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Pastel world
Thinking back
The sky changed
In yellow waves
Orange shades
Tangerine days
Squirting sunlight
Like fruit juices
The horizon dances
In the misty background
Everything works
In my pastel world...
The sky changed
In yellow waves
Orange shades
Tangerine days
Squirting sunlight
Like fruit juices
The horizon dances
In the misty background
Everything works
In my pastel world...
Published 11th Oct 2012
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11th Oct 2012 6:33pm
11th Oct 2012 9:16pm
11th Oct 2012 10:02pm
I love how all your poems remind me of great art.. I to have a poem I compare to pastel, it's called, "pastel of person (if a person)". You are one of my new favorites..
11th Oct 2012 10:21pm
Fantastic wprk, matey really digging your work
look forward to reading more
cheers
Marcus
look forward to reading more
cheers
Marcus
11th Oct 2012 10:56pm
11th Oct 2012 11:58pm
12th Oct 2012 00:28am
12th Oct 2012 00:37am
awesome. reminds me of something.. not sure what but still it is wonderfully awesome.
12th Oct 2012 1:34am
great piece... I loved the line,
Squirting sunlight
Like fruit juices
nice...
Squirting sunlight
Like fruit juices
nice...
12th Oct 2012 2:10am
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12th Oct 2012 2:31am
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12th Oct 2012 4:33pm
Amazing imagery, I love the picture it creates :) Definitely reading some of your other work :)
12th Oct 2012 7:32pm
