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Dangerous Friend
you don't own me
you have no right to tell me whether or not I can talk to somebody
you confuse me in so many ways
we've been doing this for far too many days
sometimes you're so nice, but then you can be so darn mean
I never needed to be seen
but it's different with you
you know thing's you shouldn't know, and make me feel like I don't know what to do
you encourage me
then you cause and inflict on me so much misery
you don't love me, that much I know is true
and I don't know what it is I feel towards you
no I'm not alright
when I know for a fact it shouldn't be you I'm dreaming of at night
don't think I'll ever really know
where these feeling could ever go
nor do I think I really want to
because I know I could be seriously hurt by you
you have no right to tell me whether or not I can talk to somebody
you confuse me in so many ways
we've been doing this for far too many days
sometimes you're so nice, but then you can be so darn mean
I never needed to be seen
but it's different with you
you know thing's you shouldn't know, and make me feel like I don't know what to do
you encourage me
then you cause and inflict on me so much misery
you don't love me, that much I know is true
and I don't know what it is I feel towards you
no I'm not alright
when I know for a fact it shouldn't be you I'm dreaming of at night
don't think I'll ever really know
where these feeling could ever go
nor do I think I really want to
because I know I could be seriously hurt by you
Published 27th Jan 2013
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27th Jan 2013 8:47pm
Just a suggestion that this should be in the self, anger, or heartbreak category :)
Liked the poem! Lots of emotion.
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Liked the poem! Lots of emotion.
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28th Jan 2013 3:05am
28th Jan 2013 9:36am
Very good ... I can feel the mix of emotions. Attraction and retreat.
I especially liked:
"but it's different with you
you know thing's you shouldn't know, and make me feel like I don't know what to do
you encourage me
then you cause and inflict on me so much misery
you don't love me, that much I know is true
and I don't know what it is I feel towards you"
This reminds me of a friendship I had with a girl back in college before I met my to be long term college girlfriend.
I especially liked:
"but it's different with you
you know thing's you shouldn't know, and make me feel like I don't know what to do
you encourage me
then you cause and inflict on me so much misery
you don't love me, that much I know is true
and I don't know what it is I feel towards you"
This reminds me of a friendship I had with a girl back in college before I met my to be long term college girlfriend.
