deepundergroundpoetry.com
Beneath the street lights
I walk the well-worn pavement of this town
a ghost
that has lingered too long
without speaking
© Indie Adams 2012
a ghost
that has lingered too long
without speaking
© Indie Adams 2012
Published 7th Oct 2012
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 0
comments 7
reads 803
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
7th Oct 2012 7:59am
Indie
captures the consuming magnitude of meloncholy one feels deep within, bruised n bled.
thnxx fr this short intense share.
~uma.
7th Oct 2012 8:34am
Thank you so much summultima :D I think this is my shortest poem to date, I really glad it works for you.
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
7th Oct 2012 1:11pm
It says alot without saying much. I have only recently(thanks to Ophie) started to appreciate these short but abundantly sweet pieces.
Duncan
Duncan
7th Oct 2012 1:39pm
Thank you Duncan :) I was planning to turn this into something long but it stood more powerfully on it's own. I'm not really one for short poems, but with the right words they can say so much.
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
7th Oct 2012 2:40pm
7th Oct 2012 10:51pm
8th Oct 2012 7:06pm
