smoke, bacon and the curiosity of tiny creatures

Indie,

well, this is a totally different side to your writings,

I like it, it's funny and has some depth to it, dunno why I was expecting a different word than  hoard, but hoard is totally cool.

good stuff

aww, thanks E x) glad you enjoyed.

Peace, Indie

I agree with lep, I was expecting something completely different but this works. Great title by the way.

Thanks so much Kourt, glad you enjoyed and the title works for you :D

Peace, Indie

thus
turn
bore'dumb
into
creative
joy'moment-----ugly beauty at-it's-bestest

lol, thank you very much Dan for your lovely comment x)

Peace, Indie

Lol, awesome.  A sign of a true poet, surely, that you get us all interested in your boredom?

lol, thanks Ataki :) I'm glad my moments of boredom aren't spent in vain, and that you found something of value in this piece. x)

Peace, Indie

Aha, now that's pretty damn cool, Indie!

:D thanks so much Evan, for your lovely comment.

Peace, Indie

I believe the last line carries all the weight in this poem. Whatever you'd have put in that last line, that would of made this poem. I'd have probably wrote something miserably philosophic, but that's me.
I like it most when you sidestep love I think.

Yep, be damned my melancholy heart :P

Thanks for you comment Mr A, and I don't mind the philosophical edge, I agree in such a short piece, the list line was the make or break of it.

Thanks for stopping by. :D  
Peace, Indie