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Ardent Romance
Our passions burn hot enough to singe.
I long for the flames to lick my skin.
For your heat to send sparks through me.
Your warmth draws me in,
a glowing ember ever present in my heart.
Thoughts of the fire consume me.
Visions of the blaze dancing before my eyes.
A tender fusion of bodies and souls.
Creation's kiss igniting the deepest of desires,
Leaving us afterwards scorched and satisfied
and thirsty for the flames.
I long for the flames to lick my skin.
For your heat to send sparks through me.
Your warmth draws me in,
a glowing ember ever present in my heart.
Thoughts of the fire consume me.
Visions of the blaze dancing before my eyes.
A tender fusion of bodies and souls.
Creation's kiss igniting the deepest of desires,
Leaving us afterwards scorched and satisfied
and thirsty for the flames.
Published 10th Dec 2012
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10th Dec 2012 8:01pm
11th Dec 2012 4:50am
Thank you baby! :) I wasn't sure about the ending, so that's nice to hear.
10th Dec 2012 8:09pm
11th Dec 2012 4:51am
10th Dec 2012 11:01pm
You bring out so easily the artistic side of love, sex, and passion. You paint a picture with your words. I love your romantic/erotic style.
11th Dec 2012 4:52am
12th Dec 2012 7:46pm
"I long for the flames to lick my skin"
Beautiful write sweetheart!! I could feel the heat from these flames while I was reading.. Thank you.
Beautiful write sweetheart!! I could feel the heat from these flames while I was reading.. Thank you.
14th Dec 2012 11:47am
13th Dec 2012 6:21am
To personify elements can be a tricky thing and in my opinion far too many people try and come up short. You write with so much of your soul that you do the element of fire justice. As previous commentors have stated, I also felt the fire, very literally a warm, exciting, beautiful sensation in my heart.
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19th Dec 2012 7:22pm
It is nice that someone notices how I write with all of myself. :) In truth I wrote this at four am and what somewhat delusional. Haha. I am glad it still came out well enough to catch your attention, sweet Brandy!
13th Dec 2012 4:18pm
Oh Angel...you make me sigh
you captured such a rare transformative relationship so well...thanks for the memories that you set alight
Terry
you captured such a rare transformative relationship so well...thanks for the memories that you set alight
Terry
19th Dec 2012 7:23pm
To touch someone through memory and make a connection through emotion is a writer's gift. Thank you for sharing your reaction to my words. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
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