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Thinking....about You
Today...
Thoughts came rushing in on me like
heated waterfalls
because...you called
Today...
I couldn't concentrate I told
clients.. to wait
I rescheduled appointments
and was even....late because
I
heard your voice
sending silky butterflies
into the core of me...
You said...you wanna see more of me
and... I lost it.
completely....
I've been thinking about you
not stop
all day
I ...cant get the thought
of your caramel skin outa my head
in any way
Day dreaming...
about places I want your tongue
to...travel to
Daydreaming about Indigo& Blue
swirling in a mocha filled cloud
Damn... I want you...and
I think I said it out loud....
Today...I heard your voice and it
shattered me...
Like ice crystals splintering
changing my internal temperature
to Boiling...as my body starts
Pulsing in rhythm with the pace
of our conversation....
As you give me mental Stimulation...
with the sound of your voice,
making me trans-like... and I have no choice
I ....need to see you.
Damn...
Why did you call?
Thoughts came rushing in on me like
heated waterfalls
because...you called
Today...
I couldn't concentrate I told
clients.. to wait
I rescheduled appointments
and was even....late because
I
heard your voice
sending silky butterflies
into the core of me...
You said...you wanna see more of me
and... I lost it.
completely....
I've been thinking about you
not stop
all day
I ...cant get the thought
of your caramel skin outa my head
in any way
Day dreaming...
about places I want your tongue
to...travel to
Daydreaming about Indigo& Blue
swirling in a mocha filled cloud
Damn... I want you...and
I think I said it out loud....
Today...I heard your voice and it
shattered me...
Like ice crystals splintering
changing my internal temperature
to Boiling...as my body starts
Pulsing in rhythm with the pace
of our conversation....
As you give me mental Stimulation...
with the sound of your voice,
making me trans-like... and I have no choice
I ....need to see you.
Damn...
Why did you call?
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Re: Thinking....about You
2nd Nov 2012 2:20am
o.O... Conversation can be like water to a thirsty soul
Ring... Ring... My heart is in quicksand in a revelation of intense connection... Don't question the call because maybe he was thinking about you too
Ring... Ring... My heart is in quicksand in a revelation of intense connection... Don't question the call because maybe he was thinking about you too
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2nd Nov 2012 6:41am
Like your pen-name, fiery.
Fav line: "You said...you wanna see more of me." From the picture, it seems she'd gladly grant him that wish!
Fav line: "You said...you wanna see more of me." From the picture, it seems she'd gladly grant him that wish!
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re: Re: Thinking....about You
2nd Nov 2012 8:02pm
Solomon Thank you for your comments,
AND I AGREE WITH YOU ON THAT PICTURE!
FIRE
AND I AGREE WITH YOU ON THAT PICTURE!
FIRE
Re: Thinking....about You
2nd Nov 2012 12:10pm
Smokin hot. Hmm.... I'm thinking an obscene phone call is wayyyy overdue ;) Thanks for the inspiration Lady!
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2nd Nov 2012 2:21pm
Sexy sexy! Oh what the sound of that specific voice can do. I enjoyed this!
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2nd Nov 2012 8:16pm
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Anonymous
2nd Nov 2012 3:10pm
Fire,
HOT write! Loved your line:
"as my body starts
Pulsing in rhythm with the pace
of our conversation...."
Pulse on!!!
tornado
HOT write! Loved your line:
"as my body starts
Pulsing in rhythm with the pace
of our conversation...."
Pulse on!!!
tornado
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re: Re: Thinking....about You
2nd Nov 2012 8:25pm
Hey Tornado! glad you dropped by!
I love it when you grace my pages with your comments!
Fire
I love it when you grace my pages with your comments!
Fire
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