke.
The memories of my long, burning spear
cast down upon your fertile ground
awaiting the grip of your soft, agile hands
pumping thy warm waters gently
our bodies freely moving
along nature's powerful and sensual force
within the balance found
inside this circle of life
dancing upon our wet, brown flesh
The rains of Africa
fall steadily upon this sacred ground
Published 11th Mar 2013
| Edited 15th Mar 2013
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11th Mar 2013 8:39pm
Can be read as an allegory of the land of Africa and/or simple erotic ode. (As the Bible Song of Songs is said to be both an allegory of love between God and His people and of erotic love between a human couple.)
Sixteenth line down - 'bask' not 'basque' (latter either means item of women's underwear or, with capital B, a people who live in north Spain.)
Sixteenth line down - 'bask' not 'basque' (latter either means item of women's underwear or, with capital B, a people who live in north Spain.)
11th Mar 2013 8:44pm
11th Mar 2013 9:25pm
I need a bigger vocabulary to keep up with all the compliments I want to give. I feel the music and movement on a sensory basis. Keep up the good worx!
11th Mar 2013 9:54pm
Fertility goddess, lush land , planting corns and erotica....a montage of visions just flashed before my mind eye...wow, MM.
12th Mar 2013 3:22am
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15th Mar 2013 8:54pm
Shit! Digging your ink!;)
I have to tell you that I am becoming a Giant fan of your ink.. its easy to write erotic but to do it and make it new and different each time.. is amazing.. you have this vibe that makes your ink sing so theres music in it and this was def as the first comment stated it makes you think of Africa the drums banging agaisnt my back.. as I moved from one line to the next.. it gets louder and harder then it became this soft drum toward the ending that took the reader or ME.. in between these lines and man oh man do I enjoy the show you put on.. I ramble a lil but this was a pleasure to read thank you for sharing
26th Mar 2013 10:19pm
from the union of souls
O fertile motherland......
........your essence
closed eyes yet behold <--Love that!
O fertile motherland......
........your essence
closed eyes yet behold <--Love that!
