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Take Me Drunk Im Home
Tip toes on a creeky kitchen floor
Unsteady hands on a pantry door
The malevolent demons lead the way
The heavenly angels having nothing to say
Both exhilarating and tedious
Fulfilling but dangerous
One sip
Two sip
Three
Tangy green liquid acting as a fire extinguisher
Ending the angry stew of lava starting right in my hearts center
The booze lulls my ravenous creatures
Tames my imperfect, belligerent features
Unsteady hands closing a pantry door
Tip toes departing on a creeky kitchen floor
No longer am I forever alone
My booze has found its way back to his home
Unsteady hands on a pantry door
The malevolent demons lead the way
The heavenly angels having nothing to say
Both exhilarating and tedious
Fulfilling but dangerous
One sip
Two sip
Three
Tangy green liquid acting as a fire extinguisher
Ending the angry stew of lava starting right in my hearts center
The booze lulls my ravenous creatures
Tames my imperfect, belligerent features
Unsteady hands closing a pantry door
Tip toes departing on a creeky kitchen floor
No longer am I forever alone
My booze has found its way back to his home
Published 6th Mar 2013
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6th Mar 2013 7:50am
6th Mar 2013 1:01pm
6th Mar 2013 2:41pm
Amazing! I'm feeling this piece for sure. Favorite line "Tangy green liquid acting as a fire extinguisher, Ending the angry stew of lava starting right in my hearts center " same reason I drink. Great write!
7th Mar 2013 3:09am
Thanks :) I was hoping I could capture how a true alcoholic feels, but I've never even been drunk so I had to infer but thanks!
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25th Apr 2013 6:16am
scattered and quirk-ie interesting read! felt relative yet far from the truth... not what i expected from the title
8th Nov 2013 6:38am
I am not an alcoholic but I am a recovering drug addict and I will say what you captured here was how we are secretive and try and hide our addictions.
Thanks for the reminder that if we let our guard down for even seconds we can and will be back in the control of the substance, whatever that might be.
Thanks for the reminder that if we let our guard down for even seconds we can and will be back in the control of the substance, whatever that might be.
