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The bare necessities
Sleep is for the weak.
Food is for the daft.
Clothes are for choice.
(It sounded good at the time,now maybe not so much.I don't even.)
Food is for the daft.
Clothes are for choice.
(It sounded good at the time,now maybe not so much.I don't even.)
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Re: The bare necessities
Anonymous
26th Feb 2013 00:56am
lol Bare minimum, is enough!:)
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26th Feb 2013 3:17am
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Re: The bare necessities
26th Feb 2013 1:18am
I love this and envy being able to communicate in short thoughts. I never shut up (as you're about to witness).
However, sleep is necessary (says the insomniac, food can be an exciting layer of one's life map, clothing can change your mood and in turn the outlook on all three of these things daily.
Maybe that's why it sounded good "at the time" then "maybe not so much" - you must have eaten well and put on something to change your walk.
However, sleep is necessary (says the insomniac, food can be an exciting layer of one's life map, clothing can change your mood and in turn the outlook on all three of these things daily.
Maybe that's why it sounded good "at the time" then "maybe not so much" - you must have eaten well and put on something to change your walk.
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re: Re: The bare necessities
26th Feb 2013 3:17am
First off thank you:)
Secondly,there is nothing wrong with long sentences and you are fine lol I envy your ability to wrote long poems and whatnot,haha:) I can't write long things,to save my life lol
Secondly,there is nothing wrong with long sentences and you are fine lol I envy your ability to wrote long poems and whatnot,haha:) I can't write long things,to save my life lol
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14th Jul 2013 4:02pm
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14th Jul 2013 4:54pm
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19th Jul 2013 9:33pm
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20th Jul 2013 00:20am
Depends on how you mean,because if you mean do I like the nuts that you can eat,then yes.If you are using the slang term for a guys scrotum and penis,then now.And finally if you are referring to sanity or state of mind,that's for your own determination.I don't care which you choose.
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20th Jul 2013 2:20pm
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20th Jul 2013 4:00pm
I don't understand.There was no advice that was given.I only saw trolling,however if I miss understood,then that's different and I apologize for such.