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delusional confusion
this is how I show my love
I made it in my mind because
this is how an angel cries
another soul dies
this is how I lose my mind
blame it...
I'm my own surprise
mabey I should cry for help
maybe I should kill myself
maybe I'm a different breed
maybe I'm not listening
blame it on my...
fuck it
blame it on me
I made it in my mind because
this is how an angel cries
another soul dies
this is how I lose my mind
blame it...
I'm my own surprise
mabey I should cry for help
maybe I should kill myself
maybe I'm a different breed
maybe I'm not listening
blame it on my...
fuck it
blame it on me
Published 2nd Dec 2012
| Edited 9th Jan 2013
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2nd Dec 2012 6:13pm
"this is how an angle crys"
is that meant to be: "angel cries"?
and it's "lose my mind".
I like the flow, and also how you interrupted it. :)
is that meant to be: "angel cries"?
and it's "lose my mind".
I like the flow, and also how you interrupted it. :)
2nd Dec 2012 10:11pm
3rd Dec 2012 7:25am
3rd Dec 2012 8:07am
Anonymous
28th Dec 2012 1:12am
I like this. Made me think of myself. :)
28th Dec 2012 7:35am
hey thanks for dropping by and taking time to read and comment on a couple of my dribbles
thanks for your appreciation
thanks for your appreciation
8th Jan 2013 11:54am
29th Jan 2013 4:54am
I loved everyword. I think a lot of people think this way at one time or another. Lately I've felt this way but never knew how to put into words and yet you did just that. Awesome job!
29th Jan 2013 2:16pm
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