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Im sick of living with my fears
Im running away as the clouds spill their tears
Why cant I find some peace of mind?
Why does it seem like the whole worlds blind?
When will I see through the lies?
It’s the same thing every time!
So drop to my knees
And beg to end my life
Because nothing is real
Just leave me here to die
Just pull the trigger back
And say the last goodbyes
Im running away as the clouds spill their tears
Why cant I find some peace of mind?
Why does it seem like the whole worlds blind?
When will I see through the lies?
It’s the same thing every time!
So drop to my knees
And beg to end my life
Because nothing is real
Just leave me here to die
Just pull the trigger back
And say the last goodbyes
Published 20th Oct 2012
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20th Oct 2012 5:49am
A good read overall. Thought it needed a bit more desperation though. It didn't quite create the picture or emotion in my head but I liked it =]
20th Oct 2012 6:48am
thanks .//_^" if you want the whole desperation thing then check out my poem "Unforgiven" :)
