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I feel like I'm watching myself on a movie screan
because nothing I do seems real
a killer strikes and I forget to scream
he doesn't know I cant feel
because nothing I do seems real
a killer strikes and I forget to scream
he doesn't know I cant feel
Published 18th Oct 2012
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18th Oct 2012 4:03am
27th Mar 2013 1:37am
Short and sweet, yet so many implications. One thing about poetry just never ceases to amaze me: the way that one person can go into every detail and make a four-page long poem about the same thing the guy sitting next to him in math class wrote four lines about, and they're both equally powerful.
1st Apr 2013 1:28pm
