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Silent Ice
Beat after beat, the warm blood
pumps, while steamed breath
heaves.
Fleets of stilled, glittering drifts
rise up, shimmered
traps.
Moments are plunged into
eternal iced
shards.
Fur sodden, frozen solid,
it is dead-weight
shed.
Eyes wholly blackened, the sole
depth, yet sparkles
stare
as the gemmed crown of anguish
bites – a glacial
nip.
Benumbed pulsations harden,
slow then cease, now
stone.
Whirled stars touch softly, kissing,
frosting, lying
still.
Published 16th Dec 2012
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16th Dec 2012 11:51pm
16th Dec 2012 11:56pm
Anonymous
16th Dec 2012 11:54pm
Brrrr and very compelling feel, Ataki.
Strider
Strider
16th Dec 2012 11:57pm
17th Dec 2012 00:20am
Such beauty to look upon but holds much danger too.
A captivating write Atakti. :)
A captivating write Atakti. :)
17th Dec 2012 9:13am
17th Dec 2012 6:07am
17th Dec 2012 9:17am
Anonymous
- Edited 17th Dec 2012 8:11am
17th Dec 2012 8:10am
WONDERFULLY dark write, the process of frost and things to be frozen. A great theme for a poem. Kind of modern snow queen version...
17th Dec 2012 9:13am
17th Dec 2012 3:54pm
This is a cold write! its perfect :)
weird because where I'm at I wish would freeze and its not....its kinda scary
weird because where I'm at I wish would freeze and its not....its kinda scary
17th Dec 2012 4:38pm
Well where I am it's cool enough to make me wanna stay under the covers... lol. Thanks for stopping by, nikkimoe.
