What a world...

I wrote this short little poem a LONG time ago, I finally decided to post it. Lol, please tell me what you think, I take all comments and critisism gladly! :) Thanks for reading. ~ Jade

i have to say i like this one alot
could be taken in many different direction i enjoy that in poetry takes a good mind to do that

Aw, thanks so much! :) I enjoyed your poem too. Thanks again for reading, I appreciate it! :)

liked very much the use of words such as Plastic, Duct-tape, Immortality and Skin!

Thanks, lol. :) Those are some pretty shnazzy words. Appreciate it! :)

"...duck-taped by perfection.."
This piece is short, but hits a lot of notes! It reminds me of how most this world is held down, trying to alter the inevitable. Very good!

Thank you so much! I am glad you were captured by the essence in my tiny little poem. I am very thankful! :)

i loved it!

I am so happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading! :)

So short yet so deep. I love it. You have my support. :)

Thanks so much for checking my little piece out. It's not nearly as awesome as the one you did but I'd like to think it's close enough. :D Thanks again. :)