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I sat forlorn under emerald trees
face buried deep between my knees
Abnoba whispered in my ear
to take away my deep despair.
at last at last a glimmering hope
flit cross my brow like shimmering ghost
I sat morose under the moon
dripped gossamer tears that made me swoon
Rhiannon knelt to kiss my face
and sew my fears with abeyance lace
at last under lunar light
a heaviness in me took flight
I danced upon the sea at last
Manannan Mac Lir did gently splash
the deep serene of indigo
into my darkened weary soul
at last at last warmth reaches spine
took away my deep repine
face buried deep between my knees
Abnoba whispered in my ear
to take away my deep despair.
at last at last a glimmering hope
flit cross my brow like shimmering ghost
I sat morose under the moon
dripped gossamer tears that made me swoon
Rhiannon knelt to kiss my face
and sew my fears with abeyance lace
at last under lunar light
a heaviness in me took flight
I danced upon the sea at last
Manannan Mac Lir did gently splash
the deep serene of indigo
into my darkened weary soul
at last at last warmth reaches spine
took away my deep repine
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24th Dec 2012 6:13pm
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24th Dec 2012 10:22pm
Thank you my friend. I do dark poetry so well, yet I'm lacking in the softer side. I'm trying to branch out. lol
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24th Dec 2012 10:24pm
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24th Dec 2012 11:16pm
You paint a beautiful picture with your words I love it, I was moved by it.
Want to explore your lighter side you say? Try writing a comic piece tell yourself it has to be completed within two days!
Great exercise no need to become a comic poet though! It's a bit like trying to smile and have a negative thought at the same time. Can't be done!
Love it Hun
Want to explore your lighter side you say? Try writing a comic piece tell yourself it has to be completed within two days!
Great exercise no need to become a comic poet though! It's a bit like trying to smile and have a negative thought at the same time. Can't be done!
Love it Hun
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25th Dec 2012 2:55am
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This is beautiful, lol beat some Celtic knowledge into me aswell (had to google abnoba) I still don't know who's in the picture but life need some mysteries eh? You managed to get the feelings across perfectly using the minimal amount of words, something I can never do.... Even in comments
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25th Dec 2012 11:41am
haha. Thank you. The girl is Stevi Nicks from Fleetwood Mac and she wrote and sang a song called Rhiannon. Your comments are fine. Mine? I talk way to much in mine and I think People just might fall asleep reading them. haha, see, I'm doing it now.
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25th Dec 2012 8:38pm
Lovely diction, I wish I could express myself so beautifully and simply as you do
~ Mystic ~
~ Mystic ~
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