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Anamnesis
Water
cleanses
the body
not the
mind or
soul
scrub
all you
want
the stain
will not
be removed
memories
are slippery
when wet
falling on
old pain
is easy
man made
time
does not
fade the scars
of the
soul
clocks
tick away
the minds eye
sees all
skeletons haven't
a closet to hide
reflection
hurts
the past
is real
a
reality
cleanses
the body
not the
mind or
soul
scrub
all you
want
the stain
will not
be removed
memories
are slippery
when wet
falling on
old pain
is easy
man made
time
does not
fade the scars
of the
soul
clocks
tick away
the minds eye
sees all
skeletons haven't
a closet to hide
reflection
hurts
the past
is real
a
reality
Published 24th Oct 2012
| Edited 28th Oct 2012
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24th Oct 2012 6:49pm
Fantastic line here
"man made
time
does not
fade the scars
of the
soul "
Nikki you have your poetic freak on (I have no idea what that means but it sounds cool lol)
Keep on keeping on
Marcus
"man made
time
does not
fade the scars
of the
soul "
Nikki you have your poetic freak on (I have no idea what that means but it sounds cool lol)
Keep on keeping on
Marcus
24th Oct 2012 9:12pm
24th Oct 2012 9:20pm
I thought out was all collaged very well
The last stanza was beautiful, it really touched me
Great job hun, loved it
The last stanza was beautiful, it really touched me
Great job hun, loved it
24th Oct 2012 9:24pm
24th Oct 2012 11:13pm
Girl your flow is amazing... I am very serious when I say you need to write your poetry book Nikkie
You have a talent that more people need to experience.
Fire
You have a talent that more people need to experience.
Fire
25th Oct 2012 2:04pm
25th Oct 2012 3:24am
25th Oct 2012 2:04pm
`Nikkiemoe
I like it, it's easy reading simple and to the point. I don't have anything constructive for you, maybe a suggestion for you to mull over.
"scrub
all you
want
the stain
will not
be removed"
Just one word really, from pain to stain. It's a little deeper than pain. that's about it.
rerally liking the direction your moving in.
good stuff. shine on.
ps, great choice of title.
I like it, it's easy reading simple and to the point. I don't have anything constructive for you, maybe a suggestion for you to mull over.
"scrub
all you
want
the stain
will not
be removed"
Just one word really, from pain to stain. It's a little deeper than pain. that's about it.
rerally liking the direction your moving in.
good stuff. shine on.
ps, great choice of title.
25th Oct 2012 3:20pm
:)
thank you!
perhaps your right about stain!
yeah i love that word anamnesis and Platos whole theory
thank you!
perhaps your right about stain!
yeah i love that word anamnesis and Platos whole theory
Anonymous
25th Oct 2012 5:37pm
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