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Please design
Please design
A crazy path
With glass trails
And vivid trees
Made of mirrors
That steer
Me backwards
But reflect
Whats forward
I will follow
The twisted forest
Your fortress
made of time
Please design
This for me...
A crazy path
With glass trails
And vivid trees
Made of mirrors
That steer
Me backwards
But reflect
Whats forward
I will follow
The twisted forest
Your fortress
made of time
Please design
This for me...
Published 11th Oct 2012
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11th Oct 2012 6:35pm
11th Oct 2012 6:37pm
11th Oct 2012 6:55pm
It's one of those works that can be as complex as you make it. The main contradiction (design something for me that twists and turns rather than a clear straight path) leaves it open for interpretation. I like it. And welcome. :)
11th Oct 2012 10:24pm
Really likeing this to i love how ambiguous this poem is. really great stuff very talented you are.
Cheers
Marcus
Cheers
Marcus
11th Oct 2012 10:59pm
It sounds like a maze of mirrors, definitely a fortress that would consume time.
Quite a cryptic piece, I like. A wonderful pen.
Quite a cryptic piece, I like. A wonderful pen.
12th Oct 2012 00:30am
Anonymous
12th Oct 2012 2:05am
I like this :) I like pieces that are left open for the readers to interpret!
well done
well done
12th Oct 2012 5:11am
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