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Sunken
sinking
slowly
stopping
suddenly
sentimentally
submerged,
systematically
suppressed
shapeless
sins
surrounding
secrets
shouting
saints
successfully
silenced
sacrificially
sound,
senseless
screaming
sinister
shadows
shake
souls
staying,
succumbing,
shamefully
sinkable
slowly
stopping
suddenly
sentimentally
submerged,
systematically
suppressed
shapeless
sins
surrounding
secrets
shouting
saints
successfully
silenced
sacrificially
sound,
senseless
screaming
sinister
shadows
shake
souls
staying,
succumbing,
shamefully
sinkable
Published 8th Jan 2013
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Anonymous
8th Jan 2013 3:40pm
Simply superb! Amazing write
8th Jan 2013 3:42pm
Anonymous
8th Jan 2013 4:24pm
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8th Jan 2013 4:47pm
Anonymous
8th Jan 2013 5:17pm
beautiful!!
8th Jan 2013 5:24pm
8th Jan 2013 6:15pm
Astounding alliteration; I certainly don't have the patience to think them all up, wonderful writing.
8th Jan 2013 6:21pm
8th Jan 2013 8:06pm
never really thought about how many words that begin with s have such a negative connotation....
well done nikki........
well done nikki........
8th Jan 2013 8:13pm
8th Jan 2013 8:46pm
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9th Jan 2013 7:40am
Very nicely done with this bit of alliteration, moving from that into something that moves and works quite well.
Uley
Uley
10th Jan 2013 2:34am
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