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Caliente
We danced salsa and drowned our inhibitions
in tequila and passion
my Spanish limited, his English halting
smiles and bold glances
paved a road that words couldn't
smoldering looks and brazen touch
spoke more clearly than any words ever could
language barrier breached, we spoke in tongues
a universal language
of breathless, wanton, panting whispers and sighs
two hearts in tune to music's fiery tempo
and bodies playing a staccato rythym
to their final crescendo
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Re: Caliente
22nd Feb 2013 7:37am
Incredible Ink, Lola!
Simply beautiful how your words dance the perfect waltz!
A delicate and soft love affair!
NICE!
Simply beautiful how your words dance the perfect waltz!
A delicate and soft love affair!
NICE!
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Re: Caliente
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2013 8:48am
Yeah, hot!
Hot, indeed.
Yer sure knows how to carry that one, poet :-)
Please keep 'em rolling; I dig yer consistency!
Cheers
Tidespotter
Hot, indeed.
Yer sure knows how to carry that one, poet :-)
Please keep 'em rolling; I dig yer consistency!
Cheers
Tidespotter
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re: Re: Caliente
22nd Feb 2013 1:56pm
thank you Tidespotter. I strive to be consistently cheeky. Anything else is just a bonus.
Lola
Lola
Re: Caliente
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2013 10:42am
I know tequila well Lola.
Nice write..arriba!
Strider
Nice write..arriba!
Strider
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re: Re: Caliente
22nd Feb 2013 1:59pm
Yes, tequila is some crazy-ass shit, isn't it? Never quite sure if it makes us lose our minds and inhibitions or just causes wild dreams and hallucinations. ;)
Thanks for readin'
Lola
Thanks for readin'
Lola
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22nd Feb 2013 1:19pm
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Re: Caliente
22nd Feb 2013 9:16pm
Almost makes me want check out "Dancing With The Stars".
You capture the steam of the dance very well as you wrap up the poem.
You capture the steam of the dance very well as you wrap up the poem.
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22nd Feb 2013 11:08pm
Re: Caliente
23rd Feb 2013 4:40am
Lola that was FANTABULOUS!!! I loved the write sweets!!
Great pen!!
Sir Lancelott
Great pen!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Caliente
23rd Feb 2013 4:48am
Thank you Lancelott. And here you thought I was merely a pretty face and a great set of knockers, huh?
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Re: Caliente
2nd Mar 2013 2:03am
"we spoke in tongues"
The universal language of passion...
Shall we dance - tequila optional :)
LSK
The universal language of passion...
Shall we dance - tequila optional :)
LSK
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