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Till Eternity
To hold you till the vibrations of my heartbeat
opens an entrance to your soul.
Knowing that my heart will be forever yours to own.
To kiss you till the earth stands still.
To listen to passionate moans escape
my lips as our once hungry souls gravitate,
till euphoria takes control and makes our bodies levitate.
Till my touch becomes the best part of your day.
Today, tomorrow and always.
For you will be my King, I'll forever serve.
Nothing less than what you deserve.
To undress you, then gently shower your body
with my sweet kisses. As your Mrs, I will forever
love you without reason.
Never any limitations, expectations, hesitations
nor conditions.
One lifetime is what I have to always ensure
that my love, my devotion, my dedictation
to you was enough that our hearts would never beat apart...
The only man whom I'll ever need.
You and I till eternity.
opens an entrance to your soul.
Knowing that my heart will be forever yours to own.
To kiss you till the earth stands still.
To listen to passionate moans escape
my lips as our once hungry souls gravitate,
till euphoria takes control and makes our bodies levitate.
Till my touch becomes the best part of your day.
Today, tomorrow and always.
For you will be my King, I'll forever serve.
Nothing less than what you deserve.
To undress you, then gently shower your body
with my sweet kisses. As your Mrs, I will forever
love you without reason.
Never any limitations, expectations, hesitations
nor conditions.
One lifetime is what I have to always ensure
that my love, my devotion, my dedictation
to you was enough that our hearts would never beat apart...
The only man whom I'll ever need.
You and I till eternity.
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4th Dec 2012 2:55pm
i feel that since my return to DU this is possibly the most beautiful piece i have had the honour to read. you have shown true tallent in the pen here. i am most grateful for the opportunity to read you again and especially this piece. appologies that i have no substance to add, i feel you nailed it.
so deserved blue skies at you Miss Blossom.
love
Al-x-
so deserved blue skies at you Miss Blossom.
love
Al-x-
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This is a great compliment :) With all the respect and admiration I have for you and your work, I would like to thank you for your time and kind words. Made my day! lol
Amazing blue skies to you my dear friend
:)
Miss Cherry_Blossom
Amazing blue skies to you my dear friend
:)
Miss Cherry_Blossom
Re: Till Eternity
4th Dec 2012 6:40pm
"Till my touch becomes the best part of your day"
Great write sweetheart... Powerful read.. Enjoyed it, thank you.
Great write sweetheart... Powerful read.. Enjoyed it, thank you.
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20th Jul 2013 1:15pm
Wow... Appears to be a true unconditional
love you have... How amazingly lucky of that guy
This is a beautiful proclamation of love so RARE, even more so than diamonds :)
love you have... How amazingly lucky of that guy
This is a beautiful proclamation of love so RARE, even more so than diamonds :)
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Re: Till Eternity
9th Nov 2013 5:25pm
Beautiful piece sweets!!
You give Great pen!!
Awesome job Hot thang!!
Sir Lancelott
You give Great pen!!
Awesome job Hot thang!!
Sir Lancelott
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21st Nov 2013 10:19pm
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Re: Till Eternity
2nd Jul 2014 6:56pm
Oh this was just too beautiful for words! Such romance, love, admiration and commitment in this ink's message.
Gorgeously written! I like your style, Cherry! Xo Pen Love~
Gorgeously written! I like your style, Cherry! Xo Pen Love~
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