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Just another day
It's morning again and the rain
Is falling on my window pane
incessantly, gently...
The cold rain inspires me,
To pen down these words
to touch your heart...
My mind could use a
relief from all these thoughts
Love lost, love spurned
The world seems
So grey and lonely
from this empty bed
Without you….
Maybe I'm just
Pining for nothing at all
Just wistful thoughts
Gossamer dreams
Perhaps, I'll try to
Live a life dreamless
No ache, no pain
No hurt...
Tomorrow will be
Just another day
Travelling towards
chosen destinations
A life propelled.
Is falling on my window pane
incessantly, gently...
The cold rain inspires me,
To pen down these words
to touch your heart...
My mind could use a
relief from all these thoughts
Love lost, love spurned
The world seems
So grey and lonely
from this empty bed
Without you….
Maybe I'm just
Pining for nothing at all
Just wistful thoughts
Gossamer dreams
Perhaps, I'll try to
Live a life dreamless
No ache, no pain
No hurt...
Tomorrow will be
Just another day
Travelling towards
chosen destinations
A life propelled.
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22nd Feb 2013 1:53pm
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23rd Feb 2013 2:23pm
Thank you Magdalena, for reading, commenting and for your constant encouragement.
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2013 2:07pm
Very nice poem Grace. Good Luck.
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23rd Feb 2013 2:24pm
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2013 3:19pm
Beautiful poem - good luck in competition.....
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23rd Feb 2013 2:26pm
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23rd Feb 2013 4:23pm
Ms. Grace, I love your writing sweets!!
Great poem!!
Pen on!!!!
Sir Lancelott
Great poem!!
Pen on!!!!
Sir Lancelott
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23rd Feb 2013 7:46pm
Sir lancelott , how gallant of you, encouraging comment indeed. It's comments like yours that spur improvements. Thank you!
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